SwaSan , SwaLak , RagLak FF-' IT IS MY FATE' pt 4 pg 11 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ishanita

Loved it niyati... 😛 [:P
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Thankss isha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Nice and interesting concept! Liked how Sanskaar fell for Swara at first sight but also saw Laksh too. The Ragini and Laksh equation should be interesting too! Thanks for the PMs, I tend to struggle for time so sorry if I reply late!

It's okkk thankss alot ..
. keep reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: harshsriti

Niyu. reading all parts now.. wonderful.. lakshji omg. no words for him. he wants a physical relation with swara before marriage chiii.. disgusting. . feeling bad for swaragini.. ab ragini ke kya hoga.. I don't want her with laksh now.. continue soon

Jwala thanksss
Actually laksh is fine thinking like today . but swara thinks differently.
Thanksss its really going to be tough n being swasanian , phew I m gonna cry writing this
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: _akaur_

Amazing update..!!!!

Sanskaar fell in love with Swara at first sight...
Ragini loves Sanskaar but doesn't show it...
Waiting for the love confession from Sanskaar, I hope Swara doesn't speak rudely to him...
Loved the precap...
Thanks for the pm...

Thanks u so much dear
Keep reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Unresd on pg 6

Yayy!! I was the first to res!! Hehe..

I replied ... Bebs check
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

lovely update

waiting for the next update..
Dont tell me you are planning to seperate swasan after swara broken by lucky and sasnkar out of care for ragini...
continue soon
thank you for pm..

Thank u so much ..
Keep reading dear .. I also don't know weather they ll be parted or not
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Nice update. So by this sujatha can seperate swalak easily. Wat ll b sanskar's reaction after he came to knw abt ragini love for him. Will he propose swara pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gayu6

Nice update. So by this sujatha can seperate swalak easily. Wat ll b sanskar's reaction after he came to knw abt ragini love for him. Will he propose swara pls continue soon

Thank u so much bebs ..
Let's see wat will happen
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Posted: 9 years ago
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THIS UPDATE IS FOR LAKSHYAJI KI JWALA 🤣(NO OFFENSE) I LOVE U LOLO...( me tujhe LOLO bulao, ab to bula b dia)😆


CHAPTER 3

swara tried hard to ignore sanskar but he was not ready to leave her. "Swara BAAT share me kya problem h, tum mujhe bta skti ho swara" swara was now finding it hard to resist him. She knew she can't burst laksh's anger on him but he was ready to understand that she can't share this. But sanskar being sanskar dint left a stone unturned asking her to tell her heart to him.

All were playing when principal called swara "ajao swara tum b khel lo" swara was in no mood to play , but still up for her word's respect n moreover to get rid of sanskar's pinching questions. "Aap b aie , Mr. Maheshwari" sanskar stood up n both swara and sanskar joined others for game. They were playing hide n seek. "Mam open me kese" swara said . "didi inne bde per h dekho to unke piche chup jaenge" swara agreed n sanskar felt happy that finally she managed to involve in something. All enjoyed the game but sanskar was just looking at sad swara who was according to him in some issues. After sometime sanskar went to swara n much to his shock she was facing a tree.
Sanskar placed his hand on swara's shoulder.
"R u OK swara" swara controlled her tears n faced him. "Haannn sanskar bolo" she managed to smile. "Mujhse jhoot mt bolo swara plzzz btao" swara was getting frustrated now. He was not getting she can't share her feelings.

