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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 5

SAME DAY AT NIGHT.

GADODIA MANSION
Swaragini's room

"DI agr ap ni hoti to mera kya hota" ragini kissed her baby sister's forehead. She knew how scared she was wen her parents died. Ragini became her mother after their parents death. No less a best friend and a caring sister. "Swara tum meri jaan ho hum tumhare bina Mar jaenge , hum tumhe hmesha smbhalenge lekin tumhe b hme smbhalna hoga, tumhe strong bnna hoga" ragini cuffed swara's face. Swara listened to her with full innnocene n decided to change her for sake for her elder sister. Both of them hugged each other n slept in their arms.

NEXT MORNING

Swara woke up being new swara full of confidence, actually she was trying but the one who tries r only the one who wins. She smiled looking her angel sister beside her she took her mom n dad's photo frm side table smiled to them n greeted them good morning.
She then got ready for school. It was only 7 now. She was supposed to go by 8 along with ragini. She went to ragini n jerked her. "Di uthooo" she shakes her hard. Ragini stood in shock. "Kya hua shona" she asked her with concern. "Arey mujhe kuch nai hua, time dekho late hojaoge" ragini saw her in disbelief n smiled seeing her sister making lil attempts towards being responsible. "Hum ready hote h tum breakfast table pe wait kro hmara okk" swara simple noded n went to table.
Janki was sitting n having her food along with his cunning husband who was sitting on the chair meant for head of the family , in which his father used to sit.

She went to him "uthie yhn se" amarjeet n janki widened their eyes in shock . "ae swara kya bol ri h tu" swara turned to janki at her statement. "Me apse bt ni kr rhi" swara again turned to amarjeet. "Ye jagah mere baba ki thi ap uthie yhn ghr ko smbhalna vala bethke h" she turned to face janki"use bigadne vala nai" tears were visible in swara's eyes but one thing not to miss she was in anger n pain.
"Swara hosh me aja hum yhn k caretaker h smjhi or ghr k bde b" swara smiled sarcastically at her a
Statement. "Bade , ap log Bade khlane layak nai ho, hmara ghar ko brnd krne ki sochna b mt" swara shouted. Ragini was coming down wen she realised there was some sort of arguments going on between the trio. She stood there.
"Swara mind your words" shouted janki n came to swara, n was abt to slap her. Ragini was cmng to her wen she saw swara holding janki's hand tight. Ragini smiled to herself "aj hmari bhn Badi ho gai"
"Aj ye galti kr di age se hua to sidha lawyer uncle ko bataungi, smjhi" she jerked janki's hand away. "Ragini dekh apni bhn ko, kitna bolti h" janki fumed in anger.
"Swara tumne Jo kis bilkul theek kia" she wraped swara's shoulders n then faced janki "kuch logo ko unki asli jagah dikhana bht jaruri hota h" ragini said n was abt to take the seat beside amarjeet wen swara said "stop dI" ragini turned in confusion. "Uthiee" she turned to amarjeet. "Yhn meri bhn bethegi" swara was first clear for her facts. Ragini's eyes filled with tears seeing love of her sister. Amarjeet stood frm there n went taking his plate in. Janki followed him. Both sisters looked at each other with love. "Di apne dekha plate lejana nai bhule" n both burst in laughter.
"Swara aj tumne hme khush kr dia, hum apni bhn ko aise Hi chahte the" ragini kissed her forehead n hugged swara. "Chalo dI vrna I'll be late." Said swara n both left.

School

Swara and uttara were roaming in garden giggling n discussing abt wat they ll wear on respective function of adarsh's wedding as ragini n swara were personally invited by Annapurna durga prasad and sujata.
Wen sanskar came along with ajit , Manish and kavita along with her frnd shimi.
"Uttara kyun itna has ri h" sanskar came to them followed by his group.
"Arey bhai me or swara decide kr rhe the ki hum functions me kya pehenge" swara was feeling embaraced seeing sanskar n remembering his yesterday's act but then she remembered ragini words of being strong n she saw sanskar n smiled widely making sanskar blush to end. He couldn't believe at his reaction of blushing of her first sweet smile to him.
"Acha abi se plannings tum ladkiyan b na" sanskar faked removing sweat drops frm his head. "Ladko se better hoti h" swara said n all laughed at her instant statement to sanskar. "Bhai she is awesome yrrr" commented ajit to swara. Sanskar kept blushing n tried to control so that no one notice him.

