Swaragini FF- 'WHEN WE LOOKED BACK pt 7p 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hiii peeps...
I m NIYATI
I m new to ff world for swaragini, initially I have written ff on asya.
Now I'll try my hand on swaragini too 😛
Like and do comment your feedbacks.
Loads of love NIYATI

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hiii niyati...welcome to SR world...do continue ur ff...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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heyaa niyati..
i am up for it if ragini is positive and its raglak...
will read otherwise too..

best of luck behna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Edited by Niyatiswaragini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: yusu1993

heyaa niyati..

i am up for it if ragini is positive and its raglak...
will read otherwise too..

best of luck behna

Ya ya sure ragini will be positive ...
Thanksss bhna n do update ur ff soon 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swalak_shivya

hiii niyati...welcome to SR world...do continue ur ff...

Thanksss alot ... I'll surely continue

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This story line is settled 5 years ago

PROLOUGE

It was the Thursday morning and swara was sitting in balcony of her bandra House. She took her coffee mug from table. And settled her skirt n got up to roam in balcony. (She was wearing a blue long skirt with red crop top.)
Her phone rang. She took the call.
Swara:hello!, ya, ya, okk okk I'll be in Kolkata day after tomorrow. (She almost lost her senses hearing kolkