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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update for my shoru (Sharon)
CHAPTER 5

Next day in swara's hotel room.

Swara was standing near the window with her guiftar, she tickled the strings. The very moment ragini , laksh n palak came there. She knew ragini was supposed to come but she lost in her own world , music was heal for all her miseries.
Aisa lga mujhe pehli dafa, tanhan me ho gai yaarra
She tickled the strings well. (She remembered how she went away from sanskar n her world went empty, tears made way from her eyes.)
hoo, aisa lga mujhe pehli dafa tanha me ho gai yara , hun pareshan si me, ab ye kehne ke lie , tu jaruri sa h mujhko zinda rhne k lie
(She remembered how here only they toppled on each other,)
She shut her eyes , tears showed her pain.
Ragini too cried seeing her sister in pain.laksh consoled her , palak too cried.
Dhadke aankhon mein dil mera
Jab qareeb aaun tere
She remembered how sanskar kissed her for the frst time. She was denying but after their confession he forcefully placed his lips on hers. N she lost in it.
Mm.. dekhoon main jab bhi aaina
Haan tu hi roobaroo rahe mere
She imagined sanskar
Ishq ki mauj mein aa
Aaja behne ke liye
Tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
sa hai mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
aa.. tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
sa hai mujhko (sa hai mujhko)
zinda rehne ke liye (zinda rehne ke liye)
Tu zaroori..
Swara was stopped to see ragini laksh n palak there.
"Tum sb yhn" she was about to remove guitar wen ragini told her to complete . swara cried n started again , music was their life.

Maangu na koi aasmaan do sitaron ka jahaan
Banja tu mera humsafar na mujhe chahiye koi muqaam
Dil hi kaafi hai tera mere rehne ke liye
Only one thing was in her mind sanskar she cried breaking all the boundaries of so called strongness. But still she continued.
Tu zaroori sa hai mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
Ho.. tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
aa hai mujhko (sa hai mujhko)
zinda rehne.. (zinda rehne..)
Tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
sa hai mujhko
zinda rehne ke liye
Tu zaroori..
All the way laksh was cursing him , he wanted to die for giving swara so much pain. He wanted to correct it all.
"Swara" ragini went to her n hugged her tight. Swara was still sobbing hard. Laksh n palak was watching this. "Laksh palak ko bhr le jaie , hum ate h" said ragini to him cz palak was crying hard seeing her maa n mumma cry. Laksh noded n took palak out.
"Chachu maa or mumma kyun to re the" she said sobbing to laksh. "Vo kya na palak bht time me dono mile h na islie." He lied to the lil girl n hugged her.
"Swara kya BAAT thi aisi Jo tum" ragini looked at swara for answer. But no swara realised that ragini n laksh were happy for sake of her happiness she cnt ruin ragini's life. "Kuch nai ragini" she stood up n wiped her tears. "Jo b ho swara hume tumhe kuch batana tha, " swara saw her. "Vo swara humne bht koshish ki lekin sanskar nai mane, par hum fr b koshish.." Swara dint liked y sanskar dint agreed. Ragini turned away from her n giggled seeing her plan working. Palak n laksh came in.
Palak came to swara "maa tum ro kyun ri thi" she wiped her tears. "Kuch nai beta batao papa kese h" swara smiled to her. Palak looked at ragini n she winked to palak n she got wat she was supposed to do. "Vo to bht happy h maa, pta h nai maa ane vali h meri papa ne kha" palak got excited. Swara felt a pang. Really sanskar was getting married again did he hate her dat much.? N palak her daughter is also delighted to hv her new maa. Tonnes of questions flooded her mind. Swara turned to ragini "ragini ye sb" ragini holded her shoulder. "Swara I know but yai sch h" she turned to control her smile. "Hum fr b ek last time sanskar ko manane ki koshish krenge, lekin hum pakka nai keh skti hume maaf krdo hmari bhn" ragini was sure of her plan she lied to her. Giggling to other side.
"Lekin sanskar aisa kese" she remembered all her moments with him, n sat on bed with a thud. "Acha swara hm chalte h, kal hum or palak tumhe market me milenge OK" she kised swara head n left.
Swara lost her balance n sat on floor crying to the core "sanskar..." she yelled. Pain was visible her lips twiched.
"I love u sanskar ..." she cried "I love u.." She almost broke. Ragini was out hearing that "Hume maaf krdena swara ye sb hum tumhare lie KAR rhe h, " she cried n laksh hugged her "sab theek hoga ragini hum unhe milva k rhenge" ragini felt secure in his arms so she want her sister to be that safe in her husband's arms. Palak hugged laksh's legs "Chachu maa ajaegi na" ragini went to her n huged her she was supposed to do this for swara n palak.

