Elixir SwaSan SS complete - Page 41

Saku...a thousand claps will not do! An exhilarating experience. Have not been following the serial but loved every part of this Short Story.

Main trupt hogai jaise elixir poison k effect se trupt karta hai waise hi aapki kahaniya mere jaise kahno ptemiyo ko trupt karta hai. Aapk agli kahani ka inteezar rahega. Aur ragini ki maa. Shock .aur lux saaboon ka arrest bura nahin laga par acha bhi nahin laga
Bus ek bahit bada dhanyavaad.

Awesome update dear

Nice...

Read it in one go... Honestly... i didn't know what to expect... but you got me hooked with the very first line. Loved it!!! Keep up the good work... and I hope you don't mind me asking if you are a professional? Because this was a piece of an art!!!❤️

Do you know how awesome, amazing & wonderful writer you are!!! I'm prefer to be a silent reader Bt you forced me to say how much I loved your every piece of writing. No not you actually your writing did!

life is a circle...what goes around comes around. it started with Shai and ended beautifully with her. loved it as always. hadn't expected this twist 👏 👏 👏

What an awesome way to end Elixir, i absolutely loved it . Do write more . Waiting for your next FF or OS whatever it is. Continue writing .

Originally posted by: -Jamina

It was mindblowing 👏
Yours FF is always in my favourite list
Really felt bad for Rags
End 😲 I want more saku 😭
Please come back with a new story