SwaSan Diwali OS 'The Lights of Love' - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks Prithi 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: someonelikeyou-

you need someone,who can have a tight hold of your hand,not because he wants to touch you,but instead,he wants to protect you and genuinely cares for you..

beautiful Viji
Falaq


Hi Falaq 😊 Thanks very much for your comment. Have a Happy Festive Season!! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks so much dear. Happy Diwali to you and yours 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: asexualflower

Haaye, that was such a cute OS. 😆

Thanks for writing it and making my day! 😳


Hi Sapna dear. 🤗 Thanks so much. Glad you liked it.
Happy Diwali! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: a_uma

beautiful OS... can never tire reading about swasan moments..

..its great that the dark clouds have gone away from swasan's life... ( Rag and Lux 😉) ...hope we get to see this on the show..


Hi Uma 😊 Thanks for your comment. Very glad you liked this one. I wanted to give SwaSan a very Happy Diwali. ...without dark clouds and disturbances. 😉 They deserve it, na? 😊

Wish you and yours a lovely Diwali!! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Viji, Again a wonderful story by you. Can't say how beautiful it is and the way you have written. By reading your stories I'm loving SwaSan more and more while reading this I can get those vibes. Cvs should read your stories because you're better than them ;) I really loved it and do write more :D
Happy Diwali to you and your family! ^_^
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was so cute and awesome...The first start of story really fantastic dear...
Wish u a very happy diwali dr...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: piccola1

Viji ! Moooaaah ! 🤗 Thank you sooo much for dedicating this utterly delightful droolicious take on Swasan to me too! I was so super happy to see a PM on this new OS, and was getting down to relish it...the dedication was the cherry on the icing on a much awaited cake !😃😃

This one is utterly delightful, toe curlingly so ! Absolutely delicious a piece as I have ever read ! 😳

How do you do it?...jump from angst to deep dive character analysis to melt-in-a-puddle ditties like this one? And your DP/RP "quiver of the lip" or "uplift of the mouth" bits? The latter are insanely cute..! 😃 And am just waiting for someone to catch the idea and make it happen on TV ! 😆

Loved this Swara and Sanskaar...Swara remains her true self, innocent, funloving and a delightful carefree, sweetheart which must delight Sanskaar because to see her this way was his very dearest wish! And Swara in turn has brought back Sanskaar to what he truly was, equally funloving, naughty and truly happy a person..Loved to see that. ❤️😳😃

As you said, they complement and complete one another..what more is true love all about 😊😳 A fairytale Happy Ever After, TouchWood !

And while on it, couldnt but burst out laughing, when this comment from Shruti, caught my eye 😆...I can well imagine her situation !😆

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As I write, the darkening sky is already turning bright with crackers and fireworks that some eager kids have started playing around with..And my dog, as his wont during this time, has already started wondering when exactly should he dive under the bed !😆

Wish you and your family, and all other readers on this forum, a Super Duper Diwali !




Pic. dear 🤗 🤗

Just replied to your comment on my TS "Old Sins Cast Long Shadows" and now am replying to this one! 😊 Thanks so very much for your superbly analytical comment, as always!

I wanted to make this one more light hearted, more festive in tone, as my last TS was very intense, it had really taken a lot out of me. Thanks for the lovely compliment about the variety I'm trying to bring to my writing. I'm doing the best I can, to vary things, to write different takes. Angst, romance, character analysis driven ones, and now recently mystery. Just testing the waters 😊

As for SwaSan in this one, well, they deserve a Happy Diwali, na? Without overhanging clouds and people trying to disrupt them at every turn? Hence I packed off Lakshya to Mumbai and Ragini to Jaipur! 😊

Glad you liked this Pic. I love your comments and your fun posts reviewing the serial episodes. You have a knack for analyzing stuff, and have a lovely sense of humor which I admire. I would like to bring that sense of humor to play in a satire/ slapstick kind of TS/ OS I am hoping to write, after I do "The Colors of Love" next.

Lots of Love,

Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kamala05

How can you do this to me Viji? I was literally blushing reading the intro , oh I very well know that they were referring something else , but my gutter mind explored the possible scandalous meaning of their conversation and I was blushing and smiling reading the reaction of their family members .And the outcome is my colleagues thought that I was reading some chat of my hubby and blushing . 😳

It was amusing and romantic . Loved it Viji.
Happy Diwali dear.




Ha ha ha 😆 😆 Thanks a ton, Kamala, for your lovely words. Sorry, I got quite a kick imagining your colleagues asking you as to why you were blushing! 😉

Am very glad you liked this. I wanted to give SwaSan a romantic and lovely Diwali together. They deserve it, na? ☺️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Firstly, thank you for the dedication, I am very touched! 😊

Secondly, how do you come up with such beautiful stories?
I loved how Durga Prasad is wrapped around Swara's fingers. That SwaSan conversation about Durga Prasad loving Swara more was hilarious.
I love how Swara and Sanskaar complement one another; that came through strongly through out this piece.
Loved how alive Sanskaar seems and I really hope that in the show we get a Sanskaar who is living and loving his life due to Swara. He is not quite there yet in the show.
I loved the OS and am looking forward to the Holi one.



Thanks so much Vyshu.😊 I sincerely meant the dedication dear. Your encouraging comments have been motivating me to do the best I can.

Very glad you liked this OS. I wanted to give SwaSan a happy, peaceful and contented Diwali together, without all the disturbances and dark clouds now plaguing their lives. They truly deserve it, I felt. 😊 Am also very happy you liked the aspect of their "soul connect" that I wanted to bring out. They truly complement and complete each other, in every way. 😊

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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