SwaSan , SwaLak , RagLak FF-' IT IS MY FATE' pt 4 pg 11 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niyatiswaragini


It's RagLak n SwaSan only but u will hv swalak n RagSan preceding it so bear n enjoy


C'mon yaar. .tumhare ffs mujhe bear nhi krne pdte I enjoy them..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi dis story is interesting plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Sparkler8



That's so depressing.. I would have cried and shelved all these FFs. ..😭😭

Do you still plan to continue?

Ab mujhe mere wale ke liye bhi darr lag raha hai. I keep all my updates in phone.. i better back them..


Don't wry kuch nai hoga. Cnt afford u loading ur updates shoru I love them. By the way I updated finally wen we looked back
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove


C'mon yaar. .tumhare ffs mujhe bear nhi krne pdte I enjoy them..

Ohhh that's so sweet of u bebs..
Love u
I hope ull enjoy it alot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rachel006

hi dis story is interesting plz update soon

Thank u so much I m really glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1


Mahavir Auditorium

Swara was there with her colleagues. "Bacho" she turned to kids. "Apko aj bht acha gana h okk, mere sir ko smjhke pakadna okk" she smiled n motivated all. It was the big day for them. India's biggest Organizer was going to approve n sponsor their show. Swara wanted it to be selected at any cost.


"Madam vese wat is his name" asked menka to principal. Swara too turned to know his name. "SANSKAR MAHESHWARI" said the principal. "Dekha menka naam se Hi peso ki khushboo aa ri h" they giggled. "Swara tu unke age aisi batein krke hmara kam mt khrb kr dena" said principal playfully. "Acha madam ," they all laughed. "Madam me bcho ko leke andar jati hun ap or swara unhe le aaiega" said menka n took the kids inside the Audi. Swara saw principal who was acting wired. She was sweating a lot. "Kya hua mam" she touched her shoulder. "Swara please tum unhe le aana, I hv to go washroom please" n she ran in . swara giggled at her "ye or inka washroom"

A taxi stood in front of the Audi . swara saw it without blinking the most handsome man came of it. Swara approached him. "Mr. MAHESHWARI" he turned n was amazed to this most beautiful n bubbly girl. "If I m not mistaken" added swara. Sanskar came to his senses. "Ya hii I m sanskar" he forwarded his hand with gentleman attitude. "Mmm hii I M swara Bose, satya music school me teacher hun" she smiled at him. He couldn't deny she made him love her at first site. "I think we should go in" swara suggested , sanskar agreed n they went in.


Sanskar just smiled to this chatterbox swara. Till they the third storey where he was supposed to meet others. He had loved her number of times.


"Ye rhe mere bche" she pointed to them all. "Oh tumhare" he laughed. "Hehehe very funny , u know they school kids. She made fake angry face. " I m just kidding swara" she smiled back n swara went to kids. "Hello mam" sanskar greeted principal. She replied with smile. "Please sit" menka guided him to seat. He sat n enjoyed the song they sung. Actually he was not envoy ng any song but swara's presence her voice, her orbs, her soothing lips. He couldn't take of his eyes from her.

Laksh's house, a small shaby flat with 3 rooms.

"Laksh tu interview ko kb ja ra h c
Beta" shouted her mom sujata. "Maa dawai li h abi tayar ho ra hun ruko" he shouted frm room. She comes to him "swara ko btaya" laksh turned n smacked his head. "Shit bhul gya maa, yaad dilane ke lie thankss, vo aj Hi phn aya to yaad ni rha" he said. Sujata held his shoulder. "Dekh laksh it will be better agr tu use na batae tu har bar batata h or naukari hath ate ate reh jati h" laksh twitched his face. "Maa fr se nai , ye kisne kha h ki use batata hun tb aisa hota h, ap b na" he turned n seted his tie. "Dekh beta fr me don't tell her this time plzz" laksh huffed in annoyance but agreed.
"Acha me chalta hun maa" he hugged his mom n left.
"Swara , he bhagwan is ladki se mere beta ko bachana me ise apne ghr ki bahu kbi nai bnne dungi" she angrily said to herself.

Laksh in AMPLE CONSTRUCTIONS.

He was waiting for his turn to come for interview. "Bhagwan plz is bar naukari dila dena" he joined his hands.
Then entered a girl in formals , pink shirt black trousers n sandsilk blazer with glares n as she entered all greeted her morning.
"Ye kaun h " he asked his fellow mate. "Tumhe ni pta kya , ye ragini GADODIA h yahan ki MD." Laksh was shocked to see her achieving success at his young age as she appeared to be only in early 20s.
She went straight to her room. All were called in one by one.


The n came laksh.

