Elixir SwaSan SS complete - Page 42

Originally posted by: swa291

I dont know what to comment.

The words have taken me to another world

So was I,' said Sanskar. We both hurt each other until we bled for the other, broke each other until we could touch our hearts, fought against until each became the other's shield.'

It was a bizarre way to fall in love,' she agreed. Thankfully it's dawn now.'

Yes, the first light, the silver light.'

It touched me some how...

Keep writing

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Sakura 🤗 This is so amazing!! I'm speechless. How beautifully you connected the poison and the elixir to something beyond them. I loved it!!

Shai as Ragini's mother was so unexpected yet it seemed to right and fitting. The twists and turns which finally nullified all her hate and lead her to a new beginning was brilliant.

Sanskaar picking up the brush and painting was so symbolic. With her help, He finally healed and she is blossoming with his support and opened her mind and heart to the new horizon. They finally washed away the bitterness of poison with elixir. I loved the teasing and easy companionship they shared.

Waiting for your next SS...

Originally posted by: simsen23

Simply WOW...its superb...u know u should write more and more and more..i love ur writing style,words...plz write another one with a happy ending like always...lots of love... 😊 😆 😃

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

Wonderful update and a beautiful yet fitting end to an intriguing story. I enjoyed reading the series...Please do write another one. Thank you for a great story😊

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Saku...a thousand claps will not do! An exhilarating experience. Have not been following the serial but loved every part of this Short Story.

The elixir and poison parts blended in so well, it was like a soulful song. I seem to have lost my vocab senses, intermittent I hope. No words to praise your work.! 👏👏👏

The fragility of a relationship was beautifully portrayed thru out the excellent updates of each part, I'm overwhelmed with emotions.

Super write up. Thank you.

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

Main trupt hogai jaise elixir poison k effect se trupt karta hai waise hi aapki kahaniya mere jaise kahno ptemiyo ko trupt karta hai. Aapk agli kahani ka inteezar rahega. Aur ragini ki maa. Shock .aur lux saaboon ka arrest bura nahin laga par acha bhi nahin laga
Bus ek bahit bada dhanyavaad.

Originally posted by: Kushimian89

superb👏

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awesome update dear

Loved it

The change in heart of Ragini was awesome

Please please write an epilogue

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Nice...

Sanskar painted till early morning..

How sweet of him..

Lucky wicked person..

Thank god Ragini came back to her sense..

All thanks to Sanskar..

Loved the end..

Return soon with new story..

Originally posted by: Kryztal

Read it in one go... Honestly... i didn't know what to expect... but you got me hooked with the very first line. Loved it!!! Keep up the good work... and I hope you don't mind me asking if you are a professional? Because this was a piece of an art!!!❤️