"Look sanskar me theek hun, please its my personal matters , none of ur business. She said rudely this time. " but swara pain batogi tbi to km hoga" sanskar completed n that was height of swara's patience. "Tumhe kya sunna h tumhe smj ni ata kya, ki me share ni krna chaahti , or agr fr b tumhe itna Hi interest h to suno, mujhe dhoka mila, bht bda" tears tht were already in her eyes , started flowing. "Mere laksh ne mujhse kuch aisa mang kia h Jo me use nai de skti kbi nai" sanskar's mind stopped he was hurt but who was laksh "laksh" he could only managed to say this. "Laksh mera laksh mera pyarr , mera sbkuch, usne" she fell on ground, she was broken tears. Sanskar too was in pain, he was ditched , swara loved someone else, no use of his feelings , love, tears formed in his eyes. He sat on floor wiped his tears . holded swara. "I m sorry mujhe nai..." swara hugged him tight. "I m so sorry sanskar mujhe tumse aise nai bt krni chahie the" she hugged him tight with each word she said. Sanskar hugged swara to console her he knew that there is no hope for his love.

Swara broke the hug realising wat she was doing. "It's OK swara u r my frnd, itna haq h tumhara, " he said hiding his pain. Swara saw him in disbelief. Sanskar was so sweet , she felt n then managed to bud him good bye n left .

swara's place

Sharmishta was in her room seeing some photos. Swara came running to her sharmishta in panic hid the photos n swara dint noticed that as she was in pain. She hugged shomi tight. "Shona kya hua tu theek to hena" she said rubbing her back. Swara kept crying hugging her she was about to tell her about laksh wen she heard doorbell. "Ruk shona tu me dekhti hun" she kissed swara's forehead.

Sharmishta opened the door it was laksh. "Namste aunty shona h" sharmishta could clearly see his eyes were puffy red. "Kya hua laksh sb theek h na" sharmishta asked him. "Hn aunty ap bataie na shona khn h" sharmishta directs him to go to her room n decides to stay in living room.

Sharmishta's room

Swara was crying burying her head in her legs wen laksh entered. He was broken to see swara in this state. He ran to her n hugged her tight. To frst instance , swara was shocked after realising that he is laksh she jerked him. "Tum yhn kya krne aae ho, me kbi naii manaungi.. " before she could say further laksh hugged her more passionately."I m so sorry swara meri glti mujhe ptani kya Ho gya tha, I m sorry" these words realived swara, he finally understood her denial for that. But swara was scared if he demanded that again. "Laksh fr se agr ye hua to me khud Jo jedr smbhalungi" tears rolled down her cheeks. Laksh felt bad, ya he was responsible for her this state. "Shona please mujhe maaf krdo, acha hum shadi krenge, I promise next month rum or me shaadi krenge pakka" he holded swara's hand. Swara was about to hug him in happiness wen he said "ab to hum ye rishta age bda skte h na, 1 mahine me to vese b hmari shadi ho Hi jaegi swara" swara couldn't believe her ears. "Bus laksh bus," she yelled. "Tum ab mere laksh nai rhe , kisse mene Pyar kia tha," she cried. "Swara to mt me aj b tumse bht pyaar krta hun swara, tumhe aise nai dekh skta" he huffed her, swara pushed him away. "It's over between us Mr. Laksh chatterjee." She stood up, "chale jao meri zindgi se" she went to window n cried. "Isse pehle me kuch kr bethon jao laksh" laksh went from there in tears. Sharmishta saw him, she was confused she went swara n saw her weeping hard.

