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@Jess_Ru

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">🤣Came wearing in a towel?! Itni bold nahi banadiya usse, but nice idea!😉Thanks for liking it!</font>

banado yaar usse bold warna cvs tho will just show her maa baba nd behan jaap

do use dat idea if u want to continue dis

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

☺️ ☺️

There was me grinning like an idiot on the train, trying to control my giggles while reading this.

Swara taking the first step and that's all Sanky needed .

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: ros_aavir
☺️ ☺️
There was me grinning like an idiot on the train, trying to control my giggles while reading this.

Swara taking the first step and that's all Sanky needed .

You read on the train too?! Sheesh- poor you 😆. Glad you liked it!

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Sapna

@NainoMeinSapna

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Hey Shruti,

Oh my God, I loved this OS. It was so cute the way she was trying to woo him. 😆

You're hands down one of my favourite writers on the forum and a role model.

Keep up the awesome work! 😉😃

Oh and thanks for the PMs. Please continue to PM me whenever you write something new. Thanks.

Edited by asexualflower - 9 years ago

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: asexualflower
Hey Shruti,
Oh my God, I loved this OS. It was so cute the way she was trying to woo him. 😆
You're hands down one of my favourite writers on the forum and a role model.
Keep up the awesome work! 😉😃
Oh and thanks for the PMs. Please continue to PM me whenever you write something new. Thanks.

Sapna 🤗

You liked? Thank you so much and that's such high praise, your making me 😳. Why role model though?! 😲 Mere parr koi apne aap ko model matt kariyo, you poor things 😆.

I'll def keep PM'ing you- thank you for supporting my efforts! xoxo

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_Nik_

@_Nik_

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

This os was hot...
Swara trying to make Sanskaar asanskari 😆
Bechara had to control himself.
Hope they show something like this in the show n Swara should zabardasti se kiss Sanky.

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Love it!

I seriously hope that we get a public confession from Swara! I enjoyed reading about her bold avatar. Who knows how long it will take in the show for her to even confess to Sanskaar...

I loved how much Sanskaar tried to control himself but, alas, everything and his wife were against him! It made me laugh to read how sanskaari he tried to be!

This was a beautiful OS and am already waiting for the next one.

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Ashakalyani

@Ashakalyani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

awesome one ...realy loved it

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Sanskaar can be so slow sometime.
Loved to read this OS.
Swara knows how to manofy her Sanskaar.

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misaki

@misaki

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Oh My Gosh Shru!!!!!!😲 I mean I knew it was going to be very "in detail" when I saw +16 in the title but this was so amazingly done. 🤗🤗 I absolutely loved it!

I am going mad working extra hours for a project from past 3 days and haven't had the time to do anything.😳 I couldn't comment on your other work too.I finally had a break and I really wanted to read this one, but my lead!!!😡 Yahan bhi agaya nikamma! And so I had to continue reading it on my mobile☺️ Imagine the scandal otherwise😆

I am so glad that you posted it on the forum. 🤗 Why would you want to deny us this amazing work?!😡 Show mein toh kabhi dekhne nahin milega.(in detail) *Besharam I am, I know😆*

Now can you blame me for loving what you write?🤗🤗I know how challenging it is to write something that is "adult" while making sure you don't cross that line. This was done so beautifully. I loved every part of it. From the delaration , Sanskaar's frustration, the very obvious sexual tension to finally Swara's almost backless blouse 😳

This part though cracked me up.

"Meri baal mein itni saari clips hain, please nikaal do?"

"Nahi! he bit out. shocking them both with the sudden vehemance. " I mean Swara itna toh tum karsakti ho na?"

I could so imagine Sanskaar's face going O.O and bechari Swara. 🤣🤣🤣 I feel you girl I feel you!😆 When will you understand Sanskaar ? It's impossible not to jump you! And this is your wife. Uska toh "haq" hain😉😆

Edited by misaki - 9 years ago

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