PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN - Page 4

hey naina...really nice concept..and story se pata lag gaya hai k aage kya hone wala hai..teeno ki wish puri hogi..but bas pratham ki jagah laksh aa jayega aur zaara k husband ki jagah sanskar...swasan ki yaha shadi hogi but us main pyaar nahi hoga..kyu k pyar swara laksh se karegi..but end main pratham aur zara ek hoge..b/c swasan ko ek dusre se sacche pyaar ka ehsaas hoga...but jo unhone wish kiya tha god se ..god wo bhi to fullfill karega na teeno ka...really nice story..maza aayega read karne main...i think 3 name was perfact...thx for pm.

Loved the start chechi. Emotional start. He died in tat birth she was living thinking of him. After 5 years he reborn for her as he prayed in his last breath. And the other day she too died and her husband also loved her. So he too prayed in his next birth he should be her friend her love n all. Later they grown up n so sanskar s pratham and laksh ll b radhika ah. Nice emotional update chechi. Loving this concept too. Title 2 nd 3rd I like chechi.

Wow Awsm stry .. i loved itt .. 3 tittle I loved itt ..
i love reading ffs ua .. lyk Ye jawani h deewani .. ... n ua other ff plxzz pst dat ffs nxt part soon .. i love d way u write .. :)

Superb prologue

Nice start..

Nice start.. waiting for your next update

superb story & awsome prologue...
cont soon...
2nd title is good

thnks for pm

very nice start...so Sanskar will play Rashid khan im assuming this

Nice concept...do continue...and the 3rd title is good..

Wow!! What an Awesome Prolouge
Naina you nailed it 🤗
I really don't have words for it 😊
Was this one you were talking about??
English Novel based.
You are a brilliant writer.
So god fullfilled everyone wish ryt swara sanky same religion
and Laksh is her best friend who oo this is really interesting.
Pinne enk thonn here ragini ll like him too maybe
You know I love to read reincarnation stories
Egarely waiting to know how ll they meet again
Excited for their First meeting 😳 😃

Update soon nainuzz I can't wait at all 😛