"Shona kya hua" swara saw her n hugged her "maaa" she kept crying. "Nai shona nai, tu meri strong bchi h, bta hua kya h" asked sharmishta cupping her face. Swara narrated each n everything to her, sharmishta cnt believe laksh cn say that . he swara was not brought up in such environment she cried. But this was high time. It was time for swara to tell about the reality of her life.
"Shona mere sath aa, tujhe kuch dikhana vo raaz vo vajah jiski ki vajah se mene tujhe ye sb smjhaya" she holded swara's hand n took her to cupboard. "Kya hua maa, kesa raaz" she starts taking out the photo albums with tears. Swara stayed silent and simply saw this.
Sharmishta completed her task of taking out albums n then opened it one by one. "Dekh shona ye Teri dida h, meri maa" swara smiled seeing her grandmother. "Pta h shona unhone mujhe hamesha sikhaya tha ki soch smj k Faisla krna lekin me jb bhr padne Jaipur gai tb mene sb galat kr dia shona" swara silently kept listening to her. "Vahan ek ladke se meri mulawat hui, uska naam shekar tha, shekhar GADODIA" swara heard the name silently she realised her maa was world for her she never asked her about her father.
"Shekhar ne dawa kia ki vo mujhse pyaar krta h or mere pyaar ka fayda b uthaya shona, par fr shaadi vale din" sharmishta got tears in her eyes, vo Hume chodke k chale gae shona" she cried. "Fir me vapis Kolkata aa gai, lekin kuch mahine bd mujhe pta lga me maa bnne vali hun,, mujhe smj ni aya me kya krun khn jaun, me bina maa ko btae fr Jaipur gai or mene shekar ko btaya ki me maa bnne vali hun.. Pta h shona ussne kya kha" swara saw her maa's Pain. She was very strong but this lady was one who hd pain in her heart.
"Maa unhe mujhe apnane se mana kia na" swara said with tears. Shomi noded in no "he said ki mujhe mere bche ko dedo or chali jao" swara went mump. "Maaa" she hugged her "acha kia maa apne unhe nai dia mujhe" sharmishta kept crying. "Shona nai beta meri bchi le gae vo" she cried. Swara went in shock. "Ye ap kya keh ri h maa" swara looked her in shock. "Shona mere pet me twins the, tu or... meri ragini" tears flowed from her eyes."pta h shona vo bus 3 saal ki thi jb court ne Faisla kia ki tum mere pass or shona tumhare bab k pass rhegi kyunki unhone jhoot kha ki hmari shadi hui h" swara went in shock. "Me kya krti mujhe apni bchi Deni padi, vo to tumhe b le jate , par mene aisa nai hone dia" shomi n swara hugged each other . "maa ragini meri bhn khn hogi" she said in tears. "Ptani ragu , court ne Faisla kia tha ki ab hum log bus tumhari or ragini ki shaadi me sth aenge." Sharmishta cried. "Maa uski koi photo" swara said. "Hnnn shekhar ne dI thi mene b tumhari bheji thi use, ruku dikhati hun" she handed swara the photo . swara hugged the photo "ragini meri ragini, mera sur meri ragini" she cried.

Ragini was sitting blank in the room. Only one word was echoing in her ears. "Uska naam swara h" she sat on floor "aaa" she cried.
Sanskar was there to tell her wat happened he was shocked listening to ragini . wen he was about to enter "I love u sanskar," sanskar lost his balance "no ragini can't" he flew from there with mixed emotions.

SWARA RAGINI SANSKAR AND LAKSH

Kaise bataayein, kyun tujhko chahe, yaara bataa na paaye.
Ragini cried remembering how sanskar n she had spent number of days with each others , though being best friend but sanskar was always someone more than a friend to her.
"Sanskar kyun ap humse pyaar nai krte, dadimaa to khti thi hum hum ache humse koi b pyaar krle, fr kisse hum itna pyaar krte h, vo humse pyaar kyun nai krta" she cried yelling.

Baatein dilo ki, dekho jo baaki, aankhein tujhe samjhaye.
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na
Sanskar was in pain he came to his flat lifeless . no she doesn't love him n cn never "swara lekin me to tumse bht pyaar krta hoon, bhul Hi nai pa ra tumhe" he hitted his palm on the wall, tears flowed from his eyes.
He cried n just cried.

Milke bhi, hum na mile, tum se na jaane kyun. meelon ke, hai faasle, tum se na jaane kyun. anjaane, hai silsile, tum se na jaane kyun. sapne hai, palkon tale, tum se na jaane kyun.ooo ooo..
Sanskar remembered how she consoled him when he said he was an orphan, n today's hug. He clenched his jaws "no no , mt soch uske bare me sanskar" he banged his head on wall twice , thrice n finally left when blood gushed from his head. He roughly cleaned the blood n gulped the drink in one go. He took the car keys n left.

