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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#611

Thanks for the PM Nimmi,

I loved it, and as usual i didnt want it to end. when i reached the last line i was little sad it was over .

So coming to the chapter Gabriel and Swara interactions make my day and i know Gabriel will say yes but i like that he is not taking the decision so soon.

Also liked how he started to understand Swara and her intentions . While he know her being overly nice is for the interview , he also knew she is genuinely a good person too.

Do continue soon and let me know Nimmi .

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#612

I have to give it to this swara for her persistence. she is a tough girl...and hearing about maa and baba, i guess she needed to be. she may have once been scared of him, but now she isnt shy and worried in any way to give him back. she is blunt with him and there is some attraction there going on as well,

they have gone into a sort of friendly comraderie even...one that i would like to see more off.

for his part, he has definitely been more than intrigued by her...and i feel not just by her innocence, but also her upfrontness in telling him she would have gone to the police. i am looking forward to the day he opens up to her...and she wants him to...not for the story but for themselves.

loved how he protected her when it came to KC, though i do agreed with swara, she didnt need protection, but with gabriel in the picture, KC isn't going to even think of his selfish way hopefully for some time...at least directly expecting it from swara...though i do wonder and feel that there will be a time when he will be the guy who blurts their location to the enemies and makes then run.

looking forward to the next part

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#613

Nimmie! 🤗

First of all... ☺️.. for shirtless Gaby. I'm already on drool mode after seeing Sanskaar looking so dapper in yesterday's epi & this has just added fuel to my fangirling.

He knows her does he? And he can read her? .. I'm not saying anything... *smiles gleefully*

KC. 😡 He's the first character I've come to dislike in your story. I hate arrogant, dimwits like him. 🤢 He's trouble and nothing else. Would he use anything from their relationship against Swara in the future? He sounds like the sort who would do just that!

Go Gaby! Defending his girlfriend whom he is living with (what? he didn't deny it. 😛). I wish KC didn't accept defeat so easily and gave himself an opportunity to be flung down from the balcony. 😔

Swara & the Fridge. 😆 One could write a set of short stories on this.

Nimmie, you just made Gabriel ask all the questions that's been running through my head! So we finally got to know the method behind her madness.

Gabriel stared at the girl standing in front of him for a long moment. She is the girl who could jump into sea risking her life to save a stranger; a girl who barges in the middle of a violent war oblivious to the dangers; a girl who could make deals with a devil i.e. an Assassin like himself. Yet she is same girl who believes that her parents are watching over her from heavenly abode with a child like innocence.

And lives by their principles even when they are long gone.

Who is this girl?

How wonderfully you've penned this down Nimmie. ⭐️ Even I was in awe of Swara, just like Gaby. She's defo a pineapple & Gaby is a coconut for sure.. he sympathised with her loss & his emotional side is slowly peeping out. This girl is going to keep fascinating him with her against-the-norm nature. How ironic was that he thought he had her all figured out & now he's ended up with even more questions. Maybe he should search the fridge? 😉

The answer is still..? 😲 I honestly have no clue what is going to happen next. I'm not getting anything.. waiting for next update Nimmie!!! 🤗

PS: Re your reply, I can't write a story to save my life. 😆 I'm just not patient enough & can't weave words together like you and the many wonderful writers in this forum can.

Oooh new guyyy 😲... I'm even more intrigued, if that's even altogether possible!

Edited by -Ros- - 9 years ago

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#614

Hey Nimmi...

I had a big smile plastered on my face as I read the chapter. But as I moved on to the later portions, it turned to me a serene and calm one. It was beautifully heart-rending. The kind which tugs at your heart strings. The emotions were not blatant, but still it was so poetically beautiful! ❤️

Gabriel is right. She is an enigma! You unfold a different shade of her with each update of yours. She truly deserves respect for the person she is.

Okay! Coming back to the beginning of the chapter. I was giggling continuously at the interaction of Swara, Gabriel and KC; and the later conversation of Gaby and Swara. Keys and notepad in the fridge! And she even went on to look for her shoes in the fridge! This girl is seriously crazy! She would never fail to surprise Gariel! 😆

Gabriel is stupefied by her innocence! And yes, her innocence is the only thing that would crack the cold walls around his heart. Innocence is the one thing which is present nowhere in his world. Her warmth will surely melt him. And with that will come a sense of responsibility and protectiveness towards her.

Wow! This journey is going to be awesome! I can't wait to get my hands on the rest of the story! Update soon Nimmi! Super-soon!!! Can't control my eagerness! 😃

Thank yo so much for the pm buddy!

