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Posted: 10 years ago
Sometimes, one comes across something which is so beautiful, in a pristine, fragile manner, one is almost scared to speak or breathe loudly. For fear of breaking that spell, that shimmering veil of beauty.

Some of the dialogues in this chapter had that air of almost aching, poignant loveliness, Saku. I had to catch my breath when I read them, and just HAD to go over them again. They left me with a lump in my throat and a tear in my eye. Very well structured.

These exchanges were gems, literally. I am going to bookmark this chapter for future reading. 😊

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Perhaps it's because you belong to me, that sense had made me forget myself and remember you instead.""

""For what I'm feeling at the moment,' she said softly, pulling back her hand. His skin felt cold after losing her contact. Love is a very small word.'...

Ah words, knifes that kill tenderly with love."""

""I don't wish to take your life,' she said boldly but her cheeks turned a shade darker...

I know; it is yours from the beginning.""

...

""No Sanskar,' she objected softly. It's an unfulfilled dream.'

Yes, an innocent dream turned in to a nightmare. I might have been a fool to paint her.'

Do you hate her?'

No, what I loved she never was, what she is I never loved...

That is a painting of the woman I loved, of the dream I had...Kavita can never take that place. That painting is stroked with my thoughts, it is too beyond her capacity.""


I also loved the symbolism in the chapter, the painting of Kavita, for example is in evening colors. May I have the liberty of hazarding a guess, that the painting Sanskaar would now create, will have Swara as his muse, and will be in the blazing colors of a new sunrise? 😊 😳

Lakshya seems to be sinking lower and lower...at this rate, he ultimately has to rise somehow, he would soon hit rock bottom with nowhere left to sink, even for such a toad as himself! Asking Ragini, to "clear his path" to Swara, planning to ask her politely to leave with him, and failing that, being perfectly willing to use drugs!

Ragini: you have described her in a most serpentine manner, with her sibilant hisses and virulent plotting. 😉

So we are close to the finale, huh? Guess that means a heart pounding chapter 10. 😛 Can't wait. BTW please don't let Parineeta Bhabhi get too badly hurt in defending Swara. 😕 I like her here!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. Loved it. Waiting for the next update

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Sakura the update was fantastic
Swara saving Sanskar...
Their journey back home
Their scenes with Parineeta...
Lakshya wants to drug Swara...
Ragini is such a bi**h
I hope Sanskar paints Swara's portrait...
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
as usual brilliant Saku!! day by day more alluring... the drizzling of Swasan's love, so pure, so serene, so cosmic... all thanks to you for writing such magical couple..
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was such a cute update..OMG
I am really scared what Ragya are planning.
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: foresight

brilliant as always. love each and every part. including pari being the one they called. wondering what laksh is going to do now. was waiting for your update for some time today. looking forward to the next one. 👏

You'll know Lakshya's plan soon😊
Thanks dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: simsen23

hi..sakura ...m a fan of all ur works from ice king..snow queen to dis one...u r a brilliant writer...m a newbie...plz update next part soon.:)

Welcome🤗
Thank you very much😳
I see that you're newbie🤓
I'll continue soon dear😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swa291

The rain of love had softened both their hearts, open for new dreams to grow and breathe.

I loved the ending words.

Keep writing

❤️ Thank you😳
I will😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manasie23

You have shown Swara so trusting of Sanskaar... Oh Thank Lord she remembers Kavita and doesn't like her much... Otherwise she could have had totally misunderstood the scene... And yaaay Kavita's plan failed to make Swara J

And so now we finally know how Swara came to lose the memory... It was all well written and in her Pari bhabhi is so cute... Well Adarsh dint deserve her if he left her for Kavita his loss...
What took my heart was the line... She can forget herself but not him never him...

Lakshya and Ragini's plan A failed so now they are onto plan B what drugs are they talking about I am literally scared for Swara... Lakshya's foolishness is going to cost him soo much and I think that is what Ragini primarily wanted...
These lines by Sanskaar were amazing when Swara asked asked him whether he hated Kavita,
"What I love she never was, what she is I never loved... These lines were perfect...

Well you know what you always leave me hungry for more and more of your updates... Update soon...

Had to make Kavita taste her own medicine😈
I'm really weak at writing action so glad you liked it😃
Yes Ragini wants him to lose everything
I'll update soon😊

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