Zenith- SwaSan OS- 16+ ONLY! - Page 4

Originally posted by: tigress.meenu

Omg... Awesome os yaar.. How beautiful...

I am blushing yaar..

Poor swara.. Giving many signs to her hubby but that budhu is continuing to be his Sharif and bevakoof self.. And finally sankus bulb got lightened when swara herself told her wish.. And the last para made me red😳

Originally posted by: medhasankar

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Shrutu🤗,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I should not have opened this in my office lunch time. Lunch and this do not go well together. Well, you did warn, in the title itself...I will heed it from next time.😳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Very seductive Swara. Perfect setting, cold weather and hot romance.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I loved this line...** Did she think he was made of stone?**🤣kya haalat hai.😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">and Swara's feelings were etched by you in this very impactful sentence**" Agar mujhe time nahi, mera pati chahiye toh?"**😉</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I loved the description too...and I always like one fact about your stories...there is a place for everything and everything in its place.👏</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Love--</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Medha.</font>

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Shrutu🤗,

I should not have opened this in my office lunch time. Lunch and this do not go well together. Well, you did warn, in the title itself...I will heed it from next time.😳

Very seductive Swara. Perfect setting, cold weather and hot romance.

I loved this line...** Did she think he was made of stone?**🤣 kya haalat hai.😆

and Swara's feelings were etched by you in this very impactful sentence**" Agar mujhe time nahi, mera pati chahiye toh?"**😉

I loved the description too...and I always like one fact about your stories...there is a place for everything and everything in its place.👏

Love--

Medha.

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Oh dear...Shru, Medha...what is happening to me. 😳 After reading this OS (which, BTW, Shru, stop worrying, Was perfectly tastefully done, not vulgar at all)...but the problem is, I am now reading dual meanings into a lot of innocent sentences.

^^^^ the sentence in bold above, sorta suggested something to me. I think I need a break. ☺️ ☺️</font>

Originally posted by: RUQAIYA10

Hey😊
This OS is totally blush blush 😳 so very well written. Sanky is being typically Sanky, as always concerned about Swara's feelings and mistakenly under the impression that his wifey needs some time to get comfortable with this new level of intimacy. so he goes on to do what he does best, keeping her at arms length even if its killing him. yaar Sanky kabhi to samjha karo!

Loved Swara for taking the matter in to her own hands and letting her husband know that sometimes he acts like an adorable budhu.

If I don't get my Swasan fill in today's episode I will just come back and reread this OS. I know it won't fail to brighten my mood😉

Originally posted by: luvakanksha

Very nice os👏

I loved it😳

The beginning was a great one I really want swara to declare her love for sanky publicly

Swara trying to seduce sanky you made her look cute and sexy at the same time

Also u gave us the shade of both gentleman sanky and the fierce lover boy sanky