PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN

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Posted: 9 years ago

#531

Naina...i already said I'm Officially ur Fan...very well described...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chechi asusual awesome update. So he came to meet her only. Their dressing was finalised and as swara likes tat sanskar take a look at tat design. I loved the swasan moments also. He was protective towards her. Both had feelings for them. Bt they r nt conveying n nt even want to accept it.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#533

Hey Nainu...🤗 🤗

Would you be updating today?

Looking forward to it...😊

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Hello my dear readers, I am in a hurry to update, so I wont be able to reply individually to your comments..Please don't feel bad..😊
I have read each and every comment and I loved them all..Thank you sooo much everyone🤗 for reading the previous update and I appreciate your likes and comments, wholeheartedly..Here is the next chapter for you all to read..😃😳
Hope you all enjoy reading it too😉

PART 6

Swara told him her apartment address and the he asked the driver to take them there first. A strained silence prevailed inside the car, after that.
Swara was thinking, " Why did it feel so right, inside his arms..I have never felt this much contended even while hugging my parents or Lakshya..It was not just contentment, it was something else, a feeling which I cannot explain.." She cast a sideways glance at Sanskaar who was now looking out of the car window.
Sanskaar's mind was full of questions, " Why do I lose my resolve around this particular girl, Swara..It felt so ethereal, to feel her inside my arms..And when she pulled away, I felt as if my world was crumbling out of my hold.."
Sanskaar looked sideways and saw Swara gazing at him, their eyes met.
Sw: (smiles) Thank you, Mr. Maheshwari..
Sanskaar just kept on looking into her eyes and just nodded in response. The air around them seemed to be charged with a primitive energy, and both of them felt enchanted by its force. Swara was the first person to break the eye contact, and she looked away, feeling afraid that she will lose her heart to this handsome man, Sanskaar Maheshwari.
"Woh kisi aur ke mangetar hain, aur main Lakshya se pyaar karti hoon", she tried to remind her heart, rather forcefully.
Sa: Swara..
Swara gasped and turned towards him, fearing that he had heard her thoughts. Her eyes were wide like saucers and he was momentarily lost in them. Without blinking, their eyes talked again, about the long lost secrets which were a part of their souls.
Swara waited for him to say something, but at that precise moment, the driver stopped the car. She looked outside and noticed that they had reached their apartment complex. She looked at Sanskaar again and said, with a grateful smile,
Sw: I can't thank you enough Mr.Maheshwari..
Sanskaar's eyes were fixed intently upon her dazzling eyes and slowly her smile faded. Swara's gaze travelled slowly from his right eye to his left eye and then repeated the pattern. It was as if their eyes didn't want to stop this silent conversation, their eyes didn't want to leave each other, at this very moment.
And then Sanskaar's phone rang, it was Uttara. Swara looked away, feeling embarrassed at her prolonged eye-locks with Mr. Maheshwari and he answered the call.
Sa: Hello, Uttara..
Ut: Bhaiyya..Kahan reh gaye aap..Main aur Kavita bhabhi aapka intezaar kar rahe hain..
Sa: Haan Uttara..Main abhi hotel pahunchta hoon..
By that time, Swara had got out of the car, and was waiting for him to finish speaking. Sanskaar disconnected the call and looked at her.
Sa: (politely) Kya main tumhein ghar tak chod doon..
Swara was delighted at the thought, but she thought that it was not necessary.
Sw: Err..Nahin..It's ok..Mr.Maheshwari..Please don't be late because of me..(smiles politely)
Sa: (nods) its ok..I will manage..Main chalta hoon tumhare saath..
But as Sanskaar got out of the car, Lakshya came out of the apartment complex and he walked towards Swara. He didn't seem to notice Sanskaar.
La: Swara..Kitni der kardi tumne aane mein..I was just about to call you, to ask if you were ok..
Swara looked at Lakshya and her eyes filled with tears again. Sanskaar was watching the duo now, quite intently.
Sw: (worriedly) No Lakshya..I was not ok..Ek aawara ladka mujhe chedne laga aur phir..
Lakshya noticed the fear in her eyes and he just took her inside his arms.
La: (alarmed) Oh god..Tum teek toh ho..(hugging her)
Sw: (hugs him back)
Sanskaar clenched his fists and his breathing turned shallow. He just couldn't bear the sight in front of his eyes.
Sw: Haan..aur phir Mr.Maheshwari came and he saved me..
It was then that Lakshya registered Sanskaar's presence.
La: Mr. Maheshwari..!!
He left Swara and came around the car to thank Sanskaar. Lakshya took Sanskaar's right hand inside his hands, and looked at him gratefully.
La: Thank you, Sir..I don't know how to thank you..!
Gritting his teeth, Sanskaar thought angrily, "But I know..Just stay away from her.."
La: Aap wahan time pe pahunch gaye..Thank you so much, Sir..! (heaves a deep sigh, with a smile)
Sanskaar nodded without a smile and looked at Swara with a murderous look. He was angry at her for hugging Lakshya. Swara couldn't understand why he was looking at her like that, and she tried to smile. Sanskaar nodded at her too and got into the car without a word.
Swara came and stood with Lakshya as they watched Sanskaar's car sped away. Lakshya put his arm around her shoulders protectively, but they were unaware of a pair of fierce eyes which were glaring at them through the rearview mirror.
A multitude of questions were swarming inside his head.
