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Posted: 10 years ago
Saku,🤗
I am back..and yours is the last piece I am replying to...I wanted to read it in full attention mode and all 4 parts at once. and I am not disappointed. oh no. and how.😃

part 5: I do not care about the Laksh adarsh convo..except for the fact that its going to be a very significant cause and effect thread in the cloth.
I'll jump straight over the authoratative DP and Swara who certainly is starting to question her work...and is beginning to get involved in the well being of her boss.😳

Then came the nashe ke halat mein given sanskaar's advice...do not love. I loved the reaction where he thinks this little miss PA has the nerve to snatch my glass..and where are her brains holidaying?🤣..exactly what we wanna say to the swara on the show sometimes.😕

and then of course..she has remembered it in flashes...and is hell confused. the eye conversation.
bang on..nothing to add. the eyes have it.👏👏

part6: Laksh.
this guy is bad business. matlab all of a sudden he is like u are my habit...and until yesterday he was like i want u do not marry my cousin. poor rags.

and after all this he has the nerve to challenge sanskaar. that dialogue. mein uska hone wala pati tha. aur main uska pati hoon, laksh.👏👏

the bit about ragini visualising a war with conch shells blowing and armies warily pitching tents in no man's land.👏

you outdid yourself where you showed the joining of hands of SanGini. sanky already told her he L does not deserve you..and rags now knows it..but she still has not given up. destruction mode.🤢 and sanskaar for the fact that he has started falling for swara..and does not want her hurt.😕

part7: I loved the Sangini conversation about the creatures of light and dark...and how ragini envisions swara as the fragile glass doll. she of course has a lifetime of vendetta against the girl because of whom she thinks she lost her mother.🤢

and sanskaar admitted it. but yes, he being what he is..cannot judge ragini standing in her shoes.
and him admitting everything..and offering to marry a destroyed swara..just so he can sve her reputation..and can hand her over when her louuu wants her back.🤢yeah right.

kavita is adarsh's wife?😲 what did she do pull a switcheroo? of course she did.😡poor sanky.

part8: uh oh. I loved how he said ke adarsh will be living on what i leave for him..and u r here to beg. and kavita trotted off like the bitch she is here🤢.So now they made an MU happen between swasan? and that has made the divorce paper and spawn the betrayal feelings..and of course, swara is in love.😭

and bomb. kya bolu.😲

ragini and kavita are co-conspirators and confidantes.😡---and of course, the rags psyche was very well done.

all in all...this was the mystery novel which has made my day today.

love ya--
Medha.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Nice update Saku. Simultaneously heart breaking (Sanskaar's frame of mind when he decided to set Swara free), and dramatic, concerning Kavita's and Ragini's machinations. Man, you have created two evil, conniving characters here, haven't you--add one more, and we would have the entire Gorgon set! 😉

That scene where Swara is trying to convince Sanskaar of her innocence, and Sanskaar wants to set her free since he feels her happiness lies with Lakshya--was just heartbreaking.

The end of the chapter was kind of a cliffhanger--does Swara remember the conversation between Sanskaar and Kavita she witnessed in the past? Or has she jumped to conclusions which Kavita & Ragini wanted her to?

Lakshya is as usual--a spineless waste of space. Ragini tells him me might as well take the risk of telling Swara everything--and if the shock kills her, then so what, its comparable to losing her to Sanskaar anyway---and the dude seems to fall for that logic...I would have loved for him to show just the teeniest bit of remorse, of perspective. As I said before, he is just such a toad. 🤢

Hi Viji!
Hmm...I have grown to love wickedness by watching how they always seems to win in our favorite show. Sorry for breaking you heart with Sanskar's pain, unleashing so rapidly😳
Cliffhangers are my personal favorite too, but I know they kind of irk the readers😆
Lakshya is a toad, I agree 100% and of cause he worships Ragini. He has a little more depth to fall before finally digging his end🤢
I'll update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manasie23

Okay I can't just believe Kavita..


