Elixir SwaSan SS complete - Page 36

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi..sakura ...m a fan of all ur works from ice king..snow queen to dis one...u r a brilliant writer...m a newbie...plz update next part soon.:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
The rain of love had softened both their hearts, open for new dreams to grow and breathe.
I loved the ending words.

Keep writing

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Posted: 10 years ago
You have shown Swara so trusting of Sanskaar... Oh Thank Lord she remembers Kavita and doesn't like her much... Otherwise she could have had totally misunderstood the scene... And yaaay Kavita's plan failed to make Swara J

And so now we finally know how Swara came to lose the memory... It was all well written and in her Pari bhabhi is so cute... Well Adarsh dint deserve her if he left her for Kavita his loss...
What took my heart was the line... She can forget herself but not him never him...

Lakshya and Ragini's plan A failed so now they are onto plan B what drugs are they talking about I am literally scared for Swara... Lakshya's foolishness is going to cost him soo much and I think that is what Ragini primarily wanted...
These lines by Sanskaar were amazing when Swara asked asked him whether he hated Kavita,
"What I love she never was, what she is I never loved... These lines were perfect...

Well you know what you always leave me hungry for more and more of your updates... Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
mindblowing update ,loved it so much 👏👏👏
Waiting for the next update😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it... A beautiful update...mostly happy. Waiting for your next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update and boy, am I ever so glad that Swara didn't fall in Kavita's trap! It was great that she remembered Kavita and that SwaSan left that house of horrors!
What exactly is RagLak's plan with those drugs? I hope they don't harm our adorable couple!
So Swara saved Sanskaar and got injured in the process? I was expecting that actually and it was so nice to read about an obviously in love SwaSan coming down to the end!
I am so looking forward to the next update and I hope you continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww..
The drive back to home was nice...

so swara was the one who saved sanskar form the blast...
She loves her so much..

Ragz and lucky are just sick!!!!
Hate them...

sanskar paints.😲..
That's interesting..

Hey I want read how swara fall sanskar after there marriage!!!
Would you write some lovely-dovely moment between SwaSan???

I guess Sanskar will paint his present,his future - swara???
Sorry for the stupid thought!!!

Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yippee update mera kal ka din bahut khali gaya. Aur sanskaar swara ko paint karega . Main ab wait kar rahi hoon 4 next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I just read all the updates at once. It's amazing.
So how did Swara manage to reach Sanskaar before the bomb blast? Last update ended in a cliffhanger..can't wait until I read the next! Pls update soon. I've fallen in love with Sanskaar's character allover again. I love Swara aswell. I prefer your version to the illogical storyline in Swaragini nowadays.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Saku...
Perhaps it's because you belong to me, that sense had made me forget myself and remember you instead.'----👏👏

Laksh wanted to use the drug on swara..oof. cannot waste my time on him.😡

the way swara read his pain..and consoled him...saying love is a very small word for what i am feeling now.😳

that journey where she is hurt trying to turn him around...

I adore parineeta here. and the way swara said, kavita is pitiable..and the face u painted was not what u thought u loved. masterstroke.👏

and she is teaching him to paint again. bringing colours back into his life. that forehead touch.umm.

love--
medha.

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