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Ardhikian

@Ardhikian

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#161

One thing i do firmly believe, love without struggles is no love. If you find it easily, you never learn to respect it, never learn to value it. And once the struggle is done over with, and you obtain your beloved, that togetherness is a hundred times more chaste and pristine.
And your stories just serve to strengthen my beliefs.
At first, it looks like its only a stormy sea...with no end in sight. But that makes the happiness more coveted.
This story is just as lovely. As mysterious, thrilling, gripping and involving. I love how tracks are moving parallely. You sure know how to serve poison and elixir together. 😉
One request my dear, never stop writing SwaSan. I think you would've written Swaragini better than the creatives! 😆
Not that they are half bad, but anyway.
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!
Love and regards

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Jwala

@LoveSriNal

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#162

superb update saku.. feeling bad for swara.. she don't understand what is going on around her.. I'm eager to know about the poison part.. their past.. and sanskar keeping a distance from swara na? why? as a boss he was cruel.. then how did he fall in love with her? lakshji is the same creep.. he always want sanskar' s pain.. he think swara is playing her game.. disgusting. . continue soon dear.. waiting to read

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950660

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#163

loved it !!
as always every single emotion n scene is perfectly described !!
waiting for ur next update !!

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Swathy

@SwathyS

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Swara helping lakshya for breaking sanskar 🤬
I cant stand anyone hurting sansakr even if it is swara herself though it seems to be her constant doing in serial and here also..

waiting to find what happened

keep writing

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Transformation from Elixir to Poison gives a unique feeling,lovely piece of writing👏👏

Do continue soon dear😊

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Superb job Sakura

Lakshya is such aa jerk

I liked both the past and the present

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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Jamina Mohammed

@Snowflakes.

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Awesome as usual 😊
Loved the both poison and Exilir part 😃
Egarely waiting to know what actually happened in past

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Lovely updates Sakura😳

Chapter 3: I loved the initial comparison of life and hourglass👏 'Life is an hourglass, where memories are the sand that keeps filling the empty glass orb. You live on, as long as the sand keep falling, as long as the orb remains empty, you can go on [...]'

If Parineeta didn't come in time Sanskar would have almost killed Adarsh.

LOL she is the 16th PA?😲

Their first meeting was great😉

OMG that was shocking, they've proposed Sanskar for Ragini and not Laksh.

I'm hooked up to this story😳

Chapter 4: No wonder Swara is the 16th PA😆 BUt yeah she has no choice, she has to obey.

How sweet that he goes for jogging with his PA briefing him his schedule at 6 am😛 Lekin dono mein se koi bhi kisi se kam nahi hai.

Ouch she twsted her ankle, but thankfully he was there to hold her😳 The way you described his eyes was simply outstanding 👏 'His eyes were darker than brown yet lighter than black, traced with the golden light, deep with their expressive emotions and slightly alluring with a hint of unreadable pain'

Thank god she didn't go with Ragini and went with Sanskar instead. The exchange of dialogues between Swara and Sanskar was really awesome👏

I loved this line😆 'Lakshya Maheshwari [...] she didn't know how Sanskar handle this man in his office but at home he was downright unpleasant'

Did he really think she is pretending this memory-loss?😕 Ugh Laksh 🤢

What did she do with Sanskar that left him heartbroken?😲

Chapter 5: Adarsh seems cunning here omg. What kind of ideas is he giving to Laksh? 🥱

Poor Sanskar 😭 'How broken, unwanted, empty and useless he was' But why did Adarsh hate him?

How easily he forgave her na? He's trying in every way to hide the truth from her. But yeh sach hai kya?

The last part was simply beautiful. She can read his eyes, his eyes speak. I loved it Sakura😳

Chapter 6: Way to go Sanskar 😎 'We are married. And we are leaving tomorrow. Stop us if you can' I was literally dancing here, kya jawaab diya Laksh ko

Ragini hates Swara that much since she was a child 😲

How quickly Sanskar grabbed her hand when the flame scalded her finger😳 Is he started feeling something for her here already?😆 One of my fav lines in this chapter:

'Does it really matter what i think?'

'Yes, because i trust you'

Laksh started loving Swara? What a shock for Ragini, she was so happy that Sanskar didn't propose her.

Now something is getting clear. Ragini felt cheated and joined hands with Sanskar to hurt Laksh.

And what is Ragini's new plan now?

I'm really hooked up to this story Sakura, you are doing a splendid job. Update soon😊

Edited by Smilelicious - 10 years ago

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

I am SO loving this switch between Elixir and poison.
Poor Sanskaar. i really dread to know how he got his heart broken to bad.😔.

Fabulous as usual Saku.🤗

Nimmy my dearest stalker🤗

So you love both poison and elixir? I'm glad to know. Thanks a lot dear, this means a lot😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Very nice, Saku. Both the past and the present---Poison & Elixir--have been written beautifully.

Lakshya---what do I say about him. Spineless, brainless, characterless waste of space. Ragini at least is a conniving, Machiavellian, evil genius. Lakshya is just a toad. And he pretends Swara is the Love of his life. 🤢 Didn't he promise to not hazard her health by jolting her fragile mind?

For me, the standout para in this update was

"Believing you were someone's elixir and revealing you were their poison is the most venomous of all feelings. Suddenly every pause in her conversations with her husband seemed to scream, every time he averted his eyes seemed to burn her soul. She had broken him for another and still he was here, letting her break him further."

Loved the fact that Swara feels safe and secure with Sanskaar---though she has started getting memories of their painful past, after being prodded by Lakshya. Wonder what happened in the past: was she really compelled to work against Sanskaar's interests, probably by DP + Adarsh + Lakshya? Or was it all a terrible misunderstanding, probably engineered by Lakshya and/ or Ragini?

I still have a very special soft corner for SQ (and IK, which I consider its prequel), but this is coming close! 😊

Looking forward to the next update, already.