Redemption: A Swara/Sanskaar & Ragini Story [Pt10-Pg33]

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Brilliant update!

Lakshya is already confused by this new Ragini and this tells me that he is not going to last long infront of her and we will soon see him try to woo this version of his wife!

It's adorable how shy Swara is around Sanskaar and I loved that he asked her out! Will the next chapter have their date?

The best part about this fic is the love that Ragini has for her sister and I absolutely loved that last paragraph!

Looking forward to your next update and I pray that it is soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Javeria3991
awesome update

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: foresight
loved the way you have show her discomfort, swasan awkwardness at their changed equation and ragini wanting to build stronger relation with swara. i am already looking forward to the next update.

I wouldn't call Swara and Sanskaar awkward, just way more aware of each other than before (especially Swara).

I love a bond between sisters, and whether show makers wish to show it or nor I will have my Swara and Ragini thick as thieves soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sarathy321
Beautifully written as always. ..
Was waiting for the update..
Blushing swara and swara rags moments were nice

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: abika
AwesomE
Con soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: neelzzz
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simply supurb

i luved swara sanskar moments

date ke liye puchna

swara concern nd care abut ragini

luved it

i thnk ye 1st ff h in which i m also luving swara yr ( i can believe dis)

Swara is not a very likable character at times, especially when it comes to the treatment of Sanskaar. I am happy to see that you enjoy reading her too.

Originally posted by: neelzzz

oo i dnt hv any prob in laksh hatng ragini ryt knw ( bcoz i knw dis is raglak ff😉)

bt when he is gng to relies his luv for ragini...ragini ye sari halkate nhi bhulne wali of man in blue...

i m simply w8ng 4 dose moments although i knw they are faaar away ryt nw

Is this a Ragini and Lakshya fic? How can you be sure? Maybe some other dashing hero will come by to sweet her off her feet... Just saying...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: princess_tara
awesome update
thanx for pm

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: mridulakrishnan
awesome update dear...&&&& thanks for the PM

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sakura24
I'm waiting for the date now, which I hope would turn out to be a beautiful memory for both of them.
Ragini and Lakshya are progressing well, I see things building up here.

Still Ragini is my favorite among everyone you've created, such an epitome of sweetness!

Do continue soon :)

Ragini was always my favorite, hence this mainly Ragini-centered fic. But watching the show and seeing what they turned her into disgusts me.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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