Against All Odds- A SwaSan Four Shot - Page 17

Awesome 👏
Loved all the parts 😊

Thanks for all the new replies coming in guys! I'll respond individually as soon as work pressures allow but in the meantime just to say how grateful I am for your time and comments X

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Geetu 🤗

Ah please don't thank na! I will then have to do too many thanks for all this love and beautiful comments, you are one of those I can always rely on for a real in depth analysis. And I am now 😳😳 at your words.

Na na- I wasn't going to make Sanskaar a sadhu, not me for our Sanskaar 😉. But I did think he would get confused by Madam's OTT reactions to everyone including Lakshya. Hence he gave her that choice and deliberately left the option concerning himself out.

Yes, I wanted to follow roughly the same type of broad plot like as the show but somehow make it credible, hence it was so hard to write this one. Oh you liked the sindoor message- your the first to mention it- so happy!

Big waala huggy to you back!

Yes, I like filmy when writing FFs as it is meant to be on TV after all but only filmy in a sensible way if that makes sense? Drama is good but not mindless drama types?

I knew, so knew you would like me "tadpavaing" Swara somewhat. Medha really helped me here as I wanted it not to click into place too easily.

Urgh- it was hard enough to write the scenes with you know who so in this part couldn't stretch to dialogues.

4: DP is our man 😎 Been wanting him in a serious supporting role so took my chance! Love the man. And Ragini is such a layered character- way more than Swara so not surprised you "like" her- anyone who is serious about writing would. You, me, Medha, Viji, we all do. I wanted to redeem DP after his slap of Sanskaar before, so this was my way to make amends.

Thanks so much for this G- love you xoxo

Shruthi , wonderfully written story . I liked the characterization of each character and the changes in their behavior is narrated perfectly . Loved it .

Originally posted by: suhasini2727

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#99cc00">shruthi wonderfully written...👏</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#99cc00">seriously relieved after reading 3rd part as u said</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#99cc00">here swara z smart and not mahaan...its tooo goood</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#99cc00">kaash serial mey aisa ho...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#99cc00">very much enjoyed dr...😊</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#99cc00">her confession in front of whole family... her inner turmoil</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#99cc00">sanskaar asusual awesome</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#99cc00">penned it down perfectly...⭐️</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#99cc00">thanku for writing this beautiful story🤗</font>

Hi Suhasini! Thank you so much for your kind words Suhasini. Very pleased that you enjoyed it so much and that you felt this Swara was much more sensible finally:).

Hi Shruti!
Read all the 4 parts and trust me loved all of them.
What a Ragini man! Imagine Tejaswi like that 😕
I loved all the parts. Mostly we realise some person worth only when we are about to loose him or he's in pain. This was clearly shown and very well written yaar.
So in brief awesome, fabulous, fantastic, amazing, beaautiful, lovely, etc. etc. 👍🏼
Great job 👏👏

Originally posted by: Purbishona

I loved the last part.. You nailed it girl.. What to say yaar.. Brilliant.. DP is a smart man.. He gave it back to Laksh.. And the hospital and bedroom scene.. Awww. Swara was so caring.. Hahaha. And Sanskaar ke liye kya bolu pata nahi.. Be like that always handsome..

Thank you Purbi, your too sweet. Glad your pleased with it. DP is awesome na? And Sanskaar- yes never tire of praising this man. I am sick of confused Swara so had to do this here! Lots of love x

Originally posted by: Messi2

frootie wonderful ending👏want dis to happen but cvs will dragloved how sanskar protects her nd she realises nd the test was amazing❤️thanks for the pm

⭐️these r for u

Made me 😆 reading you call me frootie. Ah, so pleased you liked it! We (team Sanskaar and SwaSan I mean) all want this to happen I guess but pata nahi when the cvs will put us out of our misery. Tabh tak, we have to make do with own imagination. Test was a good way to judge na?! 😉

Originally posted by: sadhana.np

Awesome 👏
Loved all the parts 😊

Thanks so much Sadhana x

Originally posted by: Kamala05

Shruthi , wonderfully written story . I liked the characterization of each character and the changes in their behavior is narrated perfectly . Loved it .

Kamala, thanks so much for your kind words, really appreciate it. Glad you liked it :)