Zenith- SwaSan OS- 16+ ONLY! - Page 9

Originally posted by: inlieu

Hey Shruti! Can I just say how happy I am to see you experiment with different styles and genres in your writing? (Of course we readers are fortunate to be the audience of each piece 😆)

Swara was initially portrayed as the bold and beautiful heroine that we all liked immediately, and that character I can definitely see taking the lead as in your story. At present, though, it's like she's a different person altogether so I will reserve my comments on whether or not she will ever do this with/for Sanskaar, but more importantly, for her own happiness. It's time she thought about striving to achieve things for her happiness and peace of mind the way she fights for others.

If ever she does take such a stand or does even 10% of what the Swara in this story does , I would be curious to see Sanksaar's sanskaari reactions, a la "Tum mere upar ho Swara" and possibly him being embarrassed by her overt gestures of affection. Keeping in mind he has never done such things for or to her and probably won't so when she makes the first move I can imagine his "discomfort". 😉

Originally posted by: sneharay

Its Awesome.. 😊

Thank you Sneha x

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey hon!

Wow- you are seriously making my day with these comments, thank you again! So kind! I'm laughing and blushing both at your comments- I remembered the Swara I "created" here! Totally- Sanskaari Sanskaar would be like 😲😲- Swara are you ok, fever?! 😆 But it would be so much fun to watch and yes, like you I don't have much hopes. They have to show all heroines overtly shy and waiting for the first move to be made but if its Sanskaar making the moves, I will be happily watching too 😳

What The Hell ... that was the first thing that came to my mind when I saw this previous VM... how come I missed this story is beyond me... because generally I keep look out for your stories... 😆😳
One again you have so amazingly described the whole scenario... This is exactly how it feels in mountains range... It was like I was back at college place... The tranquility and peace of mountains can't be gained in cities here. Lolz... wifey follows hubby's footstep to declare her love... epic... 😆
And Hubby dearest living upto his name yet having ahem ahem thoughts... double epic...😆 His wife was doing everything to seduce him... yet he was being overtly gentleman.. Me can't stop chuckling here... 😛😳😆 And finally he made her cry... Idiot ... But finally got clue... 😆😉
Now me being funny aside, This is a piece of brilliance... you have wrote this is so amazingly... Their love making is described just with right words... This made me blush more than reading other spicy stories earlier. Your word play was more romantic than those stories... Seriously, I love ya for writing this... 😳 Like I told ya many times... your words are hypnotic and magical... They weave the whole story in front of my eyes while reading them... Just keep rocking Shruti...🤗

P.S.: you have so set me in mood for my upcoming VM... 😈😆

With loads of love
Nitz..😳

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

What The Hell ... that was the first thing that came to my mind when I saw this previous VM... how come I missed this story is beyond me... because generally I keep look out for your stories... 😆😳
One again you have so amazingly described the whole scenario... This is exactly how it feels in mountains range... It was like I was back at college place... The tranquility and peace of mountains can't be gained in cities here. Lolz... wifey follows hubby's footstep to declare her love... epic... 😆
And Hubby dearest living upto his name yet having ahem ahem thoughts... double epic...😆 His wife was doing everything to seduce him... yet he was being overtly gentleman.. Me can't stop chuckling here... 😛😳😆 And finally he made her cry... Idiot ... But finally got clue... 😆😉
Now me being funny aside, This is a piece of brilliance... you have wrote this is so amazingly... Their love making is described just with right words... This made me blush more than reading other spicy stories earlier. Your word play was more romantic than those stories... Seriously, I love ya for writing this... 😳 Like I told ya many times... your words are hypnotic and magical... They weave the whole story in front of my eyes while reading them... Just keep rocking Shruti...🤗

P.S.: you have so set me in mood for my upcoming VM... 😈😆

With loads of love
Nitz..😳

Originally posted by: xoanyaxo

I loved the OS❤️

just curious what does zenith mean?

Originally posted by: butteru

Ufnesss .. haye koi to rook lo 😳 😆

Thank GOD i was alone whn i was reading this 😆 .. itni thand mein bhi room ka temperature automatically barh gaya tha 😳 .. 16+ but not vulgar n for that u deserve 👏👏

cold weather rain shain .. plus Sawsan romance damn hwt .. woww .. Swara madam was trying to seduce Sankuu 😲 .. tht something new 😆 .. n our sanskaari Sanskaar samjha hi nahi 🤣

n i love the beginning part as well Swara's confession in frnt of everyone .. brave hogayi humari larki 😳👏

you did a fabulous job .. loved it .. !!

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Faru 🤗

Good move reading it whilst alone, some others bechara read on trains and what not and then toh ☺️. Glad you liked it and thank you for saying it was not vulgar- that was my prime aim! Mmmwah.