FF: Angel. (Request : Page: 140) - Page 60

Originally posted by: Cintila

I just read all the chapters...! God this FF is sooo cool !! Amazing !👏👏 Loved the characterizations. This update was hilarious 😆😆 the conversation between Gabriel and swara was amazing. Gabriel's reactions were bang on ! Loved it. Please update soon😳

Originally posted by: Sanavi

Aww. Gabriel finds Swara cute. Thts a progress.
I loved their nok jhok related to Kitchen stuff. Nd Gabriel knows how to feel his emotions or is it Swara dear bringing out best in Gabriel.

Waiting for next update. Wanna see how our dear reporter gets her hand on her life's biggest story.

Continue soon dear

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hey Nimmie,

Sorry dear, I did read the update earlier but couldn't find time to write the long comment I wanted to. I was babysitting my nephew, so forgive me!

Saku...
Kids could be handful. hope the little guy didn't trouble you much. no need to apologize girl.🤗. you are here.

So coming to the update, I love the way everyone's behaving here, they could put up a movie anytime they want.

So I was partly right when I said G would want to stay back, hidden for some more time. And partly right when I said, he would refuse the interview. But enjoyed their interaction a lot. Some of those responses really cracked me up!

you do out guess the story Saku..
thank you so much for liking the update.

I don't think he should give any kind of information to that lady, that is too dangerous. The moment that piece airs everyone would know exactly who gave the tip and exactly where they can find both of them. At the moment that would be like calling up Ram Prasad and saying...hey mate I'm sleeping in a pink room at Swara Bose's house, come kill me!

hahaha.. true that. pink room! imagine the reactions of other guy if they find Gabriel in pink bedroom wearing a winnie the pooh blanket.

Swara was frightened right? Gosh, I thought this girl was incapable of feeling fear, but when she did, I was smirking. I really loved the way you built up the scene there, she was not afraid of what he was doing, she was afraid of what he could do...thrilling in a ice cold way.

wow.. loved the way you put it. he surely put the fear of God in her.. but she got over it too soon.😆. That's our girl.

Can't wait to read the next part! Please continue soon!

gonna update soon.
thank you so very much Saku for reading the update and this wonderful comment. *hugs*

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

Hey hie just completed reading your story and my my what a piece of work you've put up together after every chapter all I felt is ye dil maange more..

Gabriel aka Sanskaar and Swara's camaraderie is so so so so beautiful and unique in its own way I love their sarcastic retorts which are saved for each other..

Not to forget Swara's ane Bozo's friendship ohh it's endearing to read their conversation..

Update soon can't wait to read more..

And ohhh I love the synonym you used for the boss here "Dragon" Hahaha it's classy girl..

With regards,

Kashmi

Originally posted by: princess2791

Sorry to late reply. U r update is always amazing. Gabriel is cute and caring. Swara is still behaving stupid. Update soon. Waiting.

Originally posted by: PriSwaSan

Phewww...finally able to catch up ur latest update after reading all the chapters...🥳

Loved the FF...it's like I'm watching a movie with full of action..drama..humour..and so on..The story has everything in it...
U r an awesome writer...so talented...👏
The Characterizations r superb...👏
Gabriel...by every chapter my love for him is increasing..he's just amazing..has a great sense of humour too..😉
Swara..aww..she's really brave..I won't called her stupid..it takes guts to ask for an IV to an Assassin...👍🏼
Bozo..love him too..he's so funny..his every statement is hilarious..🤣
Swara-Bozo friendship...aww..too cute..😊

Love the conversation between Gabriel & Swara..❤️

Love the title..I'm little confused with it..Is the title has double meaning in it??...
I mean who's the Angel??

The Angel of Death..GABRIEL..or,

Is it SWARA...who saved the life of Angel of Death..??


If possible then plz pm me when u'll be updated the next chapter..😊

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Wow gabriel an all rounder ,interesting dr👏👏

Continue soon baby😃

Originally posted by: dimaag

Hey Nimmi 😉
Amazing girl! That conversation was unexpected. Gabriel's behavior has slightly changed. One time he is the normal next door guy but then the next second he is again the evil pain loving underworld assasin. I liked the way you have portrait the reality in the story. Even if Gabriel is a strong man yet he understands that he is not totally fit to fight with the world outside and take the other man down. Swara too has reasons to persuade an assassin like him. And yeah their conversation was rocking 😆
Superb update 👏 and thanks for the pm. Do update soon my girlfriend 😉
-N 😛

Originally posted by: -Ros-

*Holds ears and makes puppy eyes* Sowwy!

Boy, am I glad I didn't have to face those temple bells!

I've edited my comment a little now.. realised some parts made no sense lol. That's the result of me multi tasking- reading LUs from Swasan AT& going crazy and writing a reply. 😆 Girls are supposed to be good at this stuff right? 😕

Nimmie, you are the sweetest for writing such a cute reply!😳