MAHESHWARI MANSION

Sanskar came from office to find some people sitting there. Sujata came running to him "chore je kavita ke parivar vale h, there rishte k lie aae h" sanskar saw sujata in disbelief. He cnt marry anyone he know he still love swara but palak n ragini's cry stopped him there , he wanted n will do it for her daughter. He went n sat beside kavita n gave her a fake smile. "Je h mahra chora sanskar aji naam k jesa Hi sanskari h" sanskar chuckled at her mother's flaunt.
Then only laksh n ragini came with palak. "Laksh ye sb kya Ho ra h" ragini saw laksh in shock. "Mujhe nai pta ragini," laksh was too in shock.
"Arey je dekho je h mahre chore ki chori palak" sujata came to palak "palak je h thari nai maa" palak raised her brows. "Kyaa" she turned to ragini n ragini n laksh went in shock. "Ragini dekh thari hone vali jethani kavita" ragini gulped hearing to sujata , the earth beneath her legs almost parted. "Kya .. Ye ap kya keh rhi h Chachi ji" sujata turned to her. "Tu pagal h kya ragini, kal tu Hi to..." laksh turned to ragini. "Hnn chachi ji vo lgta h bhul gai, bht acha kia apne" sujata smiled to laksh. She walk up to sanskar n sits there.
"Laksh ye to hmare plan ka hissa nai tha, ab ye kavita kaun h ab to bus ek actor hire krne vale the na" ragini pinched laksh's shoulder. "I know ragini even I M shocked lekin ab kya kre" they both went mump. It was not there plan n it was actually happening. "Bhai nai manenge dekhna" said laksh. Ragini saw in hope.

"To beta rishta pakka," asked kavita's mom. Kavita was a simple sweet girl very down to earth n had accepted sanskar with his past.
"Ji maa" she shyed. Sanskar was dieing at every moment. "Chore tu b bta de ab" said sujata. Sanskar closed his eyes just to see swara's smiling face. No he cnt do that his heart said . he opened his eyes n saw palak n ragini who were crying for sanskar's better life. "OK ma" n he left.
Ragini saw laksh in anger "mujhe lga mana krenge" laksh bit his tongue. "Vese ye sb tumhari Hi vjh se ho ra h, itna melodrama kisne krne ko kha tha" shouted laksh. "Hume kya pta tha aisa ho jaega." Ragini made puppy face. "Acha abi pehle kl ka plan kro , ye fr dekhte h" laksh said n both went to room.


sanskar's room
He sat on bed blank his world was empty. His swara was not with him. He still loved her but wat she did was blunder. He stood up in anger threw the materials on the nearby table.
"I hate u swara," he cried "I hate u...aaa... aa" he fell . his life was of no use now. He was abt to marry someone else.

RagLak's room
"Mumma but maa papa milenge kese" said palak seeing ragini n laksh roaming to n fro in opposite direction wen both collided. "Yaaa" said RagLak . "laksh ap kya kr rhe h" ragini touched her head. "Tum kya kr rhi ho" he did the same.
"Oho mumma Chachu ap kb bde hoge" palak said. RagLak smiled lovingly. "Arey palak hum soch rhe kese kya kre" said ragini. "Kal hum papa ko b market le chalte h, mumma fr ma or papa mil lenge hum chup jaenge" laksh n ragini saw her in disbelief , she was intelligent man more than them , they went to kiss her cheeks wen she withdraw her from btwn n laksh's lips pecked on ragini's . they both parted immediately. "Palak" exclaimed laksh , ragini was turning pink. Palak clapped. "Ye mumma Chachu kissi ho gai" laksh holded her n started tickling her. "U naughty." Ragini said.

Next day,
Sanskar's room.

"Papa chalke na humare sth PLZZZ" palak tried to convince him. "Ragini laksh ko le jao, mera kain Jane ka man nai h" ragini chuckled seeing him. "Vo sanskar laksh busy h ap chalie na plzzz" sanskar agreed n they made their way to market.

Market
"Sanskar ap yai rukie hum or palak ate h abi" ragini dint even listened to sanskar n flew away with palak. "Ragini suno tu, ragini b na kbi kbi bht ajib harkate krti h" sanskar rubbed his forehead. "Ab me kya krun" he started walking towards the road wen he saw swara coming lost in her world n a truck was approaching her. Sanskar stood there "swara hato" he shouted but she dint listened she was lost in her own world. She was about to met with truck wen sanskar holded her waist n flew her away in no time. "Aaa" swara simply shouted. She hugged sanskar in fear. She was breathing heavily .

Khudaya ve, haiii aaahh...
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb.
Sanskar too hugged her tightly. He felt fear of losing her. They kept hugging for some minutes.

