Redemption: A Swara/Sanskaar & Ragini Story [Pt10-Pg33]

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#181

It is progressing well on both couples. I can't say much about Lakshya but I'm eagerly waiting for the day when he comes in terms with their changed lives.

continue soon!

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

beautiful one Allyson. I liked how Ragini is not jumping to make it right the wrong way, she wants to find out what happened and also to find out what swara wants.

swara getting attracted towards sanskar...niceee 😳

i hope ragini and sanskar can help swara solve her dilemma soon.

looking forward to the next part 😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Lovely update. Lakshya was creepily persistent and nearly neurotic in his pursuit of Swara, his delusion firmly in place, that she's pretending to move on with Sanskaar, just to spite him.

I liked how Ragini is carefully making notes of the nuggets of information coming her way, to make sure that she takes the correct steps to make things better. Thankfully, she's not jumping to the conclusion that she has to reunite Swara with Lakshya.

It was cute and romantic to read of how Swara is getting attracted to Sanskaar, how she feels so comfortable and uncomplicated in his company. Hoping that she doesn't take any rash decisions, based on her fear of Lakshya's unwelcome pursuit.

Thanks for the pm and waiting for your next update. 😊

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alisha17

@alisha17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Lovely update

Can't wait for next part

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Loved it and thanks for the PM.

I liked it. Every scene was good and I am looking forward to the upcoming updates. As I said before I love this Ragini calm and rational.

Ofcourse Swasan are together so it makes me happier. Do update soon. Will be waiting.

P.s Pm me once you update.

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arohijsp

@arohijsp

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#186

Lovely update. I love Ragini's monologs. Laksh is creepy as ever. Hope Swara will not take any drastic decisions to leave MM. Looking forward to Swasan's date. So pls update soon:)

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#187

nice reply by swara but i hope she is noot backing out of sanskar life...cant wait for dinner date

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Brilliant update! Loved the interaction between SwaSan at the beginning of this chapter! Swara is feeling attracted to her husband? That is very nice and very unexpected!

That confrontation with Lakshya was unpalatable, however necessary it was in the grand scheme of things! And even worse is that Ragini overheard it! I liked the decision she came to though, she will do whatever to help Swara.

Swara is still indecisive regarding Sanskaar? And I thought she was progressing! I hoped for too much too soon... *sigh* That silly smile she got when thinking of Sanskaar gives me hope though.

I am looking forward to the date in the next update!