Against All Odds- A SwaSan Four Shot - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago
Part4 Shru I dont even know what ti say... I was smiling like an idiot while reading the whole update... finally Sanskaar realised that thjs time around Swara was not staying with him for the sake of her sister or family but for him and the love she holds for him...

Ragini & Laksh I dont know how can Ragini make everyone dance to her tune everytime I mean cant people like Annapoorna and Laksh just open their eyes for once and see the truth thats quite literally in frknt of them.

Durga Prasad mann isnt he everyone's favourite he is the one I think has the capability to differentiate between what is right and what is not... I just love him

And the last part in SwaSan's bedroom aaawww Sanskaar pulling Swara's leg I was laughing thinking agar aisa sach mein ho toh... once again Shru amazing FS ... keep writing more because I honestly and truly do love to read the SwaSan of your imagination...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Love it!

Loved reading about Swara's care and concern for Sanskaar. For some reason I have a feeling we will get something like this in the show.
Loved how Durga Prasad decided to listen to all the parties concerned before taking a decision.
My fav part of this whole 4S is when Lakshya got the slap he so richly deserves! The icing on the cake is that he got banished and Ragini got institutionalized!
The last part was so...
You have made me speechless for a few minutes after I read this and that is no mean feat, trust me.
This is one of the best fics I have read! Thank you for such an awesome fic!
Looking forward to the next one! No pressure 😉


Vyshu 🤗
Thanks so much for your lovely comments. I do hope we get a caring Swara and yes I think we probably will too! Weirdly just saw the Maha Epi and oh boy- did I have a psychic session or what? Swara behaving quite like the one i showed in my part 1/2 (but worse i think). I love DP and yes, those 2- 🤢 They had to go!
OMG- your last comment 😳😳. You know when i read something like this, I feel it worthwhile that I sat since Friday and whist I work for part of Friday, almost the entirety of my weekend has gone sitting in one spot, typing furiously.
Idea for next one is a very light out and out Diwali romance OS- I need to get over this one, shattered! But once more, you have made my weekend worthwhile xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness

You know what I loved in this update something more than SwaSan moments that SLAP hayee how I wish DP do that in serial


Leks 🤗

Tujhe sakoon mila? 😆 Shruti (Lannister) also wanted a slap coming to Lakhsya and I was only too eager to oblige. Idea was originally for Swara to slap Ragini but how can I stretch fiction that much?! Then wanted Swara slapping Lakshya, Sanskaar slapping Lakshya- soon it would turn into nothing but a slap fest (sounding good actually!) so settled for DP!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally all read n wowww...no words!! An amazing 4S ...loved the last part too...very realistic end i must say. Wht i loved most was tht dialogue by durga prasad...while reading it i could almost hear his voice to those words in my mind...felt like im watching a motion picture not reading a story...really beautiful n feel a bit down too since it has ended. So now u hv to write some more new ones!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shru, meri Jaan take a bow,
If this is the dawn that comes after the darkest of nights, I would take hundred more shots of that night, only to end up reading that last shot of dawn. Oh, how happy I'm feeling at the moment. It has just the perfect depth, pressure and dose of emotions. I'm so glad the utterly stubborn yet overly adorable couple sorted out their differences. Ragini's truth revelation was highly unexpected for me, but always a pleasant surprise! Lakshya...god, I could imagine DP's look as he slapped him...that is scary. But well deserved. SO, he is exiled now, along with his lovely wife back to her Dadi's!
And finally all that ends well especially on moonlit nights have a soft spot reserved in my heart. Their conversation was cute.
All around, marvelous job done (Better than the show track actually) And some balm on our sore wounds rubbed, in another imaginary world SwaSan finally united, this is where you should feel proud of yourself.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

@Part 4: 👏 finally dil ko sukoon aya😳 Sanskaar khush toh main khush😆

DP was his usual smart self 😎 Loved his line about needing the children he can trust around him👏 A perfect indication of how much he is shattered by Laksha-Ragini's ghatiya harkatein (Adarsh being not that great either🥱)


Laksha finally got the slap he deserved. He pushed Sanskaar away when he had just returned from the hospital?! JERK!😵


Ragini😳 that maniacal gleam in her eyes. Caught once again by gurudev 😈 Though in the show I dont think she has any plans of uniting SwaLak. She will never leave Laksh. She will just ruin Swara's image & ensure Laksh has a hand in it so Swara hates him forever.


How fortunate (damn cant even use lucky freely now!) is Swara to be getting those lessons from Sanskaar☺️ Lage raho!😉


Shruti 🤗
In addition to thanks for these comments, I owe you thanks for making me really really want to make DP give Laksh a chammat. He deserved multiple but read my comment above- it would have been a whole chapter of slaps only 😆.
Your words about Sanskaar khush to hum khush really brought home to me my obsession. I have barely slept all weekend- I was agonising about this FF- kept waking both Fri and Sat night re-thinking scenes and panicking about doing it justice! Seriously I feel stupid admitting this as a professional working person but its true! My wrist hurts badly today but I feel happy- mental na?!😆
No way is Ragini planning a SwaLak reunion -your totally right.
Swara toh hai hi very blessed (also struggle using lucky!) 😳
Thank you honey xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabmw

superblyyy written...👏

beautiful😛

awsome👏
...just love it...😳

this is for u👏


Sana sweetheart- thank you so so much. 🤗 for you
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shruts🤗 I really have to thank you for this wonderful wonderful piece of work. With all the segments and confusion that is going around, this was much needed dose of SwaSan. And I really am saying this with all honesty, that I really wish the writers of the show had as much talent and creativity that writers like you do. Too much to ask for a Indian soap I guess.🤔

