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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Shru,🤗( That's for turning red!)

I was dying to read something from you and then whoo! 🥳You just made my Diwali!

But please, don't tell me that evil duo did something that had effected their bond very badly fragile heart you know❤️ can't take it!💔

Then the growing attraction...my my I was blushing myself as I read on. Swara is such a cute pie isn't she, she has no idea how much her responses (Unintended) encourages him to be more mischievous? And Sanskar...the first class flirt!😳

Then comes the bad part of Swara's innocence, I mean can't she sense something is cooking between her sister and her assumed 'best friend' ?As usual Sanskar is the most sane one of the two, he notices everything doesn't he?

Then the diwali scene...

Did they just kiss?????😲

Am I still reading this or hallucinating?

God! How can a kiss be so romantic, alluring, innocent and pure at the same time? Only Sanskar would have managed to hold himself that moment and Swara...as usual queen of oblivion!

How did you just stop it at that? Fine, I'll wait for the next part but something tells me, it's going to be rather dark stuff, I'm afraid of it at the moment.

Continue soon Shru, I'm dying in excitement here!

Edited by Sakura24 - 9 years ago

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

@Laksh: flotsam, never clear judgment 🤣 badi izzat se insult ki hai 🤣 keep it up 🤗

@Swara: her desperation to play happy families, best friends is sickening. it borders on being abnormal🤢 she behaves as if she never had a family or friends. what were dida & shomi? who was sanskaar? she thinks she is being modern, but she comes across as cheap. also i will never understand why her sense of freedom has to depend on what laksh thinks? why attach so much importance to him? he can think whatever he wants, but if you are firm it really shouldnt matter right? it is good to have support when u r all alone, but from whom? and at what cost? who needs that worms support?😡 all i see when i see swara is a girl who doesnt want the responsibilities of being a married woman (and i dont mean the housework!) but wants all the rights & benefits of being a wife.

@ragini: i wouldnt compare her with any genius army general tbh. she is stupid in her own way & short sighted in the extreme. her soldier: laksh😆 her aim: laksh😆 take laksh away from her & she is left without a defense and without an aim. and the aim isnt even worth the effort & time she is putting into. most of her plans succeed because she is always surrounded by idiots like swara, laksh, sujata, AP, shomi, shekhar, pari, daadi🥱 throw her to DP & sanskaar & we know how that turns out😈

@sanskaar: i like this new sanskaar who isnt giving up on swara. long ago i had made a post that instead of going on to the mahaan mode he should try to win her love (in a decent manner, unlike laksh).

That dream of sanskaar was great in the show but your version is even better. it would have looked so so good even your way ☺️ and then that kiss ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

@divorce: dont u think wrt the divorce she is like an alarm clock which has to go off after regular intervals😆 and sanskaar shuts her up the same way we would shut a clock.😛

While reading this one more thing struck me. Sanskaar did have all the signs to believe that she was leading him on, didnt he? Her sudden shyness, acceptance, not getting irritated or angry everytime he mentions his love for her. Anyone would have thought that why the sudden change? Is she lulling me into a false sense of security so she can carry on with my brother too? But even then he doesnt believe it. He trusted her. What a man yaar

I am curious about the next parts. Wonder how sanskaar goes from kissing to ignoring her. Btw where is Swara? In MM or in her beloved baadi? Jaldi Jaldi likho plz😆

P.S. I hope you saw my other comment yesterday in the AT abt me being sarcastic about why AP not questioning Lakshji (I think u did, but i need it confirmed. its imp! Cant have anyone thinking that i will ever side with lakshji and annapurnaji😛 )

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Thank you so much for those kind comments so far, you made it easier for me to have less than 5 hours sleep and wake to update! I will do individual replies asap but am in a rush to pen down the next part for fear of "belans" coming at me if I am late 😆.

Also many thanks to those congratulating me on turning red!! SR Forum effect- too addicted to you all!

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Sana

@Forum.Maniac

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Shru, this is so not fair.

I want to know what happens next 😭 Leki is ryt, you shld have posted all 3 parts at the same time, but chalo koi nahi, make it worth the wait! 😉

That kiss was so romantic. Loved how you described Swara's growing feelings and her reactions as of late to Sanskar.

Ragini & Laksh's plotting is way better here then on the show, I'm satisfied 😆

Also loved the fact that the Sanskar here acknowledged the fact that Swara is exasperating 🤣

Continue soon!

PS: My battery is really low. Cannot leave a detailed comment this time 😆

Edited by Forum.Maniac - 9 years ago

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archana

@sarchanu

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

loved it please update fast

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Purbi

@Purbishona

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Shruti, amazing one..
Loved the first part..
You gave us a kissy woh bhi real wala.. Magical..
Its so sweet..
Plz update soon.
I wanna read the next parts..
Thanks for the PM.

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Loved it tooo much Shruti!!
Awesome first kiss
This reminds of Fearless by Taylor Swift!
It's so alike and lovely!!
Do update soon
*Waiting and waiting*

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Jwala

@LoveSriNal

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Shuru.. Congratulations dear.. you became Rockers na.. and I think I'm not anyone to comment on your TS.. you are a brilliant writer dear.. I don't know what to say about this. such an Excellent work. . one think I loved most do you know what? you compare laksji and ragini with snake and snake charmer na.. that is epic.. no other words suits him than this.. swasan moments you described magically.. seriously I don't have words dear. write more dear.. you are one of the wonderful writers in the forum. . waiting for the next parts.. .. love you dear..

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Congrats my dear on your new status in the forum...well deserved for the monumental work...!

Have been away for awhile but am totally floored with this TS...it's just the beginning...you have stopped with a cliff hanger, I have started biting my nails (come to think of it, I used to do so, whenever I watched Revenge - an American serial aired on StarWorld)...

Gosh, the way you have written the portion of Sanskar and Swara kissing...it was akin to actual feelings of 2 souls...the tentativeness, the attentiveness, the intuitiveness of the whole scene is beyond my ability to praise...thank you for writing down...loved it!

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Amazing. ..so beautifully written and the progress of swasan relation...the kiss came so naturally into the equation. ... but what happened after tht to create a distance btwn the 2???

Cant wait fr the next part

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