Kaise bataayein, kyun tujhko chahe, yaara bataa na paaye.
Baatein dilo ki, dekho jo baaki, aankhein tujhe samjhaye.
Tu jaane naa..aaa... tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane naaa...
Laksh was also in pain "kho dia swara mene tumhe kho dia, tum smj Hi nai pai mere pyaar ko" cried laksh. He was with bottle of wine. He was drunk.
He was in roof he was roaming . pain was visible."kya mene kuch galat mang lia tha" his lips shivered. "Nai swara tum nai smjti mujhe" he cried.

Nigahon mein dekho meri, jo hai bas gayaaa..
Woh hai milta tumse hubahuu..
Ooo, jaane teri aankhein thi ya, baatein thi wajaaa..
Swara unknowingly closed her eyes just to see sanskar's hug. She opened eyes in shock. "Ye me" swara cried.
Hue tum jo dil ki aarzoo...
Tum paas ho ke bhi, tum aas ho ke bhiii, ehsaas ho kee bhi, apne nahi...
Sanskar was driving n crying "nai swara me tumse bht pyaar krta hun nai bhul skta tumhe" he cancel the car.

Aise hain, humko gile, tumse na jaane kyun.
Meelon ke, hain faasle, tum se na jaane kyun.ooo...
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na
Ooo jaane na jaane na jaane na .. aaa tu jaane na ..
"Swara tumne mujhe khudse itna dur kyun kr dia swara kyun, hmara rishta khtm hone ki vjh tum ho" laksh yelled
N broke the bottle .he left out in anger.

Khayalon mein, lakhon baatein yun tu keh gaya...
Sanskar thought he had planned a lot to tell her.
Ragini was in bed sobbing hard. "Sanskar hum apse hmesha Pyar krenge islie hum apni dadi k pass vapis Jaipur ja re h" she stood up n blankly packed the bags.

Bola kuch na tere samne...
"Me kitna pagal tha tumse kuch bol b nai paya" tears flowed from his eyes.
Ooo, huea na be-gaane bhi tum hoke haar kein...
Dekho tum na mere hi bane.
Afsos hota hai, dil bhi yeh rota hai, sapne sanjota hai, pagla hua...
Soche ye, hum the mile, tumse na jaane kyun.
Meelon ke, hain faasle, tum se na jaane kyun.
Anjaane, hai silsale, tum se na jaane kyun.
"Tum kisi or ki ho swara kisi or ki lekin mera pyaar hmesha tumhara h sirf tumhara" sanskar made. A wide turn of car.

Sapne hain, palkon tale, tum se na jaane kyun.uuu...
Kaise bataayein, kyun tujhko chahe, yaara bataa na paaye.
Baatein dilo ki, dekho jo baaki, aankhein tujhe samjhaye.
Tu jaane naa.. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaaane na...
"Laksh tumne mujhe tod dia h" cried swara "nafrat krti hun tumse" she cried. N she went out blanky.
"Me tumse pyaar krti hun sanskar" cried ragini.
"Swara sanskar hmesha sirf tumse pyaar krega" sanskar said.
"Swara tumne mera Pyar kho dia" cried laksh.

Ragini was in car she called her dadi "dadi maa hum vapis aa re h" she said parvati on video chat.
"Laddo tu theek h na" asked parvati concerned. "Han hum theek h dadi maa , ap kesi h or baba, acha ye btaie maa ne shona ki photo bheji" she already knew about her sister, parvati was a golden lady , cz of her son she was forced not to accept parvati bt neva hid from ragini abt her maa. But the name swara was not known to her she only knew the name "shona" .
Parvati send her swara's photo "hmari shona" she hugged it. Swara was walking on road "tum aj mere sth hoti ragini to tumse apna dukh batti me" both cried.

Pain. Who was responsible for this pain. Was it laksh ? For whom love was something else. Was it sanskar? For whom love was swara . was it ragini? Who simply kept loving her best friend without asking anything in return. Was it swara? Who loved the essence of love.
Fault of "fate" that will change their lives from the respective night. Everything was about to change.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Emotional update
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