PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN - Page 43

Originally posted by: sarathy321

Wow...
Beautiful piece of writing with more swasan scenes. ...
Ur description of their convo with their reasons behind their acts is really superb...especially sanskaar's mind..
Nice going...

Thank you sooo much arathy dear🤗
I am happy to know you enjoyed it so much 😳

Originally posted by: Sparklle801

Wow very good.that was really nice

Thank you dear😃

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Naina, my dear...this was so amazing, so descriptively written, I just can't find words enough to compliment you. Let me tell you when I read this lovely chapter. I woke up around 4.30 am, feeling thirsty, and after having some water, I just casually checked my phone and saw your PM notification about the update.

I couldn't resist reading it then, and I was completely lost in the evocative beauty of this chapter. When I woke up again today morning, I read it again. I think I will be bugging you to update soon, as I just cannot have enough of this story!

Nainu, the way you described the architecture of the haveli--it brought the setting right before my eyes. I've been to Rajasthan a couple of times on holiday, and Jodhpur, Udaipur and Jaisalmer are among my favorite places. I got reminded of all that, the way you were describing the mirror inlay work, the multi colored glass mosaics and windows. Very romantic setting. 😉

And the connection, the chemistry between SwaSan was mind blowing. I loved the way both of them are feeling the stirrings of such powerful emotions when they are with each other, they aren't able to figure out why, but both are very conscious about it.

Sanskaar, wanting to make up with Swara for being rude earlier, and taking them for a trip round the haveli, was very cute. He is so smart and canny too, he realized that the best way to put Swara at ease, is to talk about her work, and the way they both smiled at each other after that...😳 And wonder of wonders, the authoritative, imposing Sanskaar Maheshwari couldn't help apologizing sweetly to Swara, and feels seeing her smile is completely worth the "sorry". 😳 Yeh tho gaya!

Am wondering what Kavita's approach would be now. Hope she wouldn't turn too negative or try to harm Swara. The way you've described her, she sounds a bit like Ragini was earlier in the serial---quiet, unassuming, feeling immersed in her affection for Sanskaar even though she probably realizes at some level, that he does not feel for her even half of what she feels for him. I do feel a little bad for her, but more scared of her future actions! And am curious about Lakshya also---does he love Swara? Or does he only consider her a friend? Will Ragini disclose her feelings for him before Swara does?

I think I've rambled on and bored you with this long comment. But I couldn't help it as I completely loved this chapter. Please update this story soon, Nainu! 🤗

Vijiii Vijiii Vijiii🤗
you don't know how happy I am after reading your comments..
you just made my day..
I read it when I was on my holiday trip..but i could manage to reply only now..sorry for that dearu😳
As promised I will surely update today itself..😉
Just now going to write the chapter..
I am so glad you loved the haveli setting and all..I love the traditional touch..After all 'dil hain Hindustaani'😃
Swasan chemistry is going to get even more intense in the upcoming chapters..I want this one to be the most passionate of all my works..I don't know if I will be able to keep up to your expectations and my expectations too..But I will try my level best..😆
Kavita aur Lakshya ka kya hoga..Let us see now..😉
Love you my dear..Thank you sooo much for your comments..I just love reading them..🤗

Originally posted by: mamali506

naina dear!! very nice update. architecture and art piece's description was vivid... when both shook hands and the jolt they found by that touch was nicely described.. sanskar maheswari told sorry... oh!!! like a prince bows down... continue soon dear

Thank you sooo much dear..😳
Glad you loved Swasan chemistry while they met😃

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Naina🤗

Part 2

Swara loves laksh😳

Sanskaar was rude towards kavita...come on she is ur fiancee she has a right to atleast touch u

Ragini too loves laksh ji

N wedding planning...WOW

Loved uttara n kavi's bonding

Kavi seems positive

Haveli n all...sanskaar babu is like a prince haan😉

Part 3

Sanskaar n swara met...Finally n that jerk shouted on him...Mr khadoos maheshwari😈

Poor swara he scared her but he apologized too n kavi was confused😆

SwaSan r attracted towards each other...not bad

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

Sonuuu my dear 🤗
Sanskaar likes Kavita..But still he feels that she is too clingy..😆
Swasan is attracted in a strange way..but still they are unaware why..😉
Glad you loved the two updates dear..Thank you sooo much😃

Originally posted by: swethalovely

Beautiful update

Thank you dear😃

Originally posted by: ..Amaira..

its really nice story
title also you decided which I loved!
thanks!
cont soon

Thanks so much yaar😃glad you loved the title too

Originally posted by: amimus

Wow what an update. I was definitely not expecting a sorry from Mr. Sanskaar Maheshwari but he pleasantly surprised me.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

thank you soo much dear😃
Sanskaar was not expecting the sorry too😉

Originally posted by: Kushimian89

So MR Khados Maheshwari is changing..

lovely update..

thanks for the PM..

both feel connection between each other

Thank you sooo much Khushi..🤗
Sanskaar is changing😆

Originally posted by: hp_2006

love you too dearest suhaa🤗

i loved your awesome comments too😃

glad you enjoyed every bit of the update😳