Elixir SwaSan SS complete - Page 40

Originally posted by: manasie23

Saku I dont know what to say... I seriously was smiling and crying at the same time... it was such a beautiful chapter... this is one of the best stories I have ever read...

I felt so bad for Ragini that all her life was based on a lie woven by her spineless father and that in the accident she recalled it was indeed Swara who had lost her mother and not Ragini... Thank God tables turned and Ragini sided with Swara and sanskaar for the first time...

And lakshya giving drugs to swara and making her rememver it all was a trap set for him to spit out the truth from him... he was indeed obsessed with Swara because he had noticed the loved between SwaSan and was either jealous that is brother was happy or why he did not have it...

And also the last bit of elixir was sooo beautiful

I am a part of you, world is for the rest.

Flames don't malign what they touch, what is pure belongs to them only.'

Loved these lines...
I just wish Elixir would have never ended... Please do write more..

Originally posted by: geetkumar

I really really wish that you would have written the script. what crap are th Cvs writing. they should just come here and read it once. then they would have found a real treasure. One of the best stories I have read so far. 👏

Originally posted by: abika

Wowww

Awesome

Will miss it

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Saku...

for once..I am speechless..and i will not say anything about the twists and turns of this chapter. the last touch of shai was just too good.and u corrected ragini. and thank u for laksh's arrest.

your language throughout and that slight teasing note of the swsan scene..the old sanskaar remembered by his painting things...ethereal is the only word for it.

i am ur AC. or fridge. or whatever. be back with some new thing soon.

Originally posted by: chemgirl

Its just awesome...i luv it...plz write the next...i am waitung...this one was too gud