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PART 4

LIME STAR CAFE.

swara ragini and palak came there to share some chats.
"Swara hum tumhe or sanskar ko ek krke rhenge" she smiled to swara holding her hand. Swara felt a pang. "Ragini kya bol ri ho... " before she could complete ragini cut her"dekho swara Hume kuch nai sunna hm sanskar or tumhe ek dekhna chahte h bus. Swara was about to say smthng when palak "mumma apka phn" palak who was playing on her phn gave her phone. The screen flashed laksh , she took the call. "Hn laksh , kahie, hn me aa jaungi 1ghnte me" she hunged the call. "Acha swara me chalti hun, or na apne ghr ane k lie tayyar ho jao. Palak hugged swara and swara kissed her forehead. " maa missed u beta" palak had tears in her eyes. "Mee too maa" ragini's eyes were filled with tears of joy. "Palak chalo beta jana h, maa aegi ghr bht jaldi okk" palak came to ragini n bit goodbye to swara n left.
Swara was still scared of laksh , she thought if he will came to know she is here wat he will do. She wiped her tears n cleared her thoughts n went from there.

MAHESHWARI HOUSE

Sanskar came to house he was unable to forget about swara his mind was just repeating one name swara. He was going to his room. "Sanskar khana to kha le chora" shouted sujata. "Bhook nai h mom" he went directly to room n looked him in. "Kyun aai h vo vapis kya chahti h mujhse" he threw his phn on bed. N started roaming in room. "Lekin sanskar tu kyun uske baare me soch ra h, usne tere or Teri beti k bare me nai socha na" he sat on couch n opened laptop n started working. After few minutes of unsuccessful trail to concentrate he slamed the laptop.
His eyes brimmed with tears. "Me aj b tumse bht Pyar krta hun swara, kyun chora tumne mujhe" tears made way down his cheeks.

Ragini and palak came home. "Acha palak suno papa ko bilkul mt btana tumne maa ko dekha OK" palak saw her in confusion . "beta tumhe pta h na Hume maa ko ghar Lana h to uske plan ke lie tumhe chup hona hoga okk" palak simply smiled. "Pakka promise mumma, but me b plan me hun na" palak raised her brows. "Han han bilkul" ragini said. And both of them went to sanskar's room.

Sanskar was in his world. When ragini knocked the door. "Sanskar kholie hum or palak h" said ragini n sanskar was brought back to senses. He opened the door. He was standing not facing them. He wiped his tears n collected courage to face them. "Kya hua" he turned. "Papa " palak jumped on sanskar n sanskar hugged her "kesa h mera beta" he kissed her forehead. And ragini started setting the room. "Papa aj me bht khush hun , very happy" palak said. Ragini Got frightened that now palak will tell about swara she took the pillow n hid her face. Sweat drops formed on her forehead.
"Aj me or mumma ..." Ragini closed her eyes n gulped "ghumne gae we enjoyed a lot" completed palak. Ragini took a sigh of relief. Sanskar turned to thank ragini. "Tumhe kya Ho gya itna pasina kyun aara h" ragini stood up smiled n cleaned her forehead "nai kuch nai sanskar" she smiled. "By the wat thanksss ragini" sanskar smiled to her. "Ye mera farz h sanskar" she took palak with her. "Acha ab me palak ko sula deti hun" ragini n palak left in no time.

Ragini's room

"Palak tumne meri jaan nikal dI thi, tum papa ko swara k bre me btane vali thi na" palak cupped her face n smiled. "Me to apko dra ri thi bus" n she giggled. Ragini was left open mouth. Palak closed her mouth "makkhi gus jaegi mumma" palak again giggled. "U badmash" ragini started tickling her. Room was filled with their laughter.
Laksh came to the room n saw ragini n palak playing he saw ragini with loved eyes. She was very beautiful said his heart. "Arey ye kya mere bina" said laksh. Palak and ragini came to reality. "Arey ap aa gae Hume apse kuch BAAT krni thi, palak tum jao so jao beta" palak left after kissing ragini n laksh.
"Bolo ragini" asked laksh. Ragini narrated him everything hw she met swara n about her plan to unite them.
Laksh was really very guilty about wat he did he found it an opportunity to lessen his wrongs so he agreed to support ragini in all her plan. "I'll help u, Jo b krna ho me krunga" ragini hugged laksh in excitement. "Thank u laksh" but she is realised wat she did n came of his embrace "so. Sorry" she said. "It's OK , patni ho tum meri chalta h" laksh smirked n left the room. Ragini shyly smiled to her.

Laksh had started liking ragini n was loving her way . each day proceeds developing more feeling for ragini in laksh's heart. He took his phone n msged ragini to come in garden.
Ragini saw the msg n went to the garden. She saw laksh n went to him. "Kya hua laksh" he holded her hand n made her sit on the bench. "Swara yhn khn pe h" laksh asked. "Wait I'll msg u her hotel adress" she started msging "done" she smiled to him. "Vese swara ka adress kyun" she asked with so innocence "tum to palak se b choti ho" he pinched her cheeks. Ragini smiled to this cute act. "Ap b na laksh bataie na" "ragini plan krne ae pehle me swara ko yhn. Ane k lie rai krna chahta hun. " mmm chalie ye b sai h, lekin kal sham tk aajaega okkk" she said being strict. "Kyu. Par" laksh asked n ragini now pinched his cheeks "ap b palak se b Chote h" n both burst in laughter. "Acha" palak said who was standing at some distance frm them folding her arms.
"Palak tum yhn abi tak soi nai" ragini saw the time it was 11. Palak came n sat on laksh's lap.
"Apko me bchi lgti hu" ragini n laksh saw each other at her silly question. "N ap mujhse b Chote" palak saw laksh n ragini. "Grow up mumma n Chachu" she gave them angry look.
Ragini n laksh started laughing. "Mumma I m serious" ragini took her frm laksh "OK OK sorry, kal ke plan ka part smjhti hun tumhe chalo" she went with ragini. Laksh completed laughing n realised he will hv to meet swara tomorrow. He was very guilty at wat he did he want to apologise. He want to curse him in front of her.

NEXT MORNING , HOTEL.

swara was working on her new tone that she was supposed to present to sanskar's clients today.
She heard a knock on door. "Is waqt kaun hoga" she saw the clock it showed 9" she opened the door. And was taken aback to see laksh. She almost died seeing him here, why is he here? Wat he want now? 100 of questions flooded her mind. "Me andar askta hun" laksh stammered. "Hmm.. Aa.. Aoo" she called him in , he sat on couch n swara on bed. Laksh held his head low. After few minutes of silence he saw swara " I m really sorry swara" swara saw him. His eyes were swallon his face was wet with tears of guilt. "I know I don't deserve forgiveness. But plzzz mujhe maaf krdo, pagl ho gya tha me swara, us nanhi Jan k lie itna glt.. Ghin ati h mujhe khudse maf krdo mujhe" swara saw him really repenting for wat he did.
"Maaf to tumhe kr dia laksh , lekin isse kya mujhe mera pati or meri bchi mujhe mil jaenge" she saw him with tears. "Swara me tumhe or Bhai ko mila k rahunga, ye mera wada h" n he left. Swara smiled sarcastically.

After few hours in sanskar's office.

Swara was waiting for clients to come n also for sanskar. Sanskar came n saw her "wait for few minutes I'll call u" he professionally replied n left. Swara was hurt he now don't care for her anymore. After sometime he was called in a big room where there were many people sitting.
Swara came in n saw sanskar sitting in middle as a boss. Malik "so people she is the star of ur company." Said malik n swara greeted them all.
"So start miss. Swara" said Mr. Martin, one of the cilents. "sorry to interrupt sir but its Mrs. Swara" a smile took sanskar's face but he controlled. And swara started the song. (Imagine its rock version)
HUM BEWAFA HARGIS NA THE, PAR HUM WAFA KAR NA SAKE sanskar saw her . she continued
HUMKO MILI USKI SAZA HUM JO KHATA KAR NA SAKE she completed the paras. All clapped n praised her. She cried n feeling embaraced she left.
Sanskar also felt felt seeing her crying.

