PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN

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Posted: 9 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: pakh
hey all parts are written very nicely sorry for late reply and thanks for pm
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#462

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Originally posted by: aamias
what happened to u dear why no updates

I had been a little busy dear..
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Hi all..I am back with the PART 4 update..Sorry for being late..😳I was a little busy..Hope you all forgive me..From now on will update regularly..😊😊

PART 4

La: Swara..I guess ab humein jaana chahiye..Site inspection bhi ho gaya..
He turned towards Sanskaar and Kavita.
La: (smiling politely) So Mr.Maheshwari, and Kavita M'am..Thank you so much for co-operating with us..And seriously, we had a great time..
Ka: (smiles) Par aap log humaare saath lunch karne ke baad chale jaayiyega, Lakshya..
La: Nahin M'am..Humein ab jaana hoga..Lunch hum kahin baahar restaurant se karenge..
But then to everyone's surprise, Sanskaar interrupted their conversation.
Sa: (seriously) Its already 2.45..Humare saath lunch karke chale jaana bas..!
And when he noticed Swara looking at him with gratitude shining in her curious eyes, Sanskaar felt really pleased with himself and his offer.
But what he didn't notice was the shocked look on Kavita's face.
As they made their way towards the dining hall, she couldn't help noticing that Sanskaar was in a pleasant mood. He was not talking anything, but still she could feel the change in his body language and his face expression.
Kavita thought, "May be he is happy with Uttara's marriage preparations, and these Wedding Planners", and she smiled to herself.
While they sat down for lunch, the table was laden with delicious looking Rajasthan dishes such that daal-baati churma, gatte ki sabzi, pulao, paneer curry, missi roti, garlic chutney, juicy sweet rasgullas etc.
They didn't talk much while having the food, but Sanskaar's eyes kept darting towards Swara, quite unintentionally. He was wondering, what was the matter with him, and he tried to busy himself with the food.
Swara could sense his eyes upon her whenever he looked, even though her eyes were on her plate. She was also surprised by the fact that her heart was urging her to look towards him, but she resisted the urge whatsoever.
Afterwards, when they all walked towards the drawing room, Lakshya turned to thank Sanskaar and Kavita, for the delicious lunch.
La: Thank you Mr. Maheshwari and Kavita M'am..The lunch was simply awesome..
Ka: (smiles) It's our pleasure..
Sanskaar simply nodded at him and then glanced at Swara. She smiled at him denoting her gratitude, Sanskaar's heart skipped a beat, and he returned the smile, automatically.
La: Teek hain..ab hum chalte hain..(turns to Swara) Kyun, Swara..
Sw: (nods) Haan, Lakshya..(smiles)
Sanskaar felt a slightly painful twinge in his heart, Swara felt it too, and she looked at him instantly.
La: We will be in touch, Mr. Maheshwari and Kavita M'am..(looks at Kavita and nods with a smile)
Lakshya shook hands with Sanskaar and then Kavita. Swara too shook hands with Kavita and then she held out her hand to Sanskaar. Their eyes met for a few seconds as Sanskaar shook hands with her. But when his hand-clasp lasted longer than was necessary, Swara ended it with a nervous smile.
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Later, as Swara and Lakshya were in the back seat of the company car, on their way back to Mumbai, Swara's thoughts trailed back towards her encounters with Mr. Maheshwari in the haveli.
For once, she was unaware of Lakshya's presence beside her. She had completely forgotten about her plan to propose him.
La: Swara..
Swara was startled, hearing his voice.
Sw:(turns her face to him) Haan..!
La: (smiles)Kya soch rahi ho..?
Sw: (shrugs with a smile) Err..Kuch bhi toh nahin, Lakshya..!
La: (frowns) Kuch toh hua hain..Subah se main notice kar raha hoon..Jhoot mat bolo haan tum mujhse..Bachpan se jaanta hoon main tumhein..
Sw: (looks into his eyes) Kuch bhi nahin hua hain, Lakshya..Main sach keh rahin hoon..(smiles affirmatively)
Swara didn't knew why she was hiding her thoughts about Sanskaar from Lakshya. She never used to hide anything from him, this was happening for the first time. Today morning also she didn't tell him the truth, when he asked about why she was nervous after coming back from the study room, after her very first encounter with Sanskaar Maheshwari.
She felt guilty instantly, and she decided to tell him everything. But then,
La: (smiling wide) Ok Swara..I just felt that something is bothering you..(cups her face affectionately) You are fine na..(looks into her eyes)
Swara nodded her head and smiled.
Sw: Hmm..
La: Ok..
He left her face and then looked out of the window. Smiling, Swara looked at the back of his head and thought, "How much Lakshya cares about me..There is no wonder I love him a lot..But I didn't get any chance to propose him as I had anticipated..Par koi baat nahin, aaj nahin toh phir kabhi.. ". She blushed and looked out of her side window. Slowly she dozed off into a shallow slumber.
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Meanwhile, Sanskaar was sitting inside his Study room in the haveli. Their flight to Kolkata was scheduled to depart at 9 p.m in the night. Meanwhile, he decided to do his office work. He had asked Kavita not to disturb for some time, and so she had retired to one of the bedrooms for taking an afternoon nap.
Sanskaar was going through one of his company files, but he just couldn't concentrate anymore. Swara's face was haunting his senses -- her eyes, her smile, her innocence, her cheerfulness everything about her kept replaying inside his mind's eye.
Sa:(whispers hoarsely) Swaraaa..

