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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson
Awesome update. Loved it. Waiting for the next update

Thank you😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi
Hey Sakura the update was fantastic
Swara saving Sanskar...
Their journey back home
Their scenes with Parineeta...
Lakshya wants to drug Swara...
Ragini is such a bi**h
I hope Sanskar paints Swara's portrait...
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

Thanks Mansi😊

Don't hate Ragini too much why bother with them when we have SwaSan?

I'll update soon😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: TRPS
as usual brilliant Saku!! day by day more alluring... the drizzling of Swasan's love, so pure, so serene, so cosmic... all thanks to you for writing such magical couple..

Thank you😳

Ah words lovely to a deadly extent😳😳

I'll update soon😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: SwaSanFanGirl
That was such a cute update..OMG
I am really scared what Ragya are planning.
Update soon

Thank you so much😊

Don't be scared, I'll update soon😃

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#385

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#386

Saku I dont know what to say... I seriously was smiling and crying at the same time... it was such a beautiful chapter... this is one of the best stories I have ever read...

I felt so bad for Ragini that all her life was based on a lie woven by her spineless father and that in the accident she recalled it was indeed Swara who had lost her mother and not Ragini... Thank God tables turned and Ragini sided with Swara and sanskaar for the first time...

And lakshya giving drugs to swara and making her rememver it all was a trap set for him to spit out the truth from him... he was indeed obsessed with Swara because he had noticed the loved between SwaSan and was either jealous that is brother was happy or why he did not have it...

And also the last bit of elixir was sooo beautiful

I am a part of you, world is for the rest.

Flames don't malign what they touch, what is pure belongs to them only.'

Loved these lines...
I just wish Elixir would have never ended... Please do write more..

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geetkumar

@geetkumar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#387

I really really wish that you would have written the script. what crap are th Cvs writing. they should just come here and read it once. then they would have found a real treasure. One of the best stories I have read so far. 👏

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#388

Saku...🤗

for once..I am speechless..and i will not say anything about the twists and turns of this chapter. the last touch of shai was just too good.and u corrected ragini. and thank u for laksh's arrest.

your language throughout and that slight teasing note of the swsan scene..the old sanskaar remembered by his painting things...ethereal is the only word for it.

i am ur AC. or fridge. or whatever. be back with some new thing soon.

this story especially will stay with me for a very very long time...snow queen and ice king were brilliant too..but this one was way better than them. maybe because this had that hard hits and softer sweeteners blended perfectly.

Could elixir possibly taste sweeter?--they are your own words after all.😉

Edited by medhasankar - 10 years ago