Zenith- SwaSan OS- 16+ ONLY! - Page 8

Originally posted by: anu91

Wow shimla...

No words for this story...

U wrote it so beautifully...

Loved it dear...

Originally posted by: kaku17

Shruti my dear...🤗...it was so amazing...loved it...😃

you know for me the best part was how swara had to do all the hard work to knock some sense in to sanskaar... ( well after that defo sansku took over...😳)...sanskaar can be daft at times...I don't really blame that guy much as he has been put through grind a lot...and therefore I love to see swara madam sweating it out ...doing things which she is uncomfortable doing, only for sansku darling...and moreover I have my grudges against her so it kinda pacifies to me to see swara toil...😆...and a big jhappi 🤗 to you for giving me this satisfaction...wicked I am...😳

I have been busy off late so have not been able to leave appreciatory notes on any of your amazing stories and am now rushing to write my appreciation for your comprehension series, the last part...😃...I clearly love when madam is put on the mat...😛

Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac

Omg Shruti! This was so ☺️

Sanskaar's agony was so aptly described along with his sense of righteousness. I won't be surprised if he does something like this on the show too.

Coming to Swara's seducing attempts, very unlikely to happen but something I really would love to see. And the ones you wrote here were hilarious especially Sanky's reactions to it. 😆

He was so confused and didn't understand until made to in clear words and what followed was beautiful. You have such a way with words. You made it seem so romantic.

Keep writing more, Shru! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Thank you so much honey! Such nice comments 😳. Yes I felt that Sanskaar would be hesitant not because it's his nature but madam and her nakhre have made him like that. But yes no chance in the show to see Swara bold I think! So glad you got the humour I was trying to mix into it too without losing the romance! I might write a 3 shot this weekend, working through an idea mentally, let's hope it works! Lots of love xoxo

Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac

I've been working on an idea forever too. It finally came together in my mind yesterday 😆 but now I have to find time to write it 🤔 I'm sure yours will work out sooner than mine. I love writing but I am too lazy to do it 😆 Anyway, would love to read yours. I may not leave comments regularly but I have read most of your works and I'm a huge fan. All the best! Lots of love to u too 🤗

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

BM

Originally posted by: Purbishona

Hot! Hot! Hot! Feeling sumthing sumthing..hahaha.. You penned it so well sweetie.. Loved every inch of the OS.. Dil garden garden ho gaya..