PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN - Page 7

This concept is so engrossing, I'm loving it already.

Pls do me a favour
Pm me whenever you update pls pls girly ...
And I like to go with 3rd option
Loved it!!!!

Beautiful beginning Naina!!

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Naina wow prologue was just so awesome,I am just waiting to get updates of this story so interesting ,loved it ,pls do write it my dear and do keep the second title ,I loved it a lot😃😃

Hey Jenni..🤗
Thanks a lot for appreciating my dear..😃
I am working on the next update..😛

Originally posted by: pakh

prologue is amazing..would love to read it and second title is good

Hello..thanks for reading and commenting dear..😃

Originally posted by: anu91

All ur stories are my favorite dear...

But I think I going to love this story more than any of ur series...

Plz plz cont soon...

Do pm me don forget...

I loved 3rd title...

Thanks a looot anu dear😃😃
I wont forget, will surely send PM when I update😊

Originally posted by: sarathy321

Naina...u r superb...
I can really feel the characters pain while reading ur piece of writing...
I am really a fan of u...
And r u the same who writes mehbeer story also?
Waiting for next part dear...

Thank you soo much dear🤗
I am glad to know that you could feel their pain😊
I dont write on Mehbeer dear..I am not even in that forum😛

Originally posted by: nikhathfatima

amazing prologue
plz continue soon
3 tittle sounds good

Thank you soo much dear..😃😃
I will try to update soon😊

Originally posted by: -Ros-

Interesting prologue, looking forward to reading this one!

I liked the 1st option for title- something different and it seems the moon plays significance in the story. 😊

Hey Rosu dear..🤗 I am glad you find it interesting😃😃 Thank you so much

Originally posted by: a_uma

different concept... interesting..👏.. I like the second title..

I am glad you loved it dear..thanks a lot😃😃