PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN - Page 42

Originally posted by: foresight

beautiful...they are feeling those stable differences in their interaction vs normal...enough to make the wonder and enough to already change their ways. i wonder what it will be like when they get a lot closer. kavita has already realised something was off. it won't take too long for laksh to realise either. wonder what tricks and games could they play for their end here in this lifetime. wonderful update...cannot wait for the next one

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Awesome...

Swara and sanskar secrectly seeing each other...

Sanskar saying sorry to her..

And then swara relaxed..

Kavita might be upset rather surprised over Sanskar's behavior with swara..

poor girl..

Loved it..

And continue soon..

Thank you for the pm..

Originally posted by: chibi_deea

Awesome. 😊 I like the way your story is going cause it feels natural and it's not rushed.

That akwardness and the handshake

Thanks a lot for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: Amrtina

Superb update

Sanskar said sorry, even though its not in his dictionary

I really like their interactions

Originally posted by: -Ros-

Nainaaa! 🤗

Fab update!

You write soo wonderfully! ⭐️

I especially liked the part when Sanskaar and Swara officially met & their handshake. The way you described it.. I could just imagine it and felt nervous for Swara.

Sanskaar is already affected by Swara & his bitter nature is already falling to pieces when he's with her.

I do feel a bit sorry for Kavita though.. to see the man you love behave so differently with someone who he's just met.

Waiting for the next update! 😳

Originally posted by: cue1

Omg I love it! Please let them get together!

Originally posted by: Sia212

Loved it!!!😳

The description of the haveli, their unknown feelings, Sanskaar's efforts to please Swara, and apologising to her... Superb! 😊😳

Continue Soon!😃😳