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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww. Gabriel finds Swara cute. Thts a progress.
I loved their nok jhok related to Kitchen stuff. Nd Gabriel knows how to feel his emotions or is it Swara dear bringing out best in Gabriel.

Waiting for next update. Wanna see how our dear reporter gets her hand on her life's biggest story.

Continue soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Nimmie,
Sorry dear, I did read the update earlier but couldn't find time to write the long comment I wanted to. I was babysitting my nephew, so forgive me!

So coming to the update, I love the way everyone's behaving here, they could put up a movie anytime they want.

So I was partly right when I said G would want to stay back, hidden for some more time. And partly right when I said, he would refuse the interview. But enjoyed their interaction a lot. Some of those responses really cracked me up!

I don't think he should give any kind of information to that lady, that is too dangerous. The moment that piece airs everyone would know exactly who gave the tip and exactly where they can find both of them. At the moment that would be like calling up Ram Prasad and saying...hey mate I'm sleeping in a pink room at Swara Bose's house, come kill me!

Swara was frightened right? Gosh, I thought this girl was incapable of feeling fear, but when she did, I was smirking. I really loved the way you built up the scene there, she was not afraid of what he was doing, she was afraid of what he could do...thrilling in a ice cold way.

Can't wait to read the next part! Please continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey hie just completed reading your story and my my what a piece of work you've put up together after every chapter all I felt is ye dil maange more..
Gabriel aka Sanskaar and Swara's camaraderie is so so so so beautiful and unique in its own way I love their sarcastic retorts which are saved for each other..

Not to forget Swara's ane Bozo's friendship ohh it's endearing to read their conversation..

Update soon can't wait to read more..

And ohhh I love the synonym you used for the boss here "Dragon" Hahaha it's classy girl..

With regards,
Kashmi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Phewww...finally able to catch up ur latest update after reading all the chapters...🥳

Loved the FF...it's like I'm watching a movie with full of action..drama..humour..and so on..The story has everything in it...
U r an awesome writer...so talented...👏
The Characterizations r superb...👏
Gabriel...by every chapter my love for him is increasing..he's just amazing..has a great sense of humour too..😉
Swara..aww..she's really brave..I won't called her stupid..it takes guts to ask for an IV to an Assassin...👍🏼
Bozo..love him too..he's so funny..his every statement is hilarious..🤣
Swara-Bozo friendship...aww..too cute..😊

Love the conversation between Gabriel & Swara..❤️

Love the title..I'm little confused with it..Is the title has double meaning in it??...
I mean who's the Angel??

The Angel of Death..GABRIEL..or,

Is it SWARA...who saved the life of Angel of Death..??


If possible then plz pm me when u'll be updated the next chapter..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow gabriel an all rounder ,interesting dr👏👏
Continue soon baby😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmie 🤗
As always, the conversation between Gabriel and Swara is fully paisa vasool! 😆 The way they communicate each other, the rapport they have with each other.. I just can't help wonder if they've met before? Perhaps she was directly or indirectly part of Gabriel's past. That ease between them reminded me of those college flicks which has a girl and guy who're always down each others' throat ... they meet again at a reunion & old sparks fly, they go back to making each other's lives hell, but with a pinch of humour this time. I might be going crazy 🤔, but I just love the nature of their convos.

So Swara was about to give it back to him, but chose not to because that would ruin her chances of getting an interview not because she was having dinner with an assassin. 🤪The girl truly is a unique piece! 😛

Hey Gaby, I thought you were man of few words who wasn't interested in other people's lives. 😉He asked her questions about her life... how she manages without knowing the ABCD of cooking, whether Bozo is her boyfriend (Oh, Gaby! 😆).. this is probably the most human and normal I've seen him. It's not love or even friendship, but these two have something else.. she does have an affect on him. And aawww they have the cosmic connection here too..

You've been giving us this witty and rather lighter shaded Gabriel in the past few updates & then suddenly, BAM the menacing devil resurfaced for a short while, absolutely petrifying Swara (Finally). I wasn't expecting him to do that, although I should've been expecting him to do exactly that (does that even make any sense? 🤪) What he did next surprised me even more.. he goes and makes her a cuppa & went back to adding fuel to her fury. 😲 Does he trust her then? Trust this to be her goodness & nothing else?

Glad Swara got a reality check... at least for a short while! 😆 I admire the girl for being gutsy- she knows she's in the deepest shit but still thought of making full use of the situation. ⭐️ And here we go again.. she goes back to being herself, moments later after she was pinned to the wall by a murderer. The same way she entered the house feeling pretty anxious, but as soon as they start conversing, she almost forgets she's actually chitchatting with the most wanted man. It's like neither of them can help but throw those hilarious, sarcastic taunts on each other.

He thought she was CUTE. Omgfjgsdkj. ☺️ Don't get too attached, Gaby! Smiling and laughing with her has become very habitual to him now... I wonder if he even realises it..
Swara's dad plays a very important part in her life, doesn't he? Seems his teachings comes to her mind whenever she is in trouble. Can't wait to read more about this beautiful relationship.

