The Best of Things - FF (RagYa, SwaSan) +16 Part 44 on Pg 145 - Page 30

Awesome update

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

That was so nice..

Loved it..

Swasan and ragini plan working..

The dinner talk was so funny..

Lucky will but a burkh for Ragini..

LOL..

Thank you for the pm..

Continue soon..

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Bubble...🤗

Read chapters 16 and 17 in quick succession. 😊 What struck me in Chap 16, is how Lakshya seems to be genuinely moving ahead in his relationship with Ragini, in all senses of that word. She was certainly floating on air, in a most benevolent and magnanimous mood, even to Swara 😛, after that romantic romp with Lucky. 😆 Thank God Swara had that call list showing she had actually conversed with her friend, though. Just like Ragini, to be initially carefree, and then let her paranoia take over again!

I did find Lakshya a tad irritating in this chapter. Though he is clearly charting his path with Ragini, still doesn't seem to have realized certain subtleties of how not to behave with Swara. I don't mean in terms of anything romantic, of course. But I think, somewhere, he still hasn't let go of that feeling that he has certain rights over Swara's time. The way he peremptorily asked her to meet him later (to discuss Ragini) was rather cloak and dagger. And again, the way he was sitting just that little bit too close for Sanskaar's comfort (and Swara's for that matter), was a tad irritating. The Lucky in your tale is mature and is not (thankfully), scheming to get Swara back into his life. But he still, I think, needs to step back a bit more from Swara. Time will bring that about, perhaps? 😊

What I liked a lot in Chap 16, was the way Swara is conscious about Sanskaar's reactions, even if they are muted. She has deciphered, that his blank expression and stiff posture indicate his turmoil, and the fact that Lakshya had his head so close to her, didn't go down too well with him. 😉

Liked the way you described the younger set hanging out together, in Chapter 17. Lakshya, Sanskaar, and Swara all working together to iron out certain insecurities (perhaps extending to neuroses 😛) in Ragini's mind. To a certain degree, one can see how she would have been severely limited by her upbringing--by being so stifled in that cossetted, over protected, orthodox environment. So Debabrata was just a platonic pal of Swara's (which you'd hinted at), and supposedly had a crush on Ragini. 😆 Hopefully this kind of banter, might reassure her that she isn't always going to land up playing second fiddle/ being the second choice as compared to Swara.

Looking forward to the next chapter already! I want to say here again, that I like the Lakshya and Ragini in your tale so much more than in the serial. And that's really down to your quality of writing, since you know I normally love to hate Lakshya. 😆

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Oho..so this was lakshya's plan..😛

i guess he just want Ragini to feel more confident about her appearance..he wanted her to feel that she was popular among swara's 'gang ' which she was jealous of earlier..

I loved the update Bubble..😃 nice dialogues especially lakshya's burkha waala line😉

Read all 3 updates on one go! Loved all of them.. especially the guitar pass update and the latest update where you introduced Debo.. It was amazinG!! Very very interesting!! It seems we will get to see a new side of Ragini! 😃😃 Glad! And loving your FF! And yeah, congo on 50 pages of your thread! Continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: Anglaise

Awesome Update dear🤗
Didnt expected the twist in debo. hehe he a had crush on ragini !
loved ragya. Ragini blushing and lakshya teasing her that he would buy a burkha for her😆
Nice Update. loved it.TC

Originally posted by: sneharay

Superb update..loved it.. 😊

Originally posted by: sadhana.np

Nice

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Hahaha tht was a cute update...so debarata was a table turner fr ragini...was this their plan?? Seems like it...laksh is being very sweet trying to remove all doubts abt swara frm ragini's head n if he doesn't love her at least he is being wayyy too nice with her...hope it starts to bring the best out of her...

But why isnt swasan relationship progressing?? I want some one to one scenes of them whr they r not discussing raglak or other family members.

Sweet update this was!

Originally posted by: alisha17

Awesome update

Loved it

Thnku for the pm