Redemption: A Swara/Sanskaar & Ragini Story [Pt10-Pg33]

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naina

@neelzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Allyson

Well now that Ragini is away from her oppressive family members she might just get a chance to blossom and actually grow a backbone. Lets see what the future holds.

As for Lakshya, lets not forget all the lying and manipulating that Ragini did. She took away his love. I think a little hate is justified.

oo i dnt hv any prob in laksh hatng ragini ryt knw ( bcoz i knw dis is raglak ff😉)

bt when he is gng to relies his luv for ragini...ragini ye sari halkate nhi bhulne wali of man in blue...

i m simply w8ng 4 dose moments although i knw they are faaar away ryt nw

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#152

I'm waiting for the date now, which I hope would turn out to be a beautiful memory for both of them.

Ragini and Lakshya are progressing well, I see things building up here.

Still Ragini is my favorite among everyone you've created, such an epitome of sweetness!

Do continue soon :)

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Porkalai

@Porkalai22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

jst luved it...
I always wanted dis ragini...
nd thanks for pm

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Miracle_sweet

@Miracle_sweet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Another awesome update!
I love reading this fic. I have a feeling that if Ragini now regains her memory, she will truly regret her actions and try and make things right again.

I hate how Laksh can't see that a big reason for Ragini having done what she did was because of him playing with her heart the way he did. I am really hating his character right now.

I love the Swara and Ragini dynamics! As well as the Swasan developmment :)

Mihika

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ritika52

@ritika52

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Plz update n continue...ragini ko redeem kro...make hr positive n make laksh realise his mistake in ragini case...a fresh start un dono ka n more of swasan...

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#156

i toatally luv this ff..its positivity with ragini really touches my heart...m so excited to see bondinng os swaragini and date of swasan...thanks 4 pm

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arohijsp

@arohijsp

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

I read all the updates at a one go. I couldn't believe how I missed this lovely story. You write really well dear.I love Ragini's character here, her feelings, her confusions all superbly expressed. I'm glad Swara isn't confused regarding her decision to give their marriage a chance. Love Swasan!
Pls continue soon:)

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Read all the Chapters in one go. I have to say it really good. I love Ragini here and I want her to be happy. Does it have to be Lakshya though I wonder.This Ragini deserves someone better than Lakshya.

I love how quickly Swara realised her feelings and now that Swasan are happy here I am happy too.

Also do update soon. I really want to know how the story progress. And PM me if possible.

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khushi

@khushi_shankar

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Really nice sotry! Keep up the nice work :)

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#160

Very beautifully constructed update. You had done justice to both the threads in your story: Ragini's discomfort and fear at the unfamiliar surroundings, at the treatment she's getting from Lakshya; as well as the cutely awkward feelings Swara is having for Sanskaar. The way she was so hyper aware of Sanskaar's gaze on her, was nice to read. And he was teasingly smiling at her, guessing and perhaps enjoying the effect he had on her.

You are evoking a lot of empathy for Ragini in your tale. Hats off to you, for showing her redemption in such a mature and realistic manner. The way she feels, that she wants to milk these 6 months for all the moments she gets to spend with her sister, was so touching. She wants and expects nothing from Lakshya, she just wants to live in MM for 6 months to soak in that time with the person whom she knows, feels so affectionate towards her.

Please do PM me for your further updates.

Cheers

Viji

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