They were busy chatting wen niketan came to swara. Swara held a step back but collected courage to face him. "I m sorry swara for..." He was abt to complete wen sanskar grapped his collar. "U stay away frm her got it" sanskar fumed in anger but niketan knew he was guilty so he remained silent. Swara held sanskar's shoulder n signed him to leave niketan. "It's OK niketan, I understand u were angry bt better try controlling it" niketan saw her , he was not expecting such mature answer n that beautiful smile that relieved his all guilt. He smiled back to her. "It means u.." "Ya I forgave u okkk" n she smiled n left with uttara.
Niketan was really happy seeing swara's mature n pretty side. But something burned in sanskar who dint liked swara's reply to niketan. He also left being disguised.

COLLEGE

"Hiii rags" laksh came to ragini was busy completing her notes in garden. "Arey tum hiii" she smiled to him. "Vo me .. I want to apologise..." He saw ragini who was simply staring him. "It's totally fine lucky , n please don't force me remember that incident." Laksh understood her denial to talk abt their argument. "Iska mtlb paro or devdas abi b dost h" he tried to joke n ragini smiled as per his expectations. "Tum bilkul pagl ho" she giggled. "Han bilkul abi b hum dost h" laksh felt a bond with her.
World stopped at that moment they both stared each other.
chahe kuch na kehna bhale chup to rehna , mujhe h pta tere Pyar ka
Laksh saw deep in her eyes , he realised she was so beautiful.
khamosh chehra ankhon pe pehra, sb h gawah tere pyaar ka
Ragini kept staring his dark brown orbs n forgetting world around. But then realised her stare n looked down just to blush.
Teri jhuki nazar Teri har ada, mujhe keh rhi h ye dasstan , koi shaksh h Jo k in dino tere jehno dil pe h chah rha
Laksh kept staring her lovingly. She stood to move away from him but he held her hand. She turned n her hairs flied.
Teri jhulf jb b bikhar jati h, ae hasin tu hasin or ho jati h
He made her sit n closed to her. He could feel her heavy breathes. He admired her eyes, her red cheeks n then her lips. His lips were inches away from her , he neared her more n more n finally his lips met to hers. He but her lower lips. Ragini dint responded but was melting n had no mood to protest. He parted her lips with his tongue n went discovering each corner of her mouth. Something tickled ragini n she came to her senses she jerked laksh away n he noticed her swallon lips n tears in her eyes. She stood n was abt to go wen laksh held her hand. "I m so sorry" he realised that he went in flow but that was wrong she was very sensitive. Ragini also knew it was fault of hormones none of them were at fault so she simply went away.
"Lucky ye kya kr dia tune, or kese" he was blushing yes. He liked her but he couldn't deny saesha was her girlfriend.

school

It was lunch break swara uttara was having their lunch with priya. Sanskar , kavita and ajit were also standing hvng their lunch but sanskar was staring swara constantly.
Niketan was also staring swara he couldn't deny he was falling for her , sanskar saw swara then niketan. Suddenly niketan ran to swara n grapped her shoulders n made her stand. Swara was shocked by his act n so others all approached them sanskar fumed in anger he ran to niketan. Niketan said something in her ears. She closed her eyes n shouted "bachao bachao" swara shouted. He tore her shirt. She was still standing eyes closed in hugged niketan in fear. Sanskar n others were shocked wen they saw this. Niketan consoled her. "It's OK , ab sb theek h" wen everyone saw a big spider in her torn shirt's piece.
"Chiii " uttara exclaimed "thanks niketan for helping her" said uttara. Sanskar was realised that she is OK but he dint liked swara being close to niketan. Swara now felt embaraced cz of her torn shirt. Niketan who was wearing sweat shirt for sports took his shirt frm his bag n swara wore it. "Thankss a lot niketan." Swara gave him wide smile. Sanskar felt pang he couldn't make out y he felt so but no he cnt see swara with him.
"R u OK" sanskar asked swara. She simply smiled n noded. Sanskar wanted to hug her bt he cnt.