Khudaya ve...
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb.
Dil ke kareeb laaya,
Dil ka naseeb re -dil me kareeb laya dil ka naseeb re
Swara managed to see him. Still tightly cluchting his shirt. Sanskar saw her tears made way frm their eyes. Sanskar saw her still shivering. "Tum pagl ho kya, kuch ho jata to" he again took her in her embrace as his life depended on her. Swara cried seeing him caring for her. He still care.

Khudaya ve, haiii..
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb re,
Khudaya ve, haiii..
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb re...[B]
Sanskar moved his hands on his bare back. He broke the hug cupped her face. "Road me nai ata kya" swara saw his care with tears. There was smile on swara's face.

[B]Aaa...aaa...tana re tana...derena
Aaa...aaa...tana re tana...derena
Aaa...aaa...tana re tana...derena
"Tumhe hasi aari h meri jaan nikal gai thi" sanskar yelled holding her shoulders. "Kya krta me khn jata pagl ho tum bilkul" he was actually panicking. But sanskar realised wat be was saying. He jerked her away n turned "tum vapis kyun aai" these word's killed her.

Aakhon se khawab ruthe,
Apno ke saath choote,
Tapti hue rahon mein,
Pairon ke chaale phoote]
[Pyaase tadap rahe hai,
Saahil kareeb re
"Sanskar abi to tum" she said stamering "kya abi u know wat swara Bose I hate u I hate u alot" he yelled swara was let back.
Khudaya ve, haiii..
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb re,
Khudaya ve, haiii..
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb re...
"Islie shadi kr re ho" she said stamering. Tears made her weak. Sanskar felt pang , did he hurt her y was she hurt with that. ?

Ni sa re ni sa re re ga re ga re re ga re,
Ma ga re sa ma ga re sa ma ga re sa...
"Tumhe Jo sochna h socho" n he left wiping his tears. But as he was about to go swara fainted "sanskar" he just managed to whisper. He turned in shock. "Swara" he ran to her . he took her head on on his lap. Wat he was doing to her wat she did to her was he punishing her or genuinely marrying kavita for palak . he cupped swara's face "utho swara" he cried.

Aansu namak se lage,
Rishte hai kachhe dhaage,
Raite pe apne saaye,
Khud se kyu durr bhaage
Swara was silent sanskar could see she was pale. He took her in his arms. .

Kheech ke humko laaye,
kahan pe rakeeb re
Sanskar saw swara lieing in her arms , tears were flowing frm her eyes. She was in pain , y but she left me. He hugged her tight. She was lieing unconscious in his arms.

Khudaya ve, haiii..
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb re,
Khudaya ve, haiii..
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb re...
Dil ke karib aaya dil ka naseeb ve
Ragini saw swara she dint expected any such thing. "Swara" she ran to her. "Sanskar kya hua swara ko " he was brought to senses. "Ragini ise ghar leke chalte h , doctor ko bulata hun me." Said sanskar. "Papa maa ko kya hua" sanskar saw her princess n consoled her.

MAHESHWARI HOUSE
Kavita n family were there for lunch." Bus me to chahu ki mahri bahu jaldi se aa jae" said sujata n kavita blushed. The very moment sanskar stormed in with swara in her arms. All were left shocked.

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Niyati

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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Superb thanks for pm. Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Res
Oh no main late ho gayi

Unres

Nia, thank you for the update!!

We think alike, no doubt! Actually i told you na I have one update based on Swara's bday party where i was thinking of recreating Sanskaar's engagement performance. So i had two songs in mind.. was in confusion as to which one to choose. And guess what- one of those songs is Tu Zaroori. Now that you have used it here i will have to go with the other song now.

You have written so clearly the flashes Swara is having..
Were they in that hotel room before?☺️
The confession and the first kiss.. the most beautiful memories that are making her cry now..
Good that Laksh is guilty of his acts.

Ragini knows right that Laksh has separated SwaSan??

Hmm.. toh this nautanki trio is playing a double game.. interesting.. mazaa aayega.

Par Sujju ne toh Pani phenk diya inke planning pe. Yeh Kavita kaha se tapak padi.
Sanskaar aur Sanskaari [:=))] ROFL!! Swara se poocho kitna sanskaari hai ki confession ke baad hi first kiss loot li.

I can actually imagine Nautanki Trio NT going white as sheet seeing their plans disturbed..

I feel bad for Sanskaar. Iss sab mein bechara phas gaya.. maa, beti, biwi, bhai, saali ne milke use kahi ka nahi choda.. Palak tu hi meri umeed hain.

Loved RagLak nok jhok. Palak toh poori Swara pe gayi hai.. kaha kaha ke plans aate hain inke dimaag mein..

For the next part, can i pls pinch Palak's cheeks? She is so adorable.. Yayy! Mumma Chachu ki kissin ho gayi..