Part 3 -
Arey main toh bekaar main pareshan thi yeh soch ke ki I had to bear Mahaan Sanskaar . I was so very happy when I read your brief in the beginning. Always practical, mera Sanskaar.❤️
I loved how you managed to make Swara realize her feelings for him without having to take Salman Khan's help. The Sindhoor bit was very very nicely done. I was grinning like an idiot reading it. Made me so very happy. And for that I really feel like giving you a bada wala jhappi🤗
I loved that it was all very "filmy". Sanskaar diving in front of her to save her and that very public confession Complementing his too! Hayye! I think I was as happy as Sanskaar was.😆 But you know what I loved more than the confession? No? His almost rejection Shru😃😃😃. It made me sooo damn happy. I can't tell you how much I loved reading that part. *Sadist muh* Seriously, it almost redeemed her character, "almost" being the keyword. I liked that you made her realize just how much her actions had hurt him. Okay I don't hate you anymore Swara. Don't you dare let him go now. Kush raho! (ashirvaad)😆 And best part of all of it was that "You-know-who" didn't even have a dialogue. Meaning no pakao !😆 I was actually dreading this part thinking she would again torture me with her dilemma of love him love him not! Such a pleasure to read it turned out to be.

Part 4-
Of course I loved the conversation between them in the hospital room where Swara managed to once and for all drill it into his brain that Mr. LDPM had never been a choice. Made my Sanskaar so very happy in turn making me very very happy.😃
But my favorite for the part was DP though. I have realized that I have started to like him a lot these days. Now when you see and read stuff like this can you blame me. He deserves a big jhappi too🤗 I love him the most after Sanskaar and Ragini ( surprise 😛)
I loved how you managed to finally put a stop to all the drama by getting him into the picture. Ever-reliable DP who adores Sanskaar and Swara. I of course have to mention how you brilliantly managed to convey how Laksh had turned into a mirror to Ragini. DP you almost made me forgive you for slapping my Sanskaar.😃 DP and AP part was nicely done, the understanding that these two have seriously is just something else. They really are Sr. SwaSan. I don't like either of the ladies.😆 Of course I have warmed up to your Swara now😃
My favorite line of course had to be one from DP. It was hard to choose since I almost loved all of them .
"Even more significantly, he finished saying he needed the children he could trust around him and on that basis Sanskaar and Swara were invaluable to him, so they could not go"
Made me so very proud of my Sanskaar.
Also It also made me very happy to read that the old carefree Sanskaar was back.I could almost imagine him grinning his stupid carefree grin.❤️ It is such bliss to see that amazing smile adorn his face. Cannot get enough of it

Now if only the CVs read and adopt it word to word.😉
Edited by misaki - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: The-Heart

Thanks again for giving fast update


I think laksh deserve more slaps, at least he deserve one slap from swara too

I thought you will give enough slaps for both pyshco ragini and her pyara patidev lakshji 😒
Whatever i am happy he got at least one slap and peace of mind from DP 😃 😃

I love the swasan conversation in the hospital😳 and in the bedroom conversation is simply superb😳
( when will cvs show this kind of scenes in show)

Finally ragini confessed her crimes including laksh involvement 🤣( i would like to see laksh and Annapurna face at that moment)

I love the sentence "A tendril of hope had taken root yesterday when she had awoved her love to him in front of all, but today that had blossomed to a full grown tree, bursting with beauty and joy and the promise of a life had to date only dared dream about" 👏 👏

The ending is quite good


Welcome re the fast update. I have not been able to sleep most of the weekend as I was possessed to get this out. I felt too involved in it! Seriously, don't get me started on the slap choices! Just wrote on another comment too but see my dilemma:
Swara to Ragini; Swara, Sanskaar, Ragini, DP to Lakshya and others too for good measure could have, then Sanskaar to Ragini, DP to Ragini- more options? So then the story would be a slapathon 😆.
Glad you felt the SwaSan moments 😳
Yayyy- you liked Ragini landed Lakshya in the poo- I was so happy when I thought of that- partly what made DP go mad!
Thank you for this!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manasie23

Part4 Shru I dont even know what ti say... I was smiling like an idiot while reading the whole update... finally Sanskaar realised that thjs time around Swara was not staying with him for the sake of her sister or family but for him and the love she holds for him...

Ragini & Laksh I dont know how can Ragini make everyone dance to her tune everytime I mean cant people like Annapoorna and Laksh just open their eyes for once and see the truth thats quite literally in frknt of them.

Durga Prasad mann isnt he everyone's favourite he is the one I think has the capability to differentiate between what is right and what is not... I just love him

And the last part in SwaSan's bedroom aaawww Sanskaar pulling Swara's leg I was laughing thinking agar aisa sach mein ho toh... once again Shru amazing FS ... keep writing more because I honestly and truly do love to read the SwaSan of your imagination...


Manu, thanks yaara,you always say things that make me feel all happy and mushy! Happy I managed to make you happy 😃. Ragini- is really diabolical and she finds stupid people like Lakshya and Swara to manipulate . We are all in the "we love DP" gang! I'll be back with more, never fear, just need to recover from this- it was seriously hard and has drained me! But in a nice way!

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