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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: sadhana.np
Brilliant update👏

Thanks😊

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weirdlynormal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#312

in the part where sanky is beating adarash. You have put Parineeta saying "devar ji". In part 3

Edited by bareta - 10 years ago

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#313

Lovely update...

Swara remember how she married sanskar???

Great!!!

Why does Kavita wants revenge???

What did Sanskar did to her???

Wasnt she the one who left her on the day of Marriage..

Continue soon..

Plz PM me...

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: bareta
in the part where sanky is beating adarash. You have put Parineeta saying "devar ji". In part 3

Yes she was Adarsh's wife then😛

Now he had divorced her and got married to Kavi😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
Lovely update...
Swara remember how she married sanskar???
Great!!!

Why does Kavita wants revenge???
What did Sanskar did to her???
Wasnt she the one who left her on the day of Marriage..

Continue soon..
Plz PM me...

Thank you dear😊

Yes Kavi was the one who left him at the mandap, you'll know other things soon😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#316

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#317

Nice update Saku. Simultaneously heart breaking (Sanskaar's frame of mind when he decided to set Swara free), and dramatic, concerning Kavita's and Ragini's machinations. Man, you have created two evil, conniving characters here, haven't you--add one more, and we would have the entire Gorgon set! 😉

That scene where Swara is trying to convince Sanskaar of her innocence, and Sanskaar wants to set her free since he feels her happiness lies with Lakshya--was just heartbreaking.

The end of the chapter was kind of a cliffhanger--does Swara remember the conversation between Sanskaar and Kavita she witnessed in the past? Or has she jumped to conclusions which Kavita & Ragini wanted her to?

Lakshya is as usual--a spineless waste of space. Ragini tells him me might as well take the risk of telling Swara everything--and if the shock kills her, then so what, its comparable to losing her to Sanskaar anyway---and the dude seems to fall for that logic...I would have loved for him to show just the teeniest bit of remorse, of perspective. As I said before, he is just such a toad. 🤢

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#318

Okay I can't just believe Kavita..

Her mind is as twisted as her heart... Undeserving of anyone's love.
And Swara I think along the way she had started to fall for Sanskaar and that is so wanted him to trust her and even though Sabskaar did trust her he acted as if what she did was justifyable and so he was letting her free.

Ohh so Swara came to know it was kavita's plan to kill Sanskaar so what happened that swara lost her memory and Sanskaar was unscathed. Oh Mann all this solo intriguing...
And in the present Swara saw Sabskaar and Kavita together so is going to take it in the wrong sense??

And also lakshya is going to reveal everything to Swara but why do I feel like instead of harming Swara this remind her how much and to what extent Swara had fallen for her husband...
And again it will Ragini's turn to fail

Brilliant update Saku... Waiting for more

Edited by manasie23 - 10 years ago