" What is he doing in Swara's apartment complex? "... " Do they say together, are they in a live-in relationship..?"..." Why did she allow him to hug her?"... "And why the hell did she hug him back?!"
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That night, after dinner, Swara was in her bedroom, explaining the eve-teaser incident to Ragini. Swara had asked Lakshya not to tell anything to her parents or his parents. So she couldn't share it with Ragini earlier, when she had arrived home, late. Swara just informed Sharmishta and Shekhar that she had to wait for a taxi for quite some time and they had believed her.
And now after hearing everything, Ragini was really worried.
Ra: Thank god, Swara..Tumhein kuch bhi toh nahin hua..(cups Swara's face)
Sw: (touches Ragini's hands) Haan, Ragini..(looks away, with relief)
Ra: (puts her arm around Swara) Sach mein..Mr. Maheshwari ek farishta banke aagaye wahan pe tumhein bachaane keliye.."
Swara smiled at her sister's words and nodded, but didn't say anything. She was thinking about him, his magnetic eyes, and the way she had felt secure inside his arms. She hadn't told anything to Ragini or Lakshya about their hug, and she wondered why.
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Sanskaar entered into his hotel room, after their dinner together. Kavita and Uttara shared the room next to his.
He changed into his night wear and then walked towards the balcony for a breath of fresh air. Swara's closeness with Lakshya still suffocated him. He was disturbed all through his dinner and thankfully neither Kavi nor Uttara had noticed it. But deep inside, he knew that it was because, his face never showed his emotions. He had been successful in masking his expressions, ever since the death of his beloved father Durgaprasad Maheshwari. That was 10 years ago. At that time, his mother had wanted him to be so much strong, too much competent and always succesful in his life, and so he just set himself into the mould, she had prepared for him. Sanskaar had always wondered, if his life would have been the same, if his father was still alive. The transformation from a fun-loving 18 year old boy to a sharp-focused businessman, was not easy. It had cost him so much -- his friendships, his cheerfulness, simple joys such as going out for movies, road-trips, partying and much more. Even if his attitude was casual towards life in his teenage, he had always wanted to assist his father in his business. He was proud of his father, in every way, but he was unprepared for his father's untimely demise. And then it was time to step inside his father's shoes -- to be the master of the Maheshwari empire, and he knew he should become like his father, in every possible way. He knew that his father would be proud of him now. But was he proud of himself, he wondered now as he stood near the railing of the balcony, gazing outside.
He gazed up at the moon and he felt Swara's presence near him. He looked sideways, feeling cheerful, expecting to see her. But she was not there, and now he realized what he had longed for since childhood, while looking at the moon. He realized, he had been waiting for her -- Swara, all his life.
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Swara was standing in the balcony of her bedroom, alone. Ragini left only some minutes before and Swara loved the feel of night breeze around her body. Slowly, she raised her face towards the moon and suddenly she had a strange feeling as if Sanskaar Maheshwari was beside her. She closed her eyes and she had a vision. She was lying on the cemented ground, of a terrace, and Sanskaar was lying beside her. They were holding hands and were gazing at the moon, together.
Swara opened her eyes in a jiffy and was surprised at her hallucination. The terrace felt strangely familiar, but she was sure she had never seen that place here in Mumbai. And what surprised her was this Sanskaar was so young, he was only around 18 years old.
Sw: I think I am feeling sleepy, that is why I am dreaming all these now..
But little did Swara know that she had envisaged one of the moon-gazing nights of young Zaara and Pratham at the terrace of their apartment in Chandni Chowk, many years ago.
She grinned at her silly thoughts and walked inside to her bedroom. As she lay down on her bed, she tried to think about Lakshya. A shy smile appeared on her face and she whispered,
Sw: I love you Lakshya..I know I love only you..No one can take your place in my life..
But then she turned on her bed and lay on her side, with a slight frown.
Sw: But how will I know, ke tum kya chaahte ho, Lakshya..? Main darti hoon, tumse yeh kehne se, ke main tumse pyaar karti hoon aur sirf aur sirf tumse shaadi karna chaahti hoon..
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Sa: I love you Swaraa..I love you..I have loved you, even before seeing you..
With a painful feeling, he realized this was the reason why he felt distant with Kavita all the time. Kavita was beautiful, educated, talented, caring, cultured, and his above all, his mother's choice for him -- but she was not Swara. It was as simple as that.
He knew that his mother will not be happy with his decision. But he also knew that he had always listened to her, all his life. He never ever went against her decisions. He has lived his life for the sake of his family till now. But now it was time, he did something for himself.
But then he thought about Lakshya, and his heart constricted with even more pain. He shut his eyes tightly and thought defiantly, "No..I can't let him have her..Swara meri hain..Sirf meri.."
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Three more weeks passed and now it was time to begin the wedding preparations of Uttara Maheshwari.

