Elixir SwaSan SS complete - Page 14

superb dear
waiting for next part
want to know how swasan got married

I get it that in this story none of the cousins like each other... well I liked the little bit SwaSan part you squeezed in...and also the Candle flashback is not a fragment of her imagination but a true memory?!
Also if Lakshya and Ragini like each other... why did present Lakshya ask Sanskaar to promise that he would stay away from Swara...?!
And I love how you have described the past and present as Poison and Elixir... Good one Sakura

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

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Very intriguing indeed, Saku. Loved the way you seamlessly shift from poison to elixir, past to present. 😊

So Sanskaar almost beat up Adarsh, huh? Any chance you could do me a favor and make him beat up Lakshya, like real badly, in a future chapter? 😆

Did you earlier watch IPK by any chance? The whole Sanskaar forcing Swara to marry him, putting a condition before Dida, reminded me of echoes of Arnav trying to force Khushi to marry him/ stay with him, when he could very well have tried a gentler, romantic approach. But of course, you would reveal the circumstances in your story like a beautiful gift being unwrapped. 😊 There seems to be a clue that the marriage here wasn't entirely forced, since Sanskaar tells Swara in the present, that he didn't compel her.

I found the inter-meshed relationships fascinating. Ragini's alliance was first proposed for Sanskaar...and at that stage she and Lakshya were apparently in a relationship. So at that stage, with Swara joining as Sanskaar's PA, really curious as to how Lakshya detaches himself from Ragini's orbit and gets fascinated by Swara.

Thanks for the PM, but as is my wont, I had already read the chapter before I got it. 😉 Can't resist, you see!

Originally posted by: rerose

Sakura dear,loved reading it👏👏

Ur story always makes me interesting dear😊😊

Do update soon😃😃

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Hey Sakura the update was as usual fantastic

Loved it

So Sanskar forced Swara for the marriage

Ragini got a proposal from Sanskar

It's becoming interesting with each update

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

Originally posted by: Shikha022

again superb update..
waiting for next part !!

Originally posted by: -Jamina

Wow saku (I hope you don't mind if I call you that) this is awesome yaa
Interesting update ASAP 😃

Originally posted by: swa291

superb dear
waiting for next part
want to know how swasan got married

Originally posted by: manasie23

I get it that in this story none of the cousins like each other... well I liked the little bit SwaSan part you squeezed in...and also the Candle flashback is not a fragment of her imagination but a true memory?!
Also if Lakshya and Ragini like each other... why did present Lakshya ask Sanskaar to promise that he would stay away from Swara...?!
And I love how you have described the past and present as Poison and Elixir... Good one Sakura

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