SwaSan , SwaLak , RagLak FF-' IT IS MY FATE' pt 4 pg 11 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Very nice..

Loved the fact that Sanskar fell for Swara at first sight..
Hayye..
Love at first sight..

awesome..
Thank you for the Pm..
continue soon..

Thankss lot
Keep reading
Glad u liked it😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: gayu6

Aree confusion. So 1st swalak is n love n she wqants him to marry her. Here ragini's love is onesided. Wat ll happen. So sanskar started loving swara love at first sight. I tnk sujatha ll b the villan for their love and their love ll broke u? Pls continue soon

Hahaha I know bht confusion. H sb dheere dheere solve hogi ...
Hahaha I'll update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Aw dat was a lovely update
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
interesting..
lol u miss ragsan i guess 😆
waiting for ur next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: alisha17

Aw dat was a lovely update

Thnku for the pm

Thank u so much
Keep reading😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Shikha022

interesting..
lol u miss ragsan i guess 😆
waiting for ur next update..

Thankss
No way I m only a pure without any preservatives SwaSan fan..😆
But I love framing something that is beyond my likes
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Quite shocking start 😛 seeing Swa Lak and Rag San lol.
Sanskar fell in love with Swara at first sight 😳 The story seems very interesting, continue soon 😆 Hope to see many SwaSan scenes 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Quite shocking start 😛 seeing Swa Lak and Rag San lol.
Sanskar fell in love with Swara at first sight 😳 The story seems very interesting, continue soon 😆 Hope to see many SwaSan scenes 😳

Thanksss alot
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Chapter 2

Laksh's house.

"Tu usse milna nai chorega mtlb" fumed sujata in anger on laksh's mention of swara. "Mom she is my love hum last 4 years se sth h fr b ap ye umid me he ki me use chor dunga" he shouted. "Dekh laksh I don't like that girl u know , u hv to obey me in this regard leave her" she sat in couch ignoring laksh's questioning eye on him. "Mom don't even think of it, I only love swara n will always love her." N he slamed the main door to went out. Sujata followed him, thinking that he left house. "Laksh where r u going" she followed him to find him taking sweets from his bike. He approached to enter house wen saw sujata standing there. "Wat" he looked at her mom. "Mujhe lga u r leaving house" sujata giggled. "Seriously mom leave house that too for swara" he raised his brows. "I love him , but uske lie sb chorunga thodi , u r really mad mom" n he went in.
His words confirmed sujata that though laksh claims to love swara there is something that cn break their so called love that is irresponsibility on laksh's part and extra love and care of swara for laksh.
"Laksh listen , tu uske lie ghar nai chor skta kya" asked sujata laksh turned to give him a "wat u mean look" .
"I mean ki u said u won't leave this house for swara, that's true kya" she sheepishly asked. "Obviously yes mom , y will I do that. " he huffed n was abt to go. "Acha to mithai to khila de" said sujata. "Nai apki punishment h apko mithai ni milegi" n he ran to his room. "Ye ladka b na" smiled sujata.

Next day

Laksh was peacefully sleeping wen his sleep was distracted by swara's call in morning. He woke up with no mood.
"Wat swara itni subah kya hua" said laksh getting up frm bed n siting on it in almost sleep. "Laksh aj mera show h tum aoge na" swara said , she was outside Auditorium waiting for sanskar to come . "baby kha to ajaunga , all the best shona love u" he kissed the phone , n swara blushed there. "Tum b na laksh chalo bye" she cut the call.

Mahavir Auditorium

Sanskar comes in formals and gets stunned seeing swara , she was wearing a pretty yellow crop top with tight black jeans. Sanskar was lost in her beauty he was staring her without blinking , world just rested for him. Sanskar wanted to ask her abt that guy on bus stop but stopped.
Swara clicked in front of his enough to get him in a senses. "Kahan kho gae Mr. Maheshwari ap" she smiled. Sanskar blushed in her gaze. She simply smiled at him ."chale late ho ra h" sanskar joined swara. "Acha swara ye btao tumhare family me kaun kaun h" he asked but then realised it was really stupid to ask this at their second meeting . but by God's grace she answered it. "Me or meri ma" she looked at him "n tumhari family . sanskar's face turned pale. " actually I M an orphan " his eyes turned wet. Swara felt bad seeing him , swara kept her palm on his face n made him face her "its OK Mr. MAHESHWARI its life hota h" sanskar admired act n his feeling came down from his eyes. They both went to Audi n swara went for preparing for the show .. .

