Against All Odds- A SwaSan Four Shot

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akanksha

@luvakanksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Awesome work loved it 👏

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Shrutu,

Hugs hugs hugs hugs. Matlab huggies. ui ma😕... matlab jhappis.🤗for the dedication here. I am glad u used the jumble I told ya as u saw fit😛.

I adore DP. Kya aadmi hai. He always smells conspiracies a mile away.👍🏼

I have one complaint...why didn't u make him give Lucky a few more slaps? Bhai bhai karta rehta hai..and he actually pushed away his injured bhai?😡

I have to say you made ragini seem seriously ill with delusions. She is dangerously mad. Brilliantly portrayed the cackle.👏 Laksh is mad too. or plain brat. Whatever.🤢

'mere paas abhi rumaal nahi hai.'' awww

Swara was like' lete raho hubby. you aint escaping this time.listen I love u not anybody else'😉

I adored the hospital convo...and how you said that the tree of love blossomed from the sapling.😳

The last bit...ye toh hona hi tha. Wait karte karte jaan sukh raha hai.😳😳

I loved how sanskaar was looking at ragini with a smirk nd a raised eyebrow. Guru.😃

Lovely ending. Everything ok at the end. if its not ok it is not the end.

❤️

Medha.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: luvakanksha
Awesome work loved it 👏

Thank you so much 😃

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: medhasankar
Shrutu,

Hugs hugs hugs hugs. Matlab huggies. ui ma😕... matlab jhappis.🤗for the dedication here. I am glad u used the jumble I told ya as u saw fit😛.

I adore DP. Kya aadmi hai. He always smells conspiracies a mile away.👍🏼

I have one complaint...why didn't u make him give Lucky a few more slaps? Bhai bhai karta rehta hai..and he actually pushed away his injured bhai?😡

I have to say you made ragini seem seriously ill with delusions. She is dangerously mad. Brilliantly portrayed the cackle.👏 Laksh is mad too. or plain brat. Whatever.🤢

'mere paas abhi rumaal nahi hai.'' awww

Swara was like' lete raho hubby. you aint escaping this time.listen I love u not anybody else'😉
I adored the hospital convo...and how you said that the tree of love blossomed from the sapling.😳

The last bit...ye toh hona hi tha. Wait karte karte jaan sukh raha hai.😳😳

I loved how sanskaar was looking at ragini with a smirk nd a raised eyebrow. Guru.😃

Lovely ending. Everything ok at the end. if its not ok it is not the end.

❤️
Medha.

Meri jaan 🤗 x 10 too mmmwahs also

DP is the man 😎. I so wanted him to have a major supporting role!

You know what, funny you ask about multiple slaps- just watching the maha epi and if I had seen that before I wrote, Lucky could have been getting slaps from more than just DP 😡😡🤢

I played a number of options with Ragini but as really see her as mad, that one seemed most effective. Glad you thought it came off.

SwaSan- I was so getting side tracked with more scenes for them but had to hold off, I'll do a Diwali piece of just romance, no angst! Have a general idea!

You like the last bit?!😳

Damn Sanskaar's injuries 😉

Yayyy, I get the green from you- me happywaala happy! Love you and each bit of dedication is totally meant as you know. This was the hardest one I wrote so far, I feel massively drained today! ❤️

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Love it!

Loved reading about Swara's care and concern for Sanskaar. For some reason I have a feeling we will get something like this in the show.

Loved how Durga Prasad decided to listen to all the parties concerned before taking a decision.

My fav part of this whole 4S is when Lakshya got the slap he so richly deserves! The icing on the cake is that he got banished and Ragini got institutionalized!

The last part was so...

You have made me speechless for a few minutes after I read this and that is no mean feat, trust me.

This is one of the best fics I have read! Thank you for such an awesome fic!

Looking forward to the next one! No pressure 😉

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

You know what I loved in this update something more than SwaSan moments that SLAP hayee how I wish DP do that in serial

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Very Well Written...👏

Hey you! Thank you!

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

@Part 4: 👏 finally dil ko sukoon aya😳 Sanskaar khush toh main khush😆

DP was his usual smart self 😎 Loved his line about needing the children he can trust around him👏 A perfect indication of how much he is shattered by Laksha-Ragini's ghatiya harkatein (Adarsh being not that great either🥱)

Laksha finally got the slap he deserved. He pushed Sanskaar away when he had just returned from the hospital?! JERK!😵

Ragini😳 that maniacal gleam in her eyes. Caught once again by gurudev 😈 Though in the show I dont think she has any plans of uniting SwaLak. She will never leave Laksh. She will just ruin Swara's image & ensure Laksh has a hand in it so Swara hates him forever.

How fortunate (damn cant even use lucky freely now!) is Swara to be getting those lessons from Sanskaar☺️ Lage raho!😉

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sana

@sanabmw

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

superblyyy written...👏

beautiful😛

awsome👏

...just love it...😳

this is for u👏

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Ramya

@The-Heart

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Posted: 9 years ago

#140

Thanks again for giving fast update

I think laksh deserve more slaps, at least he deserve one slap from swara too

I thought you will give enough slaps for both pyshco ragini and her pyara patidev lakshji 😒

Whatever i am happy he got at least one slap and peace of mind from DP 😃 😃

I love the swasan conversation in the hospital😳 and in the bedroom conversation is simply superb😳

( when will cvs show this kind of scenes in show)

Finally ragini confessed her crimes including laksh involvement 🤣( i would like to see laksh and Annapurna face at that moment)

I love the sentence "A tendril of hope had taken root yesterday when she had awoved her love to him in front of all, but today that had blossomed to a full grown tree, bursting with beauty and joy and the promise of a life had to date only dared dream about" 👏 👏

The ending is quite good

Edited by The-Heart - 9 years ago

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