PS: I thought Bozo wouldn't have let Swara come and manofy Gaby on her own.. I was thinking we would get their first meeting in this update.. teasing your readers Nimmie? 😲.. I hope he's the one who gets to see Gaby sleeping in Winnie the Pooh blanket. 😆😉

Edited by -Ros- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Ros-

Nimmie 🤗

As always, the conversation between Gabriel and Swara is fully paisa vasool! 😆 The way they communicate each other, the rapport they have with each other.. I just can't help wonder if they've met before? Perhaps she was directly or indirectly part of Gabriel's past. That ease between them reminded me of those college flicks which has a girl and guy who're always down each others' throat during.. they meet again at a reunion & old sparks fly, they go back to making each other's lives hell, but with a pinch of humour this time.. I might be going crazy 🤔, but I just love the nature of their convos.

So Swara was about to give it back to him, but chose not to because that would ruin her chances of getting an interview not because she was having dinner with an assassin. 🤪The girl is a unique piece! 😛

Hey Gaby, I thought you were man of few words who wasn't interested in other people's lives. 😉 He asks her questions about her life.. how she manages without knowing the ABCD of cooking, whether Bozo was her boyfriend (Oh Gaby! 😆).. this is probably the most human and normal I've seen him. It's not love or even friendship, but these two have something else.. she does have an affect on him. And aawww they have the cosmic connection here too..

You've been giving us this witty and rather lighter shade of Gabriel in the past few updates and BAM the menacing devil was back in a sec.😲 Then he goes and makes her a cuppa.. he doesn't see her as a threat, obviously & he's back to adding fuel to her fury. 😆

Glad Swara got a check to... at least for a short while! 😆 I admire the girl for being gutsy- she knows she's in deep shit but still thought of making use of the situation. ⭐️ And here we go again.. she goes back to being herself, moments later after she was pinned to the wall by a murderer. It's like neither of them can help but throw those hilarious, sarcastic taunts on each other.

He thought she was CUTE. Omgfjgsdkj. ☺️ Don't get too attached, Gaby! Smiling and laughing with her has become very habitual to him now.. I wonder if he even realises it..
Swara's dad plays a very important part in her life, doesn't he? Seems his teachings comes to her mind whenever she is in trouble. Can't wait to read more about this beautiful relationship.

PS: I thought Bozo wouldn't have let Swara come and manofy Gaby on her own.. I was thinking we would get their first meeting in this update.. teasing your readers Nimmie? 😲.. I hope he's the one who gets to see Gaby sleeping in Winnie the Pooh blanket. 😆😉



HA!
here you are 😳.

was about to send those earrings of Swara that you so love down to your dream valley.
Late latiff!
*thappi on head*

gotta go now.
to quote Arnold Swaz.. something.. (could never pronounce that guys' name).. I'll be back!


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

HA!
here you are 😳.

was about to send those earrings of Swara that you so love down to your dream valley.
Late latiff!
*thappi on head*

gotta go now.
to quote Arnold Swaz.. something.. (could never pronounce that guys' name).. I'll be back!



*Holds ears and makes puppy eyes* Sowwy!
Boy, am I glad I didn't have to face those temple bells!
I've edited my comment a little now.. realised some parts made no sense lol. That's the result of me multi tasking- reading LUs from Swasan AT& going crazy and writing a reply. 😆 Girls are supposed to be good at this stuff right? 😕
Nimmie, you are the sweetest for writing such a cute reply!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Aww...

Gabriel and swara talk was fun to read!!!
swara doesn't know how to cook!!

Jidnyasa..
🤗.
Thank you..
Hey she can cook a mean instant noodle😆



great...
Gabriel sort of saved swara's share of Pizza..
and also ordered the dinner!!!
anything for food. bhooke pet ka sawal you see.

great!!!
So caring he is,but wait is he??
abhi waqt hai for that.

Gabriel said he would murder some1 for free for saving him !!!
🤣

Gabriel,Whom will swara want to murder??
She is a reporter dude!!!
She will need a bodyguard i guess That will be OK!!!
bodyguard eh! yup that's what she needs😆

Anyways.. loved reading it..
Continue soon..
Thank you so much girl for reading the update and commenting.😳.
will update soon.


thank you for the pm..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: foresight

their interaction was really nice...swara going into the discussion without thinking, then waking up to the reality, getting scared, then trying to blackmail him into helping her because she save him...his response to her was hilarious...and finally both of them stuck together for sometime, while he recovers...like this update a lot. gabriel is feeling some softer feelings towards miss bose



Sapna..
🤗

Thank you so much dearie for reading the update, liking it and commenting😳.
yup.. that's our Swara.. act first think later.

haha.. he indeed seemed to have soften up towards her. let's see how it goes from now on.
'
thanx again.


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