Zenith- SwaSan OS- 16+ ONLY! - Page 7

Originally posted by: Nikkk

This os was hot...
Swara trying to make Sanskaar asanskari 😆
Bechara had to control himself.
Hope they show something like this in the show n Swara should zabardasti se kiss Sanky.

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Love it!

I seriously hope that we get a public confession from Swara! I enjoyed reading about her bold avatar. Who knows how long it will take in the show for her to even confess to Sanskaar...

I loved how much Sanskaar tried to control himself but, alas, everything and his wife were against him! It made me laugh to read how sanskaari he tried to be!

This was a beautiful OS and am already waiting for the next one.

Originally posted by: Sanavi

Sanskaar can be so slow sometime.
Loved to read this OS.
Swara knows how to manofy her Sanskaar.

Originally posted by: misaki

Oh My Gosh Shru!!!!!!😲 I mean I knew it was going to be very "in detail" when I saw +16 in the title but this was so amazingly done. 🤗🤗 I absolutely loved it!

I am going mad working extra hours for a project from past 3 days and haven't had the time to do anything.😳 I couldn't comment on your other work too.I finally had a break and I really wanted to read this one, but my lead!!!😡 Yahan bhi agaya nikamma! And so I had to continue reading it on my mobile☺️ Imagine the scandal otherwise😆

I am so glad that you posted it on the forum. 🤗 Why would you want to deny us this amazing work?!😡 Show mein toh kabhi dekhne nahin milega.(in detail) *Besharam I am, I know😆*

Now can you blame me for loving what you write?🤗🤗I know how challenging it is to write something that is "adult" while making sure you don't cross that line. This was done so beautifully. I loved every part of it. From the delaration , Sanskaar's frustration, the very obvious sexual tension to finally Swara's almost backless blouse 😳

This part though cracked me up.

"Meri baal mein itni saari clips hain, please nikaal do?"

"Nahi! he bit out. shocking them both with the sudden vehemance. " I mean Swara itna toh tum karsakti ho na?"

I could so imagine Sanskaar's face going O.O and bechari Swara. 🤣🤣🤣 I feel you girl I feel you!😆 When will you understand Sanskaar ? It's impossible not to jump you! And this is your wife. Uska toh "haq" hain😉😆

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">You liked it and didn't think it was too much? I had a massive panic, some of the girls gave me himmat and Medhu gave counselling😆. Sanskaar ka kya kahein- this is the "tum mere uppar ho" guy😆</font>

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Bilkul bhi nahi, it was not too much. I seriously loved it ☺️