Udaipur, 10.30 a.m

The Maheshwaris and Kavita Singhania had already arrived from Kolkata on the previous night itself.
Swara, Lakshya and their whole team consisting of caterers, florists, decorators, dress designers, make-up professionals, stylists, DJ, musical equipments, rental equipment and other wedding necessities, arrived at the wedding venue.
This time, Sanskaar was there to receive them, at the entrance of the haveli itself. He was wearing a nice turquoise blue shirt with an ivory coloured formal suit and pants. His heart warmed at the sight of Swara, as she got down from the car. She was wearing a pair of jeans and a red sleeveless kurti with delicate hand embroidery detailing. Lakshya also got down after her, and Sanskaar's blood boiled at the sight of him. He was wearing a black shirt and maroon linen pants.
They walked towards him and he went forward to shake hands with them. After a polite handshake with Lakshya, when Sanskaar's hands clasped Swara's hands, he could almost feel the thrill of his heart beats. Swara smiled at him and he smiled back, quite happily.
La: Toh Mr. Maheshwari..We have to start our work today itself..By tomorrow, the guests will be flying in..And we have taken care of their transportation till the venue..If you give your permission, we will ask the decorators to start their work..And we both (indicating Swara) will take care of the room arrangements according to the invite list..
Sa: You are right Lakshya, you all can start your work..
At that time, Annapurna, Kavita and Uttara arrived in their car, after their visit to their ancestral temple, in order to seek the blessings of their 'Kuldevi'. Kavita was wearing a simple yellow chiffon sari with a mirror worked green blouse, where as Uttara was wearing a purple coloured anarkali suit with silver embellishments. Kavita and Uttara came and hugged Swara when they saw her. Swara was so happy to notice that they had dropped all pretense of formalities and she was touched by their gesture.
Ka: So nice to see you again, Swara..
Ut: Haan..(giggles)
Sw: Hello, Kavita M'am, Uttara M'am..(grins widely)
And then she noticed Annapurna Maheshwari, who was a beautiful woman, who had a queen like aura about her, even if she was wearing light coloured clothes. (she is a widow in the story) Swara and Lakshya joined their palms in a 'Namaste' and she too greeted them in the same way with a nice smile.
Sw: Namste M'am..Bahut khushi hui aapse milke..(smiles pleasantly)
An: Kavita aur Uttara bahut saari baatein kar rahi thi tumhare baare mein..Aur tum Lakshya ho na..(looks at Lakshya)
La: Jee M'am..(smiles)
Meanwhile, Sanskaar had his eyes only for Swara. Three weeks ago, he had vowed to himself that whatever may happen, he will make her his wife. And when Sanskaar Maheshwari wanted something, he always made sure he got it.
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By the afternoon, Swara was really tired. She had been flitting along the long corridors of the huge haveli, from morning till noon, allotting the rooms for the guests. Now, she turned towards the two housekeeping staffs who were there to assist her.
Sw: Tum log jaake lunch karo..Main thodi der mein aati hoon..
They nodded and left. Swara walked downstairs and went towards the bedroom which was allotted to her. She had to pass Sanskaar's Study room, to reach there. And this was not a mere coincidence, it was all well planned by Sanskaar. And he had made sure that Lakshya's bedroom was much far away.