Her mind is as twisted as her heart... Undeserving of anyone's love.
And Swara I think along the way she had started to fall for Sanskaar and that is so wanted him to trust her and even though Sabskaar did trust her he acted as if what she did was justifyable and so he was letting her free.

Ohh so Swara came to know it was kavita's plan to kill Sanskaar so what happened that swara lost her memory and Sanskaar was unscathed. Oh Mann all this solo intriguing...
And in the present Swara saw Sabskaar and Kavita together so is going to take it in the wrong sense??

And also lakshya is going to reveal everything to Swara but why do I feel like instead of harming Swara this remind her how much and to what extent Swara had fallen for her husband...
And again it will Ragini's turn to fail

Brilliant update Saku... Waiting for more

Kavita is my sweet evil heart😆 Believe her, she is as bad as she seems!
Yes, yes Swara loved him alright, but never enlightened him of the fact, he wouldn't have been so hurt if she had.
You're right, this track is leading to memory loss.
Let's keep Lakshya aside with his stupid plans, I have great events planned for Ragini's future.
Thanks as ever for the lovely comment Manasie dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Awesome..

Some times I get confused while reading the elixir and poison part!!!
😕

Kavita and ragini are such creep!!!
How can they steep so low when whatever they have in their is due to their own foolishness..

Ragini and Kaviti Talk of haw they framed swara in passing on the infromation to lucky was swara witnessed or was lucky withnessed???

Bomb planted in Sanskar Car???

Continue soon...

Elixir is present and poison is past😊
Swara listened to that conversation.
Thanks dear, I'll continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Jamina

Awesome 👏
Totally loved it!
I hate these both Kavita and Ragini 😡
Bomb planted in sanskaar car 😲
Continue soon saku

Thanks😳
Join the club I hate them too😃
I'll update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaSanFanGirl

Read all parts in one go...

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME👏

Thanks thanks thanks😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

Hmm kafi dilschap . Kavi aur ragini ne frame kiya swara ko as a traitor
Mujhe aise kyu lag raha hai k poisom part mein bhi sanky yakeen tha k swara use dhoka nahin de sakti ya phir yakeen karna chahta tha. Nd haan poison part mein mujhe aisa ku lag raha hai k shaadi k baad swara ko sanky se pyaar ho gaya tha. Nd wo scene poison part mein jab swara sanky ko bata rahi thi k who nirdosh hai wph dil dehla dene wala tha.elixir part mein ab aage kya hoga rama re swasan k bich mein

Jo bhi app ko laga poison part mein sahi hai. Elixir part mein sub achcha hi honga😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: harshsriti

omg.. saku.. honestly your story is far better than swaragini story.. this ss full of surprises. . shock and excitement. . kavitha 😡 .. she is a witch. . she used sanskar to get her love and adarsh cheated pari.. how much negative characters here.. kavitha is the biggest fool.. she chose adarsh over sanskar.. I think sanskar is little rude to swara.. I'm not getting the sanskar whose heart filled with love. here his heart filled with revenge and pain.. I want swara's sanskar.. I want him to shower his love on swara.. I'm feeling bad for swara.. Please make her strong. . I don't know what to say about ragini.. unlike the show here she has strong reason to be negative. . these kavitha and ragini jealous of swara.. I could see the same ragini's puppet lakshji here.. he has no brains. . ragini is like god to him. . whatever she says he simply obeys. . eagerly waiting for next update.. thet will reveal the secret of swara's memory loss na.. ? continue soon dear.. supeb update. .

Some times love hurts you to an extent that you become stone hearted dear, Sanskar is going through such pa phase.
I know your sentiments towards Kavi, she deserve them and Adarsh😡
Ragini has reasons, but how valid they're only time will tell😊
Puppet Lakshya🤢
I'll update soon, thanks a lot Jwala😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Sanku read chapters 7 and 8 together omg,ur making me mesmerized by ur way of story telling just loving it a lot ,awesome updates👏👏👏

Do continue soon,waiting for it re.

I was missing your comment thank you dear😊

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