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At the same time in the car, Swara woke up from her sleep with a start. She looked at Lakshya.
Sw: Lakshya..Tumne mujhe bulaaya kya..?
La: Nahin toh..!(shrugs) Tum so rahi thi na..Main kyun tumhein disturb karoonga..?
Sw: (frowns) Acha..Mujhe laga ki tumne mera naam liya..
She leant her forehead onto the window glass pane and glanced outside lazily.

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Sanskaar couldn't understand why Swara was affecting him so much. He got up from his seat and paced to and fro along the Study room floor.
Sa: (frustrated voice) What is happening to me..!!
He ran his fingers along his hair, anxiously. He closed his eyes tightly and again Swara's smiling face swam into his inner vision.
Ka: Sanskaar..
He opened his eyes in a jiffy and saw Kavita standing at the doorway. She was looking tensed.
Ka: Kya baat hain, Sanskaar..Aap teek toh hain..? Kuch pareshani hain kya..?
Sa: Kavita..
Slowly she walked inside the room.
Ka: I just came to give your mobile to you..It was ringing..You had forgot it on the drawing room table..
Sa: Ohh..Thank you Kavita..!
He took the mobile from her hand and viewed the missed call details.
Sa: Mr. Dasgupta ka call tha..I will call him back..
Kavita noticed that Sanskaar was really tensed about something. She watched him with eyes filled with concern.
Ka: Sab kuch teek hain na, Sanskaar..? Aap Uttara ki shaadi ko leke tensed hain kya..?
Sanskaar noticed that Kavita was looking really anxious. He placed his both hands on her shoulders and looked into her eyes with a slight smile.
Sa: (softly) Kavi..Sab kuch teek hain..It's just that..Err..Kuch nahin..Tum jaake aaram karo..
With a happy smile, she placed her arms around him and tried to hug him comfortingly.
Ka: Hmm..Ok Sanskaar..
Sanskaar placed his arms around her loosely and looked away guiltily.
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Mumbai
A week passed and today was Sunday. When Swara woke up, she freshened up and went into the kitchen. Sharmishta was busy preparing breakfast for everyone.
Sw: Goodmorning maa..(hugs her from behind)
Sh: Arre Swara Goodmorning..(smiles)Tu itni jaldi uthh gayi aaj..Bhool gayi kya, ki aaj Sunday hain..Aaj ke din toh tu der se uthhthi hain..
Sw: Pata nahin maa..Aaj sone ka mood nahin hain mujhe..(leaves her Mom and looks at her)
Sh: Acha teek hain..Tujhe coffee chahiye na..Main deti hoon..
Sw: Acha maa..Ragini uth gayi kya..?
Sh: Ab tak toh nahin..Tu jaake dekh le..
Sw: Ok..
Swara took two coffee mugs and went towards Ragini's room. When she entered her room, Ragini was just coming out of the washroom.
Ra: Arre Swara(smiles), Goodmorning..
Sw: (smiles) Good morning ..(gives the coffee mug)
Ragini took the mug from Swara and both the sisters walked towards the balcony to have their coffees. They sat down on two chairs.
Ra: Acha Swara..Aaj ka kya plan hain tumhara..
Sw: Mera..Mera koi plan nahin hain aaj..Tere paas koi idea hain kya..?
Ra: (thinks) Hmmm..Koi movie dekhne chale..Tum , main aur Lakshya..
Sw: (thinks and then smiles) Ok..But which movie..? Dilwale..?
Ra: Arre nahin..Bajirao Mastani..!
La: Hello girls..Goodmorning..!
Both Swara's and Ragini's face brightened hearing his voice. They turned their heads towards him with wide smiles.
Sw: Goodmorning..
Ra: Goodmorning Lakshya..Swara se kaho na, hum Bajirao Mastani dekhte hain..
Sw: (pouts) Nahin ..Dilwale...!
Lakshya reached the balcony and he leant his back towards the railing of the balcony.
La: Oh god..!! Dono movies dekhenge..Subah Bajirao aur afternoon ko Dilwale..Lunch hum baahar se karenge..Kyun..? Ab dono khush..!!
Sw: (raises her eyebrows) Wow..What an idea Sirjee..!
Ra: It's a superb idea Lakshya..you are the best..!! (grins happily)
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Kolkata