Swara wanted to charge her cell phone, since its battery level was very low. As she passed along the Study room door, Sanskaar saw her walk past, from inside. He knew that she will be returning soon and he waited for it.
Just as she made her way back, he stepped out of the Study at the same time and joined her, in a convincing demeanour. They were walking together along the huge drawing room area. It was elaborately decorated with multi coloured draperies and mirror disc curtains. But the room was deserted, since the decorating staff had already left for lunch.
Sa: Swara.. (pleasantly)
Sw: (smiles) Mr. Maheshwari..
Sa: How is everything going on..?
Sw: Everything is fine, Sir..! I just finished off allotting rooms to over 35 guests. Now there are 30 more remaining in my list. I will cover them in the afternoon session..(smiles confidently)
Sa: (nods) Perfect..! ( smiles appreciatively)
Swara blushed at his compliment and her smile widened automatically.
Sa: Tum abhi lunch karne ke liye jaa rahi ho na..?
Sw: Haan..Aur aap..?
Sa: Of course..Yes..! Waise Swara..Main tumse kuch poonchna chahta hoon..
Sw: Kya..?
Sa: Tum Mumbai mein akeli rehti ho ya, family ke saath..?
Sw: Family ke saath..Mere ghar mein Maa, Papa aur meri choti behen bhi hain..
Sanskaar was very much relieved hearing this. So she was not in a live-in relationship with him.
Sa: Acha toh phir, uss din Lakshya tumhare apartment ke neeche kya kar raha tha..?
Sw: He is my neighbour and you know what, hum childhood friends hain..! Tab se hain, jab se hum 2 saal ke the..(delightful smile)
Sa: Acha..! (happy smile)
Sanskaar felt another wave of relief washing through him.
Sw: (excitedly) Haan..! We are like best friends forever..!! (shrugs childishly)
Sa: (excitedly) Toh phir teek hain..!
He said to himself, more than her. Swara took some time to register what he was trying to ask.
Sw: Ek minute..Ek minute..(frowns) Waise aap kya soch rahe the..?!
Sanskaar's face showed guilt at once. And then realization dawned to her. He had suspected that she and Lakshya were having a live-in relationship.
Sw: (eyes widened) Ooo Mmm Ggg..!! Aapne socha ke main aur Lakshya..! (shouts aloud) Hawww...I don't believe this..!
He didn't know why he did it, but in a swift move, he just held her shoulder with left hand and shut her mouth with his right hand, tightly.
Sa: (hisses) Keep quiet, Swara..!!
Swara widened her eyes and gazed at him making helpless noises. But he was busy looking around to make sure if anyone had heard her.
Sw: Mmm..mmm..
Sanskaar realized what he was doing and he took off his hand instantly. Swara heaved deep breaths and tried to regain her composure, while Sanskaar watched her with an apologetic expression.
Sa: I am so sorry, Swara..! I didn't mean to..I am sorry..
But Swara just laughed out loud, finding the whole situation funny. The way she laughed, was so contagious that he too began to laugh heartily. They laughed and laughed until their tummies ached.
Sw: (clutching her stomach, and panting) Huh..huh..Ok..Stop..Bas..Main ab aur nahin hass sakti..!
Sa: (tears in his eyes, pants) Huh.. Swara..ya..you are right..! Main bhi..Huh..! (clutches his tummy too)
Sanskaar was surprised at the easy camaraderie he was beginning to feel with her. He never felt this happy with anyone else, and he had not laughed like this in years. It was as if they had known each other forever.
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End of PART 6
Hope you all enjoyed the update..
Plzz share your views..
Love,
Naina😊

