Elixir SwaSan SS complete - Page 35

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

Superb update...intriguing. Waiting for the next update. You write really well...The suspense you create is amazing.

Originally posted by: abika

Awesome update

Con soon

Originally posted by: geetkumar

Cliffhanger !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😲

Update Update Update Update Update Update Update !!!!

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

It was awesome. Thanks for the PM.

Actually I have to go back and read the previous chapter to double check because my memory confused me with poison and Elixir. I thought kavitha made an entry in Elixir. So was bit confused at the start but it got cleared once I read the previous chapters.

What I wanted to say was it not easy to read back and forth between past and present but you did fabulous job of writing it. And that seems like a lot of work to carefully sequence them and so what I wanted to say was in short is you are really good at writing.

Lakshya is being himself no surprise there. Ragini and Kavitha are most evil here but they are kind of impressive too.

Can't wait for the next update. Do pm me when you update.

Originally posted by: foresight

awesome update. you have a knack of blending different scenes and timelines together smoothly. it is amazinggg. i have to take some lessons from you. looking forward to the next update.

👏 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: ketty84

Love u saku . What a great story pls update soon . I cant tolerate cliffhanger. What next.

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awesome update Sakura

Swara hope she gets her memory back soon

Ragini and Kavita are such cheap characters

Lakshya well he was always spineless

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Saku,🤗

I am back..and yours is the last piece I am replying to...I wanted to read it in full attention mode and all 4 parts at once. and I am not disappointed. oh no. and how.😃

part 5: I do not care about the Laksh adarsh convo..except for the fact that its going to be a very significant cause and effect thread in the cloth.

I'll jump straight over the authoratative DP and Swara who certainly is starting to question her work...and is beginning to get involved in the well being of her boss.😳

Then came the nashe ke halat mein given sanskaar's advice...do not love. I loved the reaction where he thinks this little miss PA has the nerve to snatch my glass..and where are her brains holidaying?🤣..exactly what we wanna say to the swara on the show sometimes.😕

and then of course..she has remembered it in flashes...and is hell confused. the eye conversation.

bang on..nothing to add. the eyes have it.👏👏

part6: Laksh.

this guy is bad business. matlab all of a sudden he is like u are my habit...and until yesterday he was like i want u do not marry my cousin. poor rags.

and after all this he has the nerve to challenge sanskaar. that dialogue. mein uska hone wala pati tha. aur main uska pati hoon, laksh.👏👏

the bit about ragini visualising a war with conch shells blowing and armies warily pitching tents in no man's land.👏

you outdid yourself where you showed the joining of hands of SanGini. sanky already told her he L does not deserve you..and rags now knows it..but she still has not given up. destruction mode.🤢 and sanskaar for the fact that he has started falling for swara..and does not want her hurt.😕

part7: I loved the Sangini conversation about the creatures of light and dark...and how ragini envisions swara as the fragile glass doll. she of course has a lifetime of vendetta against the girl because of whom she thinks she lost her mother.🤢

and sanskaar admitted it. but yes, he being what he is..cannot judge ragini standing in her shoes.

and him admitting everything..and offering to marry a destroyed swara..just so he can sve her reputation..and can hand her over when her louuu wants her back.🤢yeah right.

kavita is adarsh's wife?😲 what did she do pull a switcheroo? of course she did.😡poor sanky.

part8: uh oh. I loved how he said ke adarsh will be living on what i leave for him..and u r here to beg. and kavita trotted off like the bitch she is here🤢.So now they made an MU happen between swasan? and that has made the divorce paper and spawn the betrayal feelings..and of course, swara is in love.😭

and bomb. kya bolu.😲

ragini and kavita are co-conspirators and confidantes.😡---and of course, the rags psyche was very well done.

all in all...this was the mystery novel which has made my day today.

love ya--

Medha.