Elixir SwaSan SS complete - Page 31

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Interesting twist

Ragini is such a b@#ch(no yaar female dog ki insult ho gayi)

Anyways the update was awesome

Kavita is back God knows what she wants now

Did Swara see Sanky and Kavita's photo

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Hey,

What to say about this fanfic now? You've got me gripped again!

Your character portrayal has always fascinated me. The way you've shown Adarsh in this fanfic actually made me feel good. Thank you for providing him with brains 😛 He's one of the characters that's got a lot of potential and should be exploited. You've done that.

Lakshya ke liye I'd rather not comment. His character in the show is so annoying that I've stopped considering him anywhere at all. *sigh* He used to be really awesome, they've just butchered his character.

Coming to Swara and Sanskaar.! I am absolutely loving them! You've given such sweet and heart warming moments between the two it made me sooo happy.! (For a second while reading the previous updates I thought Swara would remember some memories that would lead to misunderstandings between her and Sanskaar!!! Thank you for not doing that! I felt such relief when her first memory recovered turned out to be that particular one). I really loved that 'I-can-read-your-eyes-scene'!!

Ragini! I love her. I don't know why I just do. Even though she is one of the negative characters.

I'm a little confused as to how Kavita is Sanskaar's Bhabhi considering Adarsh is married to Parineeta. (I went back to the previous chapters to check 😛)

Anyhow loving your frequent updates. Awaiting the next one with bated breath. Please update soon :)

Thanks for the PMs.

-V

Originally posted by: rinku95

Amazing
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Originally posted by: foresight

Amazing as always. So Adarsh married Kavita - had thought he was married to Pari earlier (nice confusion creation there 👏 ) it did seem as though Adarsh had gone after Sanky's love before and won. but Kavita was a willing participant and using Sanky for her own purpose. This doesn't bode well for Swara. Now she had Rags and Kavita both to contend with. Sanky is going to have a tough time protecting her from them + laksh. One more reveal happened here - it was different (happy that it was) - the secret behind the marriage not being forceful revealed along with no choice choice. looking forward to the next update. 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Wonderful update loved it a lot👏👏👏

Do continue soon dear😊😊

Originally posted by: princess_tara

awesome

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Loved the update, it's amazing.

Ragini tried to threaten Sanskaar? That's not very smart of her and here I was thinking that this Ragini is more intelligent than the one on the show...

I loved that Sanskaar told Swara the truth abiut his plotting and I am now looking forward to reading about their bond developing after this revelation!

So I was correct and Kavita was Sanskaar's first love and Is now Adarsh's wife? Is she in cahoots with Ragini and did she come to break SwaSan up?

I really hope that Swara is strong enough to stand against this new entry!

Looking forward to reading the next update.

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

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Saku, I am so sorry I took so long to update my comment, the weekend was a hive of activity. 😊 Taking kiddo to art class on Saturday, date with Hubby to see Spectre, and then Sunday had guests over at home. Wanted to comment in detail from my laptop as I don't like leaving cursory, proforma comments typed on my phone.

I was intrigued by this chapter. Lots of ground you've covered here, and there was a shift in pace from the earlier updates. Read almost like a Sheldon novel, with loads of double crosses and double-double crosses going on. 😉

So Kavita is Adarsh's wife---the one who left Sanskaar broken hearted. Adarsh was vile and cunning enough to treat his cousin that way, and wants to play his rather foolish younger brother to inflict a similar, but even more damaging blow. My, this is like the Kauravas all over again. I like the overtones from the epics you bring into your works.

So Sanskaar did play a role in creating that initial storm in Swara's life--where Lakshya, callow and impetuous as ever, suspected her of having a fling with Sanskaar, though he was engaged to marry her. Fickle and untrusting! So I guess after this, he would get married to Ragini? But then how does he veer back to Swara?

Sanskaar, at the time of the wedding, confesses to Swara that he genuinely loves her, and also that he would let her go back to Lakshya later, once he's come into his senses and divorced Ragini. 🤢 I'm sure he meant it, the Sanskaar in your fic does seem to love with the same selfless, passionate intensity as the one on the serial. But I guess in the intervening period, Swara grows to love him too, and when she's framed for leaking Sanskaar's secrets to Lakshya, the supposed betrayal becomes too much for him to bear? After what happened with Kavita--Adarsh?

Saku, once again, hats off for creating such layered works. You imbue your characters with so many shades of gray. I've told Medhu before, this has now become my favorite color, after reading a couple of her pieces on Ragini & Sanskaar. Your writing makes me love it all over again!

And yes--Update soon! And a looong one at that. 😉

Originally posted by: pujametallic

Pls Update Soon
I loved the story
Thanks For Awesome Updates
Continue Soon