PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#511

awesome...

But how r they continuing to meet???

Its long time for sadhi,right??

Too exitied for the next part...

Continue soon..

Thank you for the pm..

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Esha

@_Esha_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#512

Res 😊
This update needs a huge amount of appreciation 😃
Just love you naina 😳

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Naina, this update was intensely composed 😊 you perfectly described...
How each of them experienced some invisible attraction 😆 just like the hug you say, its a simple pull of love..and the exchanging of stares in the office was incredible..

The way sanskar was possessive over swara during the eve-teasing bought a smile on my face 😊 .. this chapter was amazing 👏

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arathy

@sarathy321

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Posted: 9 years ago

#513

Superb update

Pls update next part soon. ...eagerly awaiting for it

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aamias

@aamias

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#514

naina, i really love u for this story

why dear u update it so late.

i really like ur story . plz update it soon i feel miserable.

Here Swasan chemistry is awesome

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#515

Awesome update. In this update we got beautiful swasan scenes. In the way he saved her from the goons,it was visible that he wanted to protect swara from all the problems. The eternity of love was visible in this update. Ek doosare keliye hi bani huy hai ye dono. Par vo dono apne pyar ko samaj nahi pa raha hoon. True love will always win. It was a nice update because in this update you beautifully portrayed the depth of there love. I really loved it. Thank you so much for giving such a beautiful update. Waiting for your next update

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dilwali

@dilwali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#516

Amazing work loved it read both parts now its awesum plz update soon

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SIMI

@simsen23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#517

Naina
superb one
they fell for each other already...
Swara is just into the idea of love with laksh..
But she is in love with sanskar
Waiting for next one
love
simi 😊