Meanwhile, at the Maheshwari Mansion, Sanskaar was getting ready. Just as he changed into his formal suit, Uttara knocked at his door.
Sa: Andar aajao..
Uttara opened the door and walked inside.
Sa: Kya baat hain Uttara..?
Ut: Bhaiyya..Aap aaj business deal ke liye Mumbai jaa rahe hain na..Aapke flight kitne baje hain..?
Sa: 10 baje.. kyun..?
Ut: Kavita bhabhi bhi saath chal rahi hain kya..?
Sa: Nahin toh..!
Ut: Toh phir teek hain..(smiles)
Sa: (frowns) Kyun..? Kya hua..?
Sanskaar was combing his hair, standing in front of the mirror.
Ut: Nahin..Bhabhi aaj free hogi na..Issliye...Hum dono shopping chale jaayenge..! Aur mujhe salon bhi jaana hain..Meri shaadi ke liye abhi teen hi hafte bache hain na..Aapne woh wedding planners ke saath baat kiye..
Sanskaar's hand stopped midway hearing the word Wedding Planners. He was reminded of Swara at once.
Sa: (slowly) Wedding planners..Nahin toh..Kyun kuch kehna tha kya un logon se..!
Ut: Haan..Meri wedding lehenga ke baare mein..Aur phir I want a theme wedding..!
Sa: Toh phir ek kaam karte hain..Tum bhi chalo mere saath, Mumbai..!
Ut: Wowww..! bhaiyaa..Sach mein..!!
Sa: (turns to her and smiles) Haan..Hum log "Shaadi Mubarak" logon ke office mein jaake unse baat karte hain..!
Ut: Kavita bhabhi ko bhi saath mein leke chale..?!!
Sa: Haan..Tum usse phone karke kehna..Main tum donon ke ticket book kar leta hoon..Shopping sab tum log wahin se kar lena, jab main woh business meeting attend karne jaaoonga..
Ut: Oh bhaiyya..(she hugs him happily) Thank you soo much..Oh..I am so excited..!! Main abhi Kavita bhabhi se baat karti hoon..
Uttara left the room, really happily and Sanskaar smiled at his reflection in the mirror. He was wondering why he made such a plan. And the answer was right there in his heart, he wanted to meet Swara again.
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So this was PART 4
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Love,
Naina😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Nainu...🤗 🤗

Oh My God, what can I say about the sheer power, the intense feel of the cosmic connect, the soul bond you gave Swara and Sanskaar here. You made me get goosebumps when I was reading this chapter!

The way Sanskaar's eyes kept getting drawn to Swara while they were having that lavish Rajasthani lunch was awesome. And Swara could sense the warmth of his gaze on her all the time, though she was looking at her plate and the dishes. 😳 That must have been one heated gaze by Sanskaar. 😉 And her own heart was urging her to glance back at him!

And then, when they took leave, that was a lovely touch you gave, the way Sanskaar's heart literally skipped a beat when Swara smiles at him. He does feel a painful twinge of hurt and perhaps jealousy, when Swara smiles at Lakshya! I think it won't be too long before the cool, suave business magnate Sanskaar Maheshwari will turn into a yearning, passionate, completely in love guy! 😉

The highlight of the chapter for me, was when Swara's thoughts were constantly coming into his mind, Sanskaar hoarself whispers her name---and Swara hears this, miles away in a car where she is dozing in the back seat. This was that soul connect, that irrevocable, irretrievable bond. They don't know it yet, but fate has destined them for each other. The feels I got from this section---Mind Blowing!!

The other parts of the chapter were also nice, the Sanskaar--Uttara interaction; The Lakshya--Ragini--Swara interaction. You have kept the secret well regarding the latter 3, but my guess is, Ragini is going to reveal her feelings for Lakshya before Swara does. 😆 Will Lakshya accept her proposal? I'm not sure, but he does not seem to have very romantic feelings towards Swara. More like a very close buddy.

And Sanskaar---unable, in the end, to resist planning a meeting with the wedding planners in Mumbai, taking Uttara and Kavita along. I wonder when Kavita would start suspecting? I hope she doesn't turn too negative here.

Eagerly awaiting your next chapter! You know I love all of your works, but this one--it has taken a very special place in my heart. I just L.O.V.E it!! 🤗 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

#468

nainauuu🤗

its tooo goood

bohoth bohoth bohoth acha laga

wat a change in behaviour

lover boy jhaaagrahahai angry young man me

wah wah wah wah he is sooo pleased to look her smile

omg my heart beat slips at their eye contacts

lunch me khaana kam n dhekna jyada

absehi intha romantic

omg swara z resisting him strongly...lovely

loved how kavitha understood differnce in sanskaars body language

swara z still confused i think

still waiting to propose lakhya

cosmic connection was tooo good

to die for such amazing scenes

scene about going to film z cool

both dilwale n baajirao...nice

uttara so sweet of her

she made him remember swara again

loved hw stopped for a while wen he heard wedding planners

awww he want a chance to meet swara

enjoyed

really looking forward to their meeting

loads of love

Edited by Monica_Suhasini - 9 years ago

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome update! The cosmic connection between SwaSan is awesome!
Sanskaar feels the deep connection that he has with Swara and so does Swara feel something for him😳
He's falling for her *woohoo*
Update soon!

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SIMI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#470

Naina..
Superb update...
So sanskar and swara both fall in love again(actually they were always in love)
I have a feeling that swara will get to know about ragini's feeling before her propose and all
so she will back off...(or may be after meeting sanskar,she will forget about that)
Eagerly waiting for next one
love
simi 😊

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