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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: ketty84
update soon

I will😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: anu91
Loved it...

Thanks😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
Nice converstation between Sanskar and Swara..
Rags got marriage proposal for Sanskar and Lucky???
Now that's ntresting..

Eagerly waiting for the next update..
Continue soon..

Thank you dear😊

Yes Ragz was supposed to marry Sanskar.

I'll update soon😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
superb update

Thank you😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: The-Heart

Excellent update
I just completed reading both part 2 and 3

I love the way you describing both past and present👏
Looks like all characters are grey shade

I like lion and cub comparison with the characters and swara and sanskar conversation on phone is superb👏

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I like sanskar hitting adarsh😊( I want to see sanskar hitting laksya 😉)

Waiting for office romance😳
Ragini is going to be sanskar fiance

I have doubt is lakshya and swara both loved each other in past ? or its just one side love(obsession) from lakshya ?

Ramya

Hi Ramya (ALright if I call you that?)

Thanks dear!

Yes most of them are gray shaded.

I love lions😳

Sanskar hitting Lakshya? Hmm I think I'll come closer to that although not entirely.

You'll have that soon.

Yes she is going to be, but let's wait and see.

I can't really comment on Swara and Lakshya, you'll know more soon😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: harshsriti
I found it interesting day by day.. I loved past more than present .. waiting to read more about boss and PA. . loved the update. . continue soon

Thanks a lot dear😊

Yes, poison is more alluring than Elixir sometimes, what matters is the end result😊

You'll read more of Boss and PA soon😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

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nimmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

I am SO loving this switch between Elixir and poison.
Poor Sanskaar. i really dread to know how he got his heart broken to bad.😔.

Fabulous as usual Saku.🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Very nice, Saku. Both the past and the present---Poison & Elixir--have been written beautifully.

Lakshya---what do I say about him. Spineless, brainless, characterless waste of space. Ragini at least is a conniving, Machiavellian, evil genius. Lakshya is just a toad. And he pretends Swara is the Love of his life. 🤢 Didn't he promise to not hazard her health by jolting her fragile mind?

For me, the standout para in this update was

"Believing you were someone's elixir and revealing you were their poison is the most venomous of all feelings. Suddenly every pause in her conversations with her husband seemed to scream, every time he averted his eyes seemed to burn her soul. She had broken him for another and still he was here, letting her break him further."

Loved the fact that Swara feels safe and secure with Sanskaar---though she has started getting memories of their painful past, after being prodded by Lakshya. Wonder what happened in the past: was she really compelled to work against Sanskaar's interests, probably by DP + Adarsh + Lakshya? Or was it all a terrible misunderstanding, probably engineered by Lakshya and/ or Ragini?

I still have a very special soft corner for SQ (and IK, which I consider its prequel), but this is coming close! 😊

Looking forward to the next update, already.

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago