Elixir SwaSan SS complete - Page 38

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

mindblowing update ,loved it so much 👏👏👏

Waiting for the next update😊😊

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

Loved it... A beautiful update...mostly happy. Waiting for your next.

Originally posted by: abika

Loved the update

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Lovely update and boy, am I ever so glad that Swara didn't fall in Kavita's trap! It was great that she remembered Kavita and that SwaSan left that house of horrors!

What exactly is RagLak's plan with those drugs? I hope they don't harm our adorable couple!

So Swara saved Sanskaar and got injured in the process? I was expecting that actually and it was so nice to read about an obviously in love SwaSan coming down to the end!

I am so looking forward to the next update and I hope you continue soon...

Originally posted by: princess_tara

nice update

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Awww..

The drive back to home was nice...

so swara was the one who saved sanskar form the blast...

She loves her so much..

Ragz and lucky are just sick!!!!

Hate them...

sanskar paints.😲..

That's interesting..

Hey I want read how swara fall sanskar after there marriage!!!

Would you write some lovely-dovely moment between SwaSan???

I guess Sanskar will paint his present,his future - swara???

Sorry for the stupid thought!!!

Continue soon..

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

Yippee update mera kal ka din bahut khali gaya. Aur sanskaar swara ko paint karega . Main ab wait kar rahi hoon 4 next update.

Originally posted by: arohijsp

I just read all the updates at once. It's amazing.
So how did Swara manage to reach Sanskaar before the bomb blast? Last update ended in a cliffhanger..can't wait until I read the next! Pls update soon. I've fallen in love with Sanskaar's character allover again. I love Swara aswell. I prefer your version to the illogical storyline in Swaragini nowadays.

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Saku...

Perhaps it's because you belong to me, that sense had made me forget myself and remember you instead.'----👏👏

Laksh wanted to use the drug on swara..oof. cannot waste my time on him.😡

the way swara read his pain..and consoled him...saying love is a very small word for what i am feeling now.😳

that journey where she is hurt trying to turn him around...

I adore parineeta here. and the way swara said, kavita is pitiable..and the face u painted was not what u thought u loved. masterstroke.👏

and she is teaching him to paint again. bringing colours back into his life. that forehead touch.umm.

love--

medha.

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Sometimes, one comes across something which is so beautiful, in a pristine, fragile manner, one is almost scared to speak or breathe loudly. For fear of breaking that spell, that shimmering veil of beauty.

Some of the dialogues in this chapter had that air of almost aching, poignant loveliness, Saku. I had to catch my breath when I read them, and just HAD to go over them again. They left me with a lump in my throat and a tear in my eye. Very well structured.

These exchanges were gems, literally. I am going to bookmark this chapter for future reading. 😊

""Perhaps it's because you belong to me, that sense had made me forget myself and remember you instead.""

""For what I'm feeling at the moment,' she said softly, pulling back her hand. His skin felt cold after losing her contact. Love is a very small word.'...

Ah words, knifes that kill tenderly with love."""

""I don't wish to take your life,' she said boldly but her cheeks turned a shade darker...

I know; it is yours from the beginning.""

...

""No Sanskar,' she objected softly. It's an unfulfilled dream.'

Yes, an innocent dream turned in to a nightmare. I might have been a fool to paint her.'

Do you hate her?'

No, what I loved she never was, what she is I never loved...

That is a painting of the woman I loved, of the dream I had...Kavita can never take that place. That painting is stroked with my thoughts, it is too beyond her capacity.""

I also loved the symbolism in the chapter, the painting of Kavita, for example is in evening colors. May I have the liberty of hazarding a guess, that the painting Sanskaar would now create, will have Swara as his muse, and will be in the blazing colors of a new sunrise? 😊 😳

Lakshya seems to be sinking lower and lower...at this rate, he ultimately has to rise somehow, he would soon hit rock bottom with nowhere left to sink, even for such a toad as himself! Asking Ragini, to "clear his path" to Swara, planning to ask her politely to leave with him, and failing that, being perfectly willing to use drugs!

Ragini: you have described her in a most serpentine manner, with her sibilant hisses and virulent plotting. 😉

So we are close to the finale, huh? Guess that means a heart pounding chapter 10. 😛 Can't wait. BTW please don't let Parineeta Bhabhi get too badly hurt in defending Swara. 😕 I like her here!