Love,

Ashi 🤗

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Hey Nimmie...
I knew someday we would come to this...When G would surprised for a second time about Swara's innocence.

Even I was little touched there...the way she referred to her parents, long gone and their teachings. Looking at her glittery outer shell one can hardly guess she has so much bitterness inside right? Like a coconut, strong on the outside and tender from within.

If something could unsettle a man of G's aura, that would be the innocence. The knowledge that would could hurt them gravely still not finding the strength to do it...would be their kind of falling in love. Warm...protective and strong...hmm...I'm already in the dream land.

So...still no for the interview huh? Let's see, how long the pact stands!

Coming to KC...this guy is trouble. Don't know why...but he is trouble, on what level I can't be certain yet...but trouble he is.

Missed Bonzo in this chapter...but we'll see him in the next right?

I liked the car keys and notepad in the fridge thing😆 She even went to search for her shoes there! Crazy girl!

Looking forward to read more, continue soon!

What a wonderful comment Saku🤗.

loved you description of Swara..
and your thoughts about innocence and how it would touch our Gabriel.
Beautiful!

KC.. well . chalo will update about him. you already guessed it right as usual.

yup Bozo is gonna make his comeback. Swara never fails to drag him in her own mess. (or so he complains😆).

she is crazy alright. a foil to our sorted guy. (so what if he just happens to be an Assassin😆).

Thank you SO much Saku for this wonderful comment.
big hugs once again.

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mayasingh

@mayasingh

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#616

Chapter 23... Swara and Gabriel interaction... very interesting...
so while he is healing getting interested in our girl...

I loved the portion where she said she is responsible for his life now :)
Gabriel was knocked out of his feet..
Ha ha Gabriel is feeling protective for our girl...
Waiting for next chapter eagerly...

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bhshre95

@bhshre95

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#617

Amazing update👏

Loved Gabriel swara interaction😳 looking forward for more of it n aww Gaby is stunned by swara's innocence😳 n maa baba Part was really emotional

N lol swara keeps keys n all in fridge😆

N every time swara does something Gaby says answer is still no😆 hopefully he agrees soon

Plz update soon😃😃

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Cintila

@Cintila

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#618

I'm back..!😎

I dont know what to say...you've left me amazed. How do you write so well ? The fridge part was soo damn hilarious man..!!🤣 loved it. I love Gaby and his attitude 😎 and swara is such a cutie..!😳 Her maa-baba part was so emotional. No wonder gaby was surprised at her innocence. I cant wait to read further. The swasan KC conversation was awesome !!😆😆 I love this ff. Don't leave me hanging...please update soon😳😆

Okay so now that i'll be commenting on your works regularly, we need to have a formal introduction right ? So..Hello, I'm Tuhina. You can call me Tuhi 😉. I guess you remember me...I'm the same one who kept posting crap gif's on the 'swara's I LOVE YOU ' thread 🤣

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: rose1998

❤️
Wow Nimmie.
I liked this update dil se.
Great work,loved Gabby-Swara team against KC.
Keep it up

Rose..
🤗

Thank you so much dear.
for reading the update, liking it and this comment.

love ya.

Edited by Banjaaran... - 9 years ago

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#620

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...
Hi machi ., lovely update .
Gaby's convo with kc is fun re.Gaby ginger bondings good.Swaras hospitality is sooo touchy u know that.
Swaras babas philosophy is nice.

And Gaby's reaction for Swaras answers was bang on .

I think he is melting.he will give her his story.

Gabriel is mixture of BOURN &HITMAN.. for me re.

Pushups in one hand without shirt ooohhh.
Is quite hot re.

Swara kept her car key in fridge. I kept my mobile in fridge re.

Chennai is fine.rocking yaar.We overcome a tragedy With unity.

I wrote a story on swasan if got time read and comment.
[BR..

Kamila

Machi..
🤗

Thank you so much for liking the update re.
and this comment..

will he give his story?.. hummm let's see. i guess he will. Swara won't leave him in peace otherwise.

Bourne and Hitman.. wow.. Gabriel is lucky to imbibe such awesome characters.. thankh ku.

Hot hu😆.. he will keep getting hotter. yo!

hahah.. mobile in fridge.. chalo me feeling better now. i just stand for eternity in front of it thinking ki.. why did i open the fridge?

Heartwarming to hear about Chennai Machi. your city and her beautiful people truly showed the way to overcome a tragedy. Bravo.

read the story dear. Awesome start! continue soon.

Thanx again girl.. *hugs*

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