MAHESHWARI HOUSE

Laksh came followed by sanskar. They was shocked to see ragini n palak cring very loudly. Laksh got it that they were faking it.
Annapurna, sujata, dp , parineeta were there consoling them. Sanskar came to ragini , laksh was there he laughed "meri nautanki" n controlled his laughter n came.
"Kya hua ragini palak or tum ro kyun rhe ho" sanskar asked n they started crying more loudly. "Kuch btao to" sanskar shouted. "Hum b kbse puch re h btate Hi nai" Annapurna said. Sanskar bent to palak "kya hua palak btao mujhe" palak fakely wiped her tears "papa maa ... " ragini pinched her secretly "ouch, I mean nai maa le aao papa," sanskar was shocked at palak's demand. "Han sanskar swara to dhokebaaz nikli ap dusri shaadi kr lijiye meri palak k lie.." Ragini cried shouting. "Vese je chori theek keh ri sanskar tujhe is bar sochna chahie" said sujata.
"Mom nai" n he was abt to go "sanskar agr apne hmari palak k lie itna nai kia to hum " ragini took a rat kill bottle "ise kha lenge" laksh was almost abt to die seeing her class drama. She brought bottle to her mouth sanskar ran "nai ragini tum pagl ho gai ho kya" ragini made puppy face. "Hmari bchi k khushi chahie Hume" ragini hugged palak winking to her. "Lucky tu smjha ise" sanskar turned to laksh. "Rat kill khane se kya kuch hoga" sanskar added. "Hnn pet k chuhe Mar ri hogi" laksh whispered n giglled. "Kya kha tune" asked sanskar. "Nai kuch nai Bhai" he turned to ragini n threw the bottle away. "Bhai man jaie na fr isme burai Hi kya h" sanskar saw all of them who were supporting ragini. "OK ok" he said n went to his room.
Ragini laksh n palak winked to each other.

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Thanksss for ur responses
Dedicated to my Sharon (shoru)
Sorry u all hv to wait
Love
Niyati

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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
luved it
ab laksh ragini se luv krta h
nd ragini palak nd laksh ke all moments nd their nautanki 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
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Nia!!! Thank you dear for dedicating this part to me.. 😳

Loving this RagLak. And Palak to itni cute hai!!! Ragini ko hi dara rahi hai.. genes i guess!!😉😆

Finally Laksh apologized for his immature act. Hope we dont get any more surprises with SwaLak..

RagPaLak drama should really be called nautanki.. Rat poison!! Woh bhi Nayi Mummy ke liye.. kiska idea hai ye??

Suj toh ninth cloud se bhi upar hogi.. nayi bahurani jo milegi.. what if she turns out to be Swara, creditting to the Nautanki RakPaLak?? 😆😲

Lots of love to you Nia!!!

Cheers
Sharon
Edited by Sparkler8 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
superb part...
luv de bonding between ragini nd palak..
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
omg
this was super adorable update...
laksh nai swara sai maafi maang li wow
and then ragini palak and laksh i love this trio what a plan...
and the ending was way too cuteee...
rat kill bottle woww.. palak toh aek dum apni maasi maa jaisi hai .. full on nautanki ... wah wah

carry on behna
you are doing great

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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: neelzzz

luved it

ab laksh ragini se luv krta h
nd ragini palak nd laksh ke all moments nd their nautanki 🤣

Thank u so much .. I M glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Porkalai2892

superb part...
luv de bonding between ragini nd palak..
thanks for pm

Thankss alot dear keep reading😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: yusu1993

omg

this was super adorable update...
laksh nai swara sai maafi maang li wow
and then ragini palak and laksh i love this trio what a plan...
and the ending was way too cuteee...
rat kill bottle woww.. palak toh aek dum apni maasi maa jaisi hai .. full on nautanki ... wah wah

carry on behna
you are doing great

Thank u so much yusu...
Ya palak is ragini's ditto 😆
I loved ur cment thank again
Love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Ragini and palak's nautanki...
Superb..

Loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

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