COLLEGE

Laksh ragini n all others were in conference hall for rehearsals. Laksh was not able to face ragini n so ragini. Ragini was feeling killing in his eyes.
Laksh came to her but she moved away frm him after almost 5 attempts he found it hard to resist her ignorance. She was talking to others laksh slammed his hand on the door . all saw him his palm was bleeding. Ragini saw this n ran to him but saesha holded his hand. "Kya kia ye lucky" saesha cried. Laksh saw ragini in tears n jerked n left.
"Ye lucky ko kya hua" said saesha. Ragini stood mumb.

Ragini followed him n saw him standing there. In garden . she holded his hand. "Rhn do tum to BAAT Hi ni kr ri na" ragini tighten her grip n tied bandage to his hand. N left. Laksh was shocked at her act.

Next day , MAHESHWARI HOUSE

It was adarsh's sangeet. All came there.
Swara was wearing this.

Ragini was wearing this(sorry can't get her original pic ,imagine her in this)

Sanskar was wearing pink sherwani, laksh in black pathani n sherwani. Niketan in voilet wasket n white kurta. Saesha in blue anarkali.
(Sorry I cnt get the attire of others.)

Sanskar n niketan were mesmerised seeing swara , she was looking angel.
Laksh saw ragini he wanted to talk to her.

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thankss
Sorry for late
So it was surprise for raglakians. Hope u all liked it.
Sorry was breaking SwaSan suspense this way.
Love
Niyati


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Yeh galat baat hai yaar...hume suspense mein daalkar khud gayab ho jaati ho..

Updated yrrr dekh le n sorry for late
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Hi Nia!! Glad to have you back..

The update was definitely a treat for RagLak fans..

i didnt understand that Niketan and spider part but Sanskaar started feeling jealous because of that so happy happy!!

Ab yeh Sangeet kya rang laayegi??
Edited by Sparkler8 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb Niyu.. Nikethan also fall for swara.. in the precap of last update I thought somebody try to harm swara.. but he helped swara.. you are creating suspense a lot. . continue soon.. want swasan and ragya as a couple soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow super se bhi se upar wala update
i must say i am in love with your story so continue it fast and thanks for the pm and best of luck for the next part i am eagerly waiting for it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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im very happy that day by day Sanskar is getting more attracted towards Swara..and J Sanskar is so cute..
waiting for the next part
Thanks for the PM
read 4 part too i miss that part
amazing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice...
Swara is turning confident...
Great..

sanskar blushed...
Nice

Continue soon..
Thank u for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc yaar..
Pehle batao tumne dresses kahaan se dhoondhi? Swara was so cute n of course Ragini would also be looking gorgeous in that beautiful dress..
Btw why don't u give faces to saesha n niketan?

N yaar tumhare yahaan complaints jaldi suni b jaati h n action b jldi liya jaata h.. 👏
Edited by Radhadreamlove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Hi Nia!! Glad to have you back..


The update was definitely a treat for RagLak fans..

i didnt understand that Niketan and spider part but Sanskaar started feeling jealous because of that so happy happy!!

Ab yeh Sangeet kya rang laayegi??

Hahaha sb acha Hi hona chahie hope so ..
That spider scene .. Hahahaha u know vo meri frnd ke ath ho chuka h ,,, spider was ready ready to leave her shirt so we tore that .. I thought of doing it there .. That was actually a scary experience hope it worked.
😆
RagLak u know I blush myself writing such stuffs .😆

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