Shruti 🤗 What a marvellous TS 👏 Finally managed to comment here 😃
Okay so coming to the different parts:
Part 1- I loved the initial description of the day and the
The gentle patter of the unexpected rain against the window.
Swara's pain description was awesome, and Sanskar's concern towards her even though he was in his apartment.
Laksh as you said is just Ragini's
pawn, she is manipulating him and
wo uske ishaaron par nach raha hai 😕
The way you described Swara's inner turmoil, take a bow 👏
'Then there was Swara herself. It would perhaps be difficult to find a more contradictory young woman.'I completely agree, she was convinced that her maa and baba's marriage was unbreakable, but not her and Sanskar's 🤔
She can't even see that Laksh is just pretending to give a chance to Ragini.
'Previously he had always maintained a guarded distance in anything more than friendship, but this Sanskaar was charming and even openly flirtatious.'Oh i love this flirty Sanskar 😉 And Swara doesn't mind this side of him as well 😆
I loved the following description and how Swara started to feeling attracted towards him as well ❤️ How she felt natural taking out his clothes for him, made sure he took his vitamines; and then they took the tea together in the balcony. I could imagine the scene in front of my eyes Swara is essential for Sanskar and Sanskar is essential for Swara ❤️
'He knew he could not let her go, she was as essential as breathing to him, and he was now determined to woo her and to make sure she was made aware over time, that she did not have to go anywhere if she did not want to.'Seems only Sanskar (even DP though) has brain in the whole family. He sensed that Ragini was planning something and Laksh too. If only Swara could sense this.
He brought a lehenga for her on Diwali and Laksh as well 🤢 Glad she gave it to Ragini and wore the one gifted by Sanskar 😳
Aww and when he saw her the next day wearing it, he was mesmerized
'Swara, tum bahut hi atchi lagg rahi ho. Tumhe maanna hoga ke meri pasand ka jawaab nahi?"
'Errm, haan Sanskaar yeh lengha sach main bahut atcha hai."
'Main lenghe ki nahi, jissne lengha pehna hai uski baat kar raha hoon Swara," How sweet <3
And their kiss ☺️❤️
'Their lips met, a gentle brush at first, his mouth hard against the softness of hers. He put his arms around her and she melted into them as fluidly as liquid gold [...] Sanskaar poured his longing and love for her into this kiss, she responded ardently, her body and soul recognising and meeting his need with her own unguarded response.2 Part- Dadi, i'm loving her 😆 She immediately questioned Swara about Sanskar and whatever she said was absolutely true 👏
Swara finally couldn't deny the fact that this was not friendship, but more than it. 🥳 Yeh show mein kab dekhne ko milega?
'Chori, gussa hone se koi fayda na hai. Yeh hi duniya ka dastoor hove he. Tu bole hai ke thare aur Laksh ke beech main sirf dosti hai, lekin thare badi saas aur saas ki galatfaimi bhi mhareko samah aave hai. Thare ko kya zaroorat thi akele unn dono ke saath jaane ki?' Very well said, why didn't she go with Sanskar? This is her mistake.
Ragini's drama 😡 Airline tickets and hotel booked in the name of her and Laksh 😕 How easily everyone believed those 'papers' instead of Swara.
No one took her side, apart of Sanskar, and once again he proved what true love is. Their relationship is based on
trust.
She didn't inform Sanskar about the pics and kidnapping even in the show
Laksh, how cheap he is!
"Abh hame sabh ko sach batadena chahiye, ke hum ek doosre se pyaar karte hain!" Swara should have slapped him right there.
AP is so annoying now 😡 Aankhein band kar ke she believes Ragini and Laksh. Sanskar, can't praise him enough 👏 I just love him ❤️
Laksh & Ragini's conversation ugh, their stupid plans 😡 They know that Sanskar is Swara's strenght.
And then Ragini's 'kidnapping', Laksh tried to frame Sanskar in this. He is stepping so low, yuck 😡
Poor Swara, when Sanskar said to her to pack her clothes she felt bad 😭 She can't live without him now
'Swara felt as if her heart was fracturing in a thousand pieces.'Part 3- As always you managed to depict Swara's feelings and her pain in a magnificient way Shru 👏 She needed Sanskar the most right now, but he wasn't there.
Of course Sanskar was in the same situation, he didn't want to stay away from her.
He did that to protect her from Ragini's evil plans.
Loved how you showed Uttara's character here (i think she will play a huge role in the show as well now as she might be the one who kidnapped Ragini or she might have a connection with the kidnapper).
How sweet of her, she came to meet her bhabhi at the Badi as she was worried for her. How hope to see her supporting SwaSan in the show as well. Any ship name for Uttara & Swara? 😆
Thank god she suggested to Swaa to visit Sanskar atleast once.
Aww and the SwaSan's moment ❤️ First of all her confession to Sanskar (yayy!)
'Sanskaar, woh pehle ki baat thi. Kya tum sach main nahi jaante ke main abh tumse pyaar karti hoon aur tumse alag hone ka soch bhi nahi sakti?" It marked the start of a new beginning in a true sense for Swara and Sanskaar, and they both gloried in it.OMG the next part was shocking 😲
Laksh 😡 Kitna gir geya hai yeh ladka 😡 He doesn't even know how to respect someone 😕
Phew Sanskar reached there in time, along with DP. I guess he was left completely speechless by Laksh's behaviour.
Lol i knew it Ragini's kidnapping was just a plan, that unfortunately for Laksh & Ragini, didn't work 🤣
I loved how you kept the suspense till the end, and then revealed everything 👏 Well done Shru 🤗
Detective Sanskar 😎 Laksh and Ragini deserve a severe punishment.
The ending was beautiful 😳
'The meeting of their lips, the touching of their bodies, their exchanged words of love, and their thankfulness at having each other, were all a beautiful and heartrending paean sung from their souls to vibrate in the cosmos.'You always leave me speechless with your works Shru, you are a wonderful writer 👏
Big hug 🤗
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