After 1 hour

The hall was almost full for the show. Sanskar was sitting in front along with principal of SMS. All the kids n swara came on stage. Wearing same red kurta n black jeans.
They sang some traditional Bengali song all clapped for them. Sanskar was all stunned seeing her. He was very much in love with this preety girl n he can't deny it at all.

It was over swara sanskar their colleagues n principal with kids came out. "Mr. Maheshwari that was a grand success all thankss to u" principal joined her hands. Swara n all clapped ."arey nai mam , me khn its all cz of swara n kids they made it successful" swara smiled listening to her praise she wanted to share this with laksh , her life.
"Nai Mr. Maheshwari ap bewajah mujhe credits derhe h jbki u did this all" both shaked hands. "Then for that tomorrow I want all u to come with me on a picnic . kids got excited. " wow , yes hum sb aenge" said a kid. "Hn hum sb aenge" added principal. Swara was lost in her world. She was dieing to share this news to her love. "Swara tum b aogi na" sanskar asked with hopes in his eyes. Swara dint replied she was standing mumb. "Swara " said principal that brought her to senses. "Hnn mam apne kuch kha" she saw the principal. "Tum kal picnic aogi humare sth" said the principal. "Vo mam, I cnt say with surety." "Swara chalo na plzzz" insisted ramia , one of her colleague. "Chalo na didi" kids started shouting. "OK OK" said swara , sanskar was lighted hearing it. He wanted to propose her. N also wanted to clear about the boy he saw with swara.

Office

"Laksh kam kesa chal ra h" came a smiling ragini upto his desk. Laksh got up "its OK , formality nai please, sit" she added. Laksh took his seat. "Vo kya h na me tumhari dost bnne Aai hun" she giggled n laksh was stunned at her stupid question. "Arey hmara mtlb yhn almost Sara staff aged he, to tumhi ek mere jese jawan ho" then both started laughing. "Acha to ap mazak b krti" laksh said still laughing. "Han tumhe kya me khadus boss lgti hun laksh" both giggled. "Nai nai , " he acted like kid , both of them Hi fied n all looked them who were busy working.
"Laksh tum ab kam kro kal BAAT krte h" she smiled to laksh waved n went. "Kitni achi h ye" he said to himself n went back to work.

ragini's place n restrurant, (laksh n swara r here on a date)

"Swara me bht khush hun ki tumhara program itna successful rha" he hugged her. "Bus bus" tum to aai b nai" she angrily turned away.

"Arey sanskar bht kam tha Hume aj office me" ragini replied to sanskar who asked her why she wasn't there for programe.

"Acha mujhse b jaruri tha kuch" asked sanskar.

"Shona tumse jyada jaruri kuch nai h, bus smjho busy tha me." Laksh replied to swara's question on her imp. Laksh hugged her from back "okkk bht sorry" he kissed her earlobe. "Laksh hum restrurant h tum b na" she made her free from his arms. "Kya swara tum kbi romance nai krne deti" he turns from her. "Romance shadi k bad smjhe" she smiled but laksh was in no mood to smile. "Arey ab kya Ho gya" she cupped his face. "Swara me kuch manunga tum dogi" he asked holded her hands. "Bolo laksh kuch b bolo" she smiled. "Swara me tumhe apna bnana chahta hun" swara hugged him in excitement. "Schi laksh hum shadi kb krenge , tum aare ho ghr" she broke the hug "or ma , se bat ki, gussa kia hoga na unhone ne. But me mana lungi, akhir meri hone wali sas h" she was non stop talking that irritated laksh "swara. " he shouted n she went quiet "mera vo mtlb nai tha" swara looked him in confusion. "To for kya laksh" she looked him.
"Vo I want to take our relationship. To another level, I mean getting physically involved" he completed only to get a tight slap frm swara. "Chiii laksh tumhe sharam ani chahie., me tumse itna pyaar.." She broke down she dint expected this from laksh, her life, her love. "Isme issue kya h, agr tum mujhse Pyar krti ho swara to tumhe isme bura kya lg ra h" laksh touched her shoulders. "Leave me laksh, tum pagal ho gae ho , Pyar me aise chahat rkhna tumhari galti h" she stood up in anger , then cupped his face "laksh tum aise mt kho hum shadi kr lete h na" laksh jerked her away. "Agr tum mujhse pyAar krti to ye nai khti swara., or meri BAAT man jati" n he left from there leaving her alone.
She came out of restrurant , she was broken how could laksh be so insensitive to her love. She knew he lived her but is it the only way to move forward in relation. She was not traditional to hide in house. But her mother had always reminded her to adhere to certain values, that she always prayed. But today laksh hd broken her .