Yeh accident kahi NT ka plan toh nahi??

The milan ki ghadi aas so romantic.. dono ik dusre ke bahon mein, ik duste ke aankhon mein.. haaye!!!
The confrontation itself with that bg was so emotional.. rula diya mujhe..

At MM, Sujju is already in zoro-shoro tayyari for nayi naveli marwari bahu jab uske chore ne uski heart attack aur apne heart mein rahne wali ko ghar le aaya woh bhi baahon mein uthaake..

In continuation, i am sooo expecting to Sujju faint in Sujju style "Sanskaaar!!!" ROFL..

I am going to watch this space like a hawk for the next update.

Bahut lamba ho gaya na.. koi nahi.. an update after so long and that too so good.. banta hai.

Loads of Love
Sharon

Edited by Sparkler8 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
lovely update
continue soon
thank you for pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
this ff is like really the best...
ragini and palak are my favoritesss
the way palak says mumma to ragini i mean you proved that "maasi nai dia maa jaisa pyar"

lovely update...
but plan backfire kar gaya hai
lets see ab kia hota hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
awww this is very nice and beautiful.
please update soon.
and PM me as well.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Beautiful update
Hope Swasan reunite soon
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: neelzzz

Heheehe
Awsm 1
Lo aa gyi nayi mummy swara

😆 its really gona break the earth under sujata's legs...
Here is also a twist
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Res

Oh no main late ho gayi

Unres

Nia, thank you for the update!!

We think alike, no doubt! Actually i told you na I have one update based on Swara's bday party where i was thinking of recreating Sanskaar's engagement performance. So i had two songs in mind.. was in confusion as to which one to choose. And guess what- one of those songs is Tu Zaroori. Now that you have used it here i will have to go with the other song now.

You have written so clearly the flashes Swara is having..
Were they in that hotel room before?☺️
The confession and the first kiss.. the most beautiful memories that are making her cry now..
Good that Laksh is guilty of his acts.

Ragini knows right that Laksh has separated SwaSan??

Hmm.. toh this nautanki trio is playing a double game.. interesting.. mazaa aayega.

Par Sujju ne toh Pani phenk diya inke planning pe. Yeh Kavita kaha se tapak padi.
Sanskaar aur Sanskaari [:=))] ROFL!! Swara se poocho kitna sanskaari hai ki confession ke baad hi first kiss loot li.

I can actually imagine Nautanki Trio NT going white as sheet seeing their plans disturbed..

I feel bad for Sanskaar. Iss sab mein bechara phas gaya.. maa, beti, biwi, bhai, saali ne milke use kahi ka nahi choda.. Palak tu hi meri umeed hain.

Loved RagLak nok jhok. Palak toh poori Swara pe gayi hai.. kaha kaha ke plans aate hain inke dimaag mein..

For the next part, can i pls pinch Palak's cheeks? She is so adorable.. Yayy! Mumma Chachu ki kissin ho gayi..

Yeh accident kahi NT ka plan toh nahi??

The milan ki ghadi aas so romantic.. dono ik dusre ke bahon mein, ik duste ke aankhon mein.. haaye!!!
The confrontation itself with that bg was so emotional.. rula diya mujhe..

At MM, Sujju is already in zoro-shoro tayyari for nayi naveli marwari bahu jab uske chore ne uski heart attack aur apne heart mein rahne wali ko ghar le aaya woh bhi baahon mein uthaake..

In continuation, i am sooo expecting to Sujju faint in Sujju style "Sanskaaar!!!" ROFL..

I am going to watch this space like a hawk for the next update.

Bahut lamba ho gaya na.. koi nahi.. an update after so long and that too so good.. banta hai.

Loads of Love
Sharon

It's okkk ..
But itna bda😲
Actually I M really happy to read ur comment😳
Thanksss a lot shoru... It's fine any song wat matters is ur updates ..😉
Kissi kissi u know na I m so expert at it🤣
No ragini dint know anything.
But the way she will know hehe that will be a blast update for RagLak n SwaSan.
Sanskari .. Really vai to even I laughed at that
Nice name NT 😆 nautanki trio...
Kain in coming few updates u don't feel angry.. cz some surprise is there. Vo vala nai hnn😆 sort of blast kind
Dekh cz of ur comment quote b long ho gya
Love u shoru
🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: yusu1993

this ff is like really the best...

ragini and palak are my favoritesss
the way palak says mumma to ragini i mean you proved that "maasi nai dia maa jaisa pyar"

lovely update...
but plan backfire kar gaya hai
lets see ab kia hota hai

Yrrr I too hv started loving ragu cz of this. .. So sweet in actual she is yrrr cv's r really unfair

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