Edited by hp_2006 - 9 years ago

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I loved this part... Now Sanskaar Maheshwari has decided to make her his wife and his wife she will be... And Swara having flashes of her past life wow that was a nice throw...
Eerr is this going to be like swara thinks she loves Lakshya but Lakshya does not because in tis past life he had asked that zara should love him but what about his own feelings o prayers for that had been made... Eerr I know I am thinking too much but I love cracking stories hope you dont mind

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Esha

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Naina, this update is just too awesome...i mean the jealousy of sanskaar for swalak's hug...his confrontation thereafter, his vows ...all was just awesome..this chapter was fun to read...please please Naina my dear update the ''Pyaar hota hai deewana sanam'' & '' Aadha ishq'' soon...i love your stories..they are too addictive!! 😉

Esha 😳

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Awesome update Naina! So Sanskaar has sworn to have Swara only. Ab aayega maza. And he's jealous of Swa---Lak too. Amazing! SwaSan camaraderie is awesome! Loved it<3<3

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#538

Superb update naina...

Loved it...

Continue soon...

Thnks 4 d pm...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Res 😊 will un res tomo morning. It was fabulous and intense, Nainu...🤗

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Hi Nainu...🤗

I just loved the passion and intensity of this update. Swara and Sanskaar were just lost in each others eyes, from the time he rescued her from that goon, till the time he dropped her back to her home. And Sanskaar felt so stifled and enraged when he saw Lakshya hugging her to comfort her (though it seemed like just a casual, friendly hug to me. 😛). Sanskaar has realized the extent of his feelings for Swara, how much he loves her, how he is so possessive about her.

I liked that touch about how they were both thinking of each other that night when they were seeing the beauty of the full moon. Sanskaar has decided that he is going to make Swara his wife...😉 And whatever Sanskaar Maheshwari decides, he makes sure to achieve!

Swara too, while she still believes she is in love with Lakshya and wants to marry him, has started feeling very conscious of, and attracted to Sanskaar; and is also having flashes of their love in their past life! That connection to their earlier romance was beautifully described.

I loved the whole setting you described of their meeting at the start of Uttara's wedding festivities, 3 weeks after the occurrence of the earlier events. I just wish Sanskaar could have utilized that time to explain to Kavita he wasn't in love with her. If she comes to know so late, she might turn negative 😕, which I pray she doesn't!

Very smart of Sanskaar, I must say, to allocate Swara a bedroom close to his study room, and push Lakshya's room far away! And the pure and unadulterated relief and joy he felt when Swara clarified Lakshya and she were childhood friends and neighbors, definitely not living together, was so moving! He was utterly overjoyed to know that she lived with her Dad & Mom and kid Sis! 😆 Poor guy...he would feel very hurt when he finds out that Swara loves (or at least thinks she loves) Lakshya...but anyway he is going to win her over with his intense adoration and devotion for her! The easy laughter and camaraderie between SwaSan was lovely to read...😳

I can't wait for the next chapter! So eager to find out how Sanskaar goes about his plan to win Swara. And also to find out how he manages to release himself from the engagement to Kavita; and whether Ragini proposes to Lakshya! 😆

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Tapathi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Superb yaar...very nice...iam enjoying it...

Omg...! Iam smiling and I didn't noticed my dad watching me...😲 thanq god he didn't said anything...well written...wow...!then he decided to marry swara...very nice...very excited when swara starts feeling for him...wow...!superb yaar really really fantastic...👏

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