SwaSan SS: Eye of the Storm - DELETED - Page 14

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Befitting ending to a beautiful tale!! Gr8 wrk dear! 👍🏼

Loved hw evrybdy found their respective PEACE at the end... 👏

Hoping to read a new one frm u now! 😉

Originally posted by: The-Heart

Excellent piece of writing, i just found this ss and completed reading all parts in one go

All parts are awesome and you penned the emotions of characters very well👏

I love the whole journey of sanskar and swara, it is very logical and realistic.😳

I like the Annapurna characterization here, she gave the good suggestion to swara which helped to realize her feelings towards sanskar.😊

Beautiful ending with raginis realization.

Do write more

Its Superb..
All updates are awesome..
Very well written 👏

Very Well written SS. I enjoyed reading through all the chapters. Especially reading about Annapurna , you have written her character so well. This is what she should have done on the show but alas if this had happened there would have been no drama.

Originally posted by: sneharay

Its Superb..
All updates are awesome..
Very well written 👏

Originally posted by: amimus

Very Well written SS. I enjoyed reading through all the chapters. Especially reading about Annapurna , you have written her character so well. This is what she should have done on the show but alas if this had happened there would have been no drama.

I also loved the way Swara realised her feelings for Sankaar and the way it was communicated. The sepration and being away from the person whom you trust and confide in can bring out the suppressed feelings of the heart unknown to the person .

Look forward to reading more from you.

Awesome ss

Hey,
Read this short story/fanfiction in one go. It was utter brilliance!

I am completely delighted in the way you have shown the four of them, the way you have portrayed them all, especially Ragini. I have always been a little biased towards her because of how she is portrayed. She was not negative but circumstances made her so. Truthfully no normal person would have done all that she has done but it should also be pointed out that no normal person would have just given up. I absolutely loved the way you have shown the reasons for her becoming who she was, how she got her revenge and still did not find peace. Seriously keeping SwaSan aside, hats off for the way you have portrayed Ragini. That part in itself made me a fan of your writing because it is very easy to make her a complete villain but portraying her the way you have is genius. And ofcourse that apology given by Swara to Ragini. It was much needed and much deserved. Brillliance!

Coming to Annapurna, you have done such justice to her character that I am speechless. Gosh! She has such strength and potential, such resolute patience, you have complete taken those amaazing qualities and shown her as the matriach of the family and the mother of her TWO sons. Absolutely fantastic!

Coming to SwaSan, that plane crash gave a mild heart attack! :P Loved the way you have shown the slow process of Swara falling for Sanskaar, Sanskaar's feelings, his heartbreak and then a peace and happiness on realising his love is reciprocated, Swara-Sanskaar separation. It was so well structured and written. It was a flow and a really really well written story. The teasing moments were a delight to read. :)

Lakshya. Now what to say about him. I was sort of hoping for a little Ragya I guess because I am a Ragya shipper but I wasn't at all disappointed with the way you shaped him. Slowly realising his obsession, sand letting go. That was a complete master stroke!

Sujata scenes have always amused me so all I can say is 'keep them coming'. She is another character in the show that I adore because she says what she thinks in such a hilarious manner it makes me crack up. Thanks for those light hearted scenes.

Again, loved this SS. Keep writing. You have a good talent for it. :)

-V :)