Ragini's place

"Sanskar tum mujhe btaoge kya BAAT h, pichle 1 ghante h vo vo kie ja re ho" said irritated ragini to whom sanskar was trying to tell abt swara.
"Ragini vo... mujhe pyaar ho gya h" he was not facing her. Ragini's heart skipped a beat, she had always loved him but hearing this from sanskar made several thoughts to take her mind. Was she her only? Was she some one else? "Sanskar kya .. Mtlb kaun kb khn" sanskar turned n hugged her. Ragini was realising that it cn be her only. Sanskar broke the hug "uska naam swara h" it came to ragini as a dragger that cuted her heart in pieces. "Kya" she. Could only manage to say this. "Han ragini pehli nazar me Hi mujhe usse Pyar hogya tha..." N sanskar continued the swara tales going towards the window. Tears tickled from swara's eyes. She couldn't believe her best who always claimed that he cnt love was in love but not with her. World around her went dark. Sanskar turned to find her in tears. "Ragini kya hua" he holded her shoulder. She wiped her tears smiling "arey sanskar ye khushi k Anson hmare best friend ko itne salo me Jake Pyar hua h" she turned from him. She knew if she will face him she will become weak.
"Acha ragini me ab chalta hun kal picnic k lie bht tayari krni h, tum b aari ho na" asked sanskar. "Vo sanskar hum nai aapaenge , fr kbi" she smiled facing him. "OK u take care. " he kissed her forehead n left. "Sanskar nw mujhse dubara pucha b nai" tears made their way, she fell on floor.

laksh's room

He slammed the door. "Swara tum aise kese kr skti ho me tumse kitna pyaar krta hun or tum mere lie" he cried. He was not able to make out the way he was defining love was totally wrong for swara.

sanskar's room

"Kal me tumhe sb bta dunga swara fr jesa tum kahogi sb vese Hi krunga" he shyd.

midnight
Swara was moaning in pleasure under him. He was best for her , he made her life heaven.
"Faster love" she said clutched his hairs. He captured her lips n she responded to it. Both were in mood of completing it today.

"Nooo" swara woke up from her dream. She was all sweating , this was the worst dream she ever had. May be it was because laksh said all this to her today. But no she was dreaming of this since 2 days , n it made feel heavy , such wet dreams always made her scared. She was not able to discover why was dreaming all these. Did she wanted that? No she don't she cleared her mind.
She took the water , n comforted her n laid on bed again. She couldn't even share this with anyone. But genuinely these dreams were killing her.

next morning

Picnic spot
All were sitting in groups . sanskar was just staring swara who was lost in her world. He came n sat beside her "kya hua" she saw him shock. "Kuch nai" she fakely smiled. "Pta h swara meri ek dost h ragini vo khti h ki me chehre pad leta hun, or abi mujhe lg ra h tum udas ho" swara faced him. "Schii me jhut nai keh ra" added sanskar swara gave him a genuine smile. "Apki dost bilkul sch khti h" she looked away."kya me is udasi ki vajah jaan skta hun" swara saw him. She dint hd any plans of sharing such private things with sanskar. So she remained quiet. "Acha koi BAAT nai mt batao" both saw each other.

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Precap: swara n sanskar to cross their limits. Laksh's worst on swara, broken swara. Sanskar to know that ragini's loves him.

Okkk guys finally here the update
Hope ull like it

Love
Niyati

Edited by Niyatiswaragini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Hi Nia,
Finally an update.
Ragini 😭Sanskaar's confession broke her heart. How will she react is to be seen..

Laksh 🤢Kya karun main iss insaan ka. He wants to ang lagao and actually had the guts to ask Swara of it. Dude, can i push you into the river?

Sanskaar❤️pyaar jag raha hai. Iss pyaar ki manzil ab kitni door hai?? Glad Swara doesnt have to tolerate Laksh any longer.

Swara 🥺she realized ehat kind of guy Laksh is. Why is he so despo?? Feeling bad for Swara. Hope Sanskaar helps her overcome that sadness.

Now the precap!! Nia!! The precap has actually outdone the update for me. SwaSan to cross limits, Dear hosh mein ho?? Mera SwaSan toh sachmein Sanskaari hai aur tere Sanskaari dreams ke bali ke bakre ban rahe hai!! 😆 No worries, go on.. we are all turning sadist where SwaSan are concerned.

Ab tumhara kya hoga RagLak?? Rebound pyaar??

Looking forward to the next update. Please update soon. But exams hai toh first finish them. These ffs can wait!

Cheers
Sharon.
Edited by Sparkler8 - 9 years ago

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