Shruts🤗 I really have to thank you for this wonderful wonderful piece of work. With all the segments and confusion that is going around, this was much needed dose of SwaSan. And I really am saying this with all honesty, that I really wish the writers of the show had as much talent and creativity that writers like you do. Too much to ask for a Indian soap I guess.🤔
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Arey main toh bekaar main pareshan thi yeh soch ke ki I had to bear Mahaan Sanskaar . I was so very happy when I read your brief in the beginning. Always practical, mera Sanskaar.❤️
I loved how you managed to make Swara realize her feelings for him without having to take Salman Khan's help. The Sindhoor bit was very very nicely done. I was grinning like an idiot reading it. Made me so very happy. And for that I really feel like giving you a bada wala jhappi🤗
I loved that it was all very "filmy". Sanskaar diving in front of her to save her and that very public confession Complementing his too! Hayye! I think I was as happy as Sanskaar was.😆 But you know what I loved more than the confession? No? His almost rejection Shru😃😃😃. It made me sooo damn happy. I can't tell you how much I loved reading that part. *Sadist muh* Seriously, it almost redeemed her character, "almost" being the keyword. I liked that you made her realize just how much her actions had hurt him. Okay I don't hate you anymore Swara. Don't you dare let him go now. Kush raho! (ashirvaad)😆 And best part of all of it was that "You-know-who" didn't even have a dialogue. Meaning no pakao !😆 I was actually dreading this part thinking she would again torture me with her dilemma of love him love him not! Such a pleasure to read it turned out to be.
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Of course I loved the conversation between them in the hospital room where Swara managed to once and for all drill it into his brain that Mr. LDPM had never been a choice. Made my Sanskaar so very happy in turn making me very very happy.😃
But my favorite for the part was DP though. I have realized that I have started to like him a lot these days. Now when you see and read stuff like this can you blame me. He deserves a big jhappi too🤗 I love him the most after Sanskaar and Ragini ( surprise 😛)
I loved how you managed to finally put a stop to all the drama by getting him into the picture. Ever-reliable DP who adores Sanskaar and Swara. I of course have to mention how you brilliantly managed to convey how Laksh had turned into a mirror to Ragini. DP you almost made me forgive you for slapping my Sanskaar.😃 DP and AP part was nicely done, the understanding that these two have seriously is just something else. They really are Sr. SwaSan. I don't like either of the ladies.😆 Of course I have warmed up to your Swara now😃
My favorite line of course had to be one from DP. It was hard to choose since I almost loved all of them .
"Even more significantly, he finished saying he needed the children he could trust around him and on that basis Sanskaar and Swara were invaluable to him, so they could not go"
Made me so very proud of my Sanskaar.
Also It also made me very happy to read that the old carefree Sanskaar was back.I could almost imagine him grinning his stupid carefree grin.❤️ It is such bliss to see that amazing smile adorn his face. Cannot get enough of it
Now if only the CVs read and adopt it word to word.😉
Edited by misaki - 9 years ago