Swaragini ff: 'YOU ARE THE ONE' CH 6 pg 20

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HEYA ALL😳
I m NIYATI , I m up with my new story on swaragini total different concept than the show. Hope ull like it .I hope fr ur positive comments n replies . negative also accepted.šŸ˜‰

This was story in my mind since long finally got characters to it.
Plzzz spread the word if u like😳

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CHARACTERS
SANSKAR MAHESHWARI : 19 years old, 12 standard student. Charm of Excel Academy School. He is very active boy but a almost dump in studies.. But always in guidance of his elder brother.
SWARA GADODIA: 16 years old, 10 class student. She is very shy n bubbly. Loves her elder sister , her only family.
LAKSH MAHESHWARI: 22 years old, Life of maheshwari house, sanskar's elder brother in Excel Academy college, extension of school. He is very flirty n stud sought of guy but marked intelligent.
RAGINI GADODIA: Gadodia's elder daughter , living with her only sister n her maternal aunt Janki n her husband Amarjeet, who r over their wealth left to them by their late parents. She is in Excel academy college n is very bubbly n full of life unlike her younger sister swara.

SAESHA AHUJA:Ragini's friend n laksh's girlfriend.
JANKI JOSHI: swaragini's aunt (massi)
RUCHI SHARMA : ragini's best friend



UTTARA MAHESHWARI:laksh n sanskar's sister and swara's best friend


NIKETAN AHUJA:saesha's brother n one among sanskar's rival


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PROLOUGE
"Swara hurry up , take ur bottle fast" ragini shouted as she standing in front of car waiting for swara who was almost late fr her school.
Swara came rushing with bread in one hand n bottle in another " I m here dI wait" she finished her bread in a go n threw her bag in the back seat n took the seat next to driver. Ragini huffed n sat in driver's seat n drove to her school.
"Look swara today masi n mausaji r cmng , u better don't get suprresed by them OK" swara looked her sister's advice n held her head low.
"DI no I cnt they r very exploitating." Ragini cuffed her face. "Shona j r my strong grl na bus 2 ghnte ki to bt hoti h thn I'll join u na" as ragini used to came late frm college.

IN SCHOOL
Swara ran to her best friend uttara n hugged her. "Hii uttara yrrr aj itna crowd kyun h school me" she pointed to the no of people gushing in school.
"Swara u forget kya dumbo frm today we hv annual fest's reharsals" swara bit her tongue n apologised. Uttara wraped her arm around her shoulder n let her in the class.
Some seniors entered the class. Swara was busy chatting with uttara n dint noticed that ( all feared seniors as they very flirty to juniors as per traditions all stood n greeted them except uttara n swara.)

"U both get up u r special kya" swara was scared bt uttara got up without any fear.
"Wats ur prblm dude" that man widened his eyes at her sentence swara was very scared.
"U know whom u r talking to" he touched his face.
"Oh so u know to whom u r talking" uttara folded her arms. That boy looked to her in confusion " I m uttara maheshwari, sanskar's sister" n raised her brow.
The boy simply turned " okk.. Okk I got it but this girl" he turned to swara " she is my bestie don't u dare.." Uttara stooped him. That boy left in anger.
"Uttara u r don hn" she smiled. " n u fattu, kitna dar gai thi" swara made puupy face " u know I m scared na" uttara made her sit. " I'll share smthng even I was scared bt thn I was reminded of sanskar Bhai n made a bang" she cherished her brothers presence in school. Swara simply smiled, she hd neva seen him bt always hd heard of his greatness opps madness , n being topper.. Frm bottom he was well known in list of teachers fr instances. She smiled to herself.

IN COLLEGE

Ragini was with her gang.. Amar, ruchi, saesha and nikhil. Wen a boy covered saesha's eyes. " guess bebs" ragini chukled on this nonsense she loved her frnds bt saesha was smtimes over wen it come to her relation with senior laksh. She shared a glance with ruchi who too was equally disguised.

"Baby u" she hugged him jumping.
"Monkey n donkey" ragini wishpered to others , they giggled.
"Wat hpnd guys " saesha asked breaking her hug.
"Nothing" nikhil added controlling his smile.
"Baby ur frnds aren't lovely" he eyed ragini. She gave him disguised look.

IN SCHOOL

Came an angry sanskar upto uttara "wat they to uu" she came pointing today's incident. Swara got up n was amazed to see this cute face been counted among the mischeifs.
"Nothing Bhai all OK" she smiled n hugged sanskar.

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Edited by Niyatiswaragini - 9 years ago
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Updated prolouge hv a look
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Interesting Niyati... swara is in 10 th and sanskar 19 yrs.. dmn funny yaar.. good update continue soon
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Originally posted by: harshsriti

Interesting Niyati... swara is in 10 th and sanskar 19 yrs.. dmn funny yaar.. good update continue soon

Hehe thanksss keep reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue
Can't wait for next part
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Originally posted by: alisha17

Interesting prologue

Can't wait for next part

thanksss a lot..
I'll pm u n update asap
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Thanksss .. 😊

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