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BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 10 years ago

#321

Read all parts in one go...

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME👏

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NITI VYAS

@nut-kut-86

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Posted: 10 years ago

#322

Hmm kafi dilschap . Kavi aur ragini ne frame kiya swara ko as a traitor
Mujhe aise kyu lag raha hai k poisom part mein bhi sanky yakeen tha k swara use dhoka nahin de sakti ya phir yakeen karna chahta tha. Nd haan poison part mein mujhe aisa ku lag raha hai k shaadi k baad swara ko sanky se pyaar ho gaya tha. Nd wo scene poison part mein jab swara sanky ko bata rahi thi k who nirdosh hai wph dil dehla dene wala tha.elixir part mein ab aage kya hoga rama re swasan k bich mein

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Jwala

@LoveSriNal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#323

omg.. saku.. honestly your story is far better than swaragini story.. this ss full of surprises. . shock and excitement. . kavitha 😡 .. she is a witch. . she used sanskar to get her love and adarsh cheated pari.. how much negative characters here.. kavitha is the biggest fool.. she chose adarsh over sanskar.. I think sanskar is little rude to swara.. I'm not getting the sanskar whose heart filled with love. here his heart filled with revenge and pain.. I want swara's sanskar.. I want him to shower his love on swara.. I'm feeling bad for swara.. Please make her strong. . I don't know what to say about ragini.. unlike the show here she has strong reason to be negative. . these kavitha and ragini jealous of swara.. I could see the same ragini's puppet lakshji here.. he has no brains. . ragini is like god to him. . whatever she says he simply obeys. . eagerly waiting for next update.. thet will reveal the secret of swara's memory loss na.. ? continue soon dear.. supeb update. .

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#324

Sanku read chapters 7 and 8 together omg,ur making me mesmerized by ur way of story telling just loving it a lot ,awesome updates👏👏👏

Do continue soon,waiting for it re.

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Zephyr8

@Zephyr8

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#325

Superb update...intriguing. Waiting for the next update. You write really well...The suspense you create is amazing.

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geetkumar

@geetkumar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Cliffhanger !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😲

Update Update Update Update Update Update Update !!!!

Edited by geetkumar - 10 years ago

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 10 years ago

#327

It was awesome. Thanks for the PM.

Actually I have to go back and read the previous chapter to double check because my memory confused me with poison and Elixir. I thought kavitha made an entry in Elixir. So was bit confused at the start but it got cleared once I read the previous chapters.

What I wanted to say was it not easy to read back and forth between past and present but you did fabulous job of writing it. And that seems like a lot of work to carefully sequence them and so what I wanted to say was in short is you are really good at writing.

Lakshya is being himself no surprise there. Ragini and Kavitha are most evil here but they are kind of impressive too.

Can't wait for the next update. Do pm me when you update.

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#328

awesome update. you have a knack of blending different scenes and timelines together smoothly. it is amazinggg. i have to take some lessons from you. looking forward to the next update.

👏 👏 👏 👏

Edited by foresight - 10 years ago