PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN

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Jamina Mohammed

@Snowflakes.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

And about tittle

I liked both 1&2 one

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Great concept nd a good start.

Plz continue soon as we wld like to see the characters develop.
3rd is good.

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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Just amazing

Tnx for pm

I will go with 3 option for title

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amimus

@amimus

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Very interesting start. I think you should keep the second title. I am eagerly waiting for the updates

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

NAINA u won't allow me to concentrate on studies no..

Already I was on for ur 3 wrks bt this one I cnt leave out

Wow that's a sticking concept bebs.

wait wait pratham was sanskar? Swara was zaara? And laksh was rashid? Right so it means both wished smthng before their death.

But it looks like laksh ki wish puri hui swara is his grlfrnd I guess

Yaarr mera sanskar ... 😕 pehle Mar gya..ab use zarra opss swara ko dhudna hoga...🥺

Grrr... This honour killings suckss ..(no offence) but really just for sake for different cultures u cnt separate lovers.

Hatssoff off NAINA for taking up such nice topic doesn't matter if its just for prolouge really lovely.

Moon scene really made me cry. Swara n sanskar always rocks.

FOR TITLE I THINK ZINDA REHTI H UNKI MOHBATEIN WILL SUIT THE BEST.. REST UPTO U .😊

Mmm it was really nice 👏

Please update asap

Love
Niyati

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Edited by Niyatiswaragini - 9 years ago

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Saumya

@Sparklle801

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Our love will live on forever , i like this title more

Now about story i must say you are a wonderful writer pls continue and pls pm me whenever you update if possible

Pls continue soon

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Nithya.G

@Nithya.G

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

awesome update dr 👏

Our Love Will Live On Forever.. loved it alot 😳

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Naina 🤗

You had me from the reference to The Alchemist and The Secret- both part of my favourites collection and I credit The Secret openly as having changed my entire perspective to life a few years ago. I need to stop or this will get too long. Lovely concept - I love the idea of this timeless love story spanning births. I got a lot of Veer-Zaara feels from the past birth bit already (good thing) and so looking forward big time. I like the 2nd title myself:) Update quick or I will hound you!