"Wats ur name" he was staring him with pencil's lead in her mouth. "Myself laksh chatterjee." He said confidently. "Mm impressive u r quite confident" ragini praised him and both shared smiles. "So y u want this job." She turned her chair. "I'll be frank here actually I need it desperately as I comes from not so a well to do background." Ragini was really impressed by his straight forward attitude. "Nice Mr. Chatterjee. I liked ur personality. I think ull be perfect for our firm." She came upto him " congrats Mr. Chatterjee" she shakes hands with him. He was amazed moreover very happy that he got this job. He came out shouting n called swara but she dint took the call.

Mahavir auditorium

"Wow u all are very talented" sanskar said to all the kids and swara. "Thankss kya ap hmara show..." Before swara could complete sanskar "yes yes for sure I'll sponser it" all clapped at their achievement.

Swara went out of Audi n saw laksh's miss called. She called him back "kya hua" she said being concerned. "Tum mujhe bus stop pe milna OK" said laksh. "Par tum bimar..." before she could finish he hunged the call. "Bda pagl ladla h ye" she smiled n left.


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Sanskar was going back wen saw swara standing in bus stop. He said his driver to stop the car n went to her. She was sitting engrossed in her world.
Before sanskar could reach he saw a boy approaching her. That boy sat near her n wrapped his hand on her shoulder.
Sanskar stood in shock who was the man trying to touch his swara. His mind clicked wat he just thought "his" he smiled at his feelings for a girl whom he met just couple of hours back.

The boy was laksh "sorry na late ho gya" he said as she was waiting for him from half an hour. "It's OK bt ye btao tum yahan kyun aae mujhe bula lete bimar ho na tum" she touched his forehead. Sanskar simply saw them without reacting. "Arey me theek hun pta h mujhe naukari mil gai'" he took her in hug. She excitedly hugged him back. But then thy realised it was bus stop. "Par kb" she was very happy. "Wait tum aj interview" she glared him to know truth. "Actually swara vo.. Vo. Me gya tha interview k lie, bt I M sorry sorry." He joined his hand n bowed on her lap. Swara saw him in anger. "Ab jyada melodrama mt kro smjhe" n she smiled to him. Sanskar was unable to make out wat he was to swara. A friend boy friend, that he don't wanted him to b or brother, his fvrte thought.

He turned back n went to his car "kal puchta hun swara se." He said to himself n went back to car. Suddenly something struck him "ragini" he smirked n directed driver to her place.

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Swara n laksh were sitting beside each other in bus. "Swara I love u bht Sara" laksh said n gave a peck on her head that was on his shoulder. "Acha to fr shaddi kb kr rhe ho mujhse" she excitedly asked. Laksh made him free from her "wohhh hold on ,pgl to ni ho gai tum pehle mujhe kuch bnne to do" laksh said. Swara never liked his denial of marriage. "Kya laksh job to lg gai h na" swara got angry n turned her face.
Laksh made her face him "acha baba sorry next month shaddi paka paka" she smiled n sat again keeping her head on his shoulder. "Bus tb tk koi or na le jae" thy both laughed at swara's statement.

Ragini's house.
She was watching TV when someone knocked the door. "Ohooo is waqt kaun agya , ache se TV b ni nai dekhne dete" she felt irritated n went to open the door.
She was surprised to see sanskar she hugged him tight in excitement. "Oh mere monkey" still in hug she said. "Tu chipkali kesi h" they broke the hug. "Sanskar I missed u alot." She said. "Even I did yrrr" he came in both sat on the sofa.
"Tu to bht bdi MD bn gai mujhe bhul Hi gai" he said. "Ahahaha like Mr. Monkey is peon han, u r the owner dude, mere MD bnne se mt jal OK" both of them started pillow fight. N at end sanskar hugged her "oh chipkali I missed u SOO much yrrr, mujhe chorke mt jaio ab" ragini was delighted at sanskar's words she wanted to share her feelings with him bt controlled.

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NIYATI

Edited by Niyatiswaragini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Very nice..
Loved the fact that Sanskar fell for Swara at first sight..
Hayye..
Love at first sight..

awesome..
Thank you for the Pm..
continue soon..
Edited by Jidnyasa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Aree confusion. So 1st swalak is n love n she wqants him to marry her. Here ragini's love is onesided. Wat ll happen. So sanskar started loving swara love at first sight. I tnk sujatha ll b the villan for their love and their love ll broke u? Pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Oyeee yaar awesome...
Love at first sight..hmm...
Lovely
Btw tumhe pta h m feeling really bad...yaar maine abhi abhi chapter finish kiya apne ff ka..n connection fail ho gya..saare kiye karaye pr paani..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Oyeee yaar awesome...
Love at first sight..hmm...
Lovely
Btw tumhe pta h m feeling really bad...yaar maine abhi abhi chapter finish kiya apne ff ka..n connection fail ho gya..saare kiye karaye pr paani..

Shit dude mere sth bht hua h .. Even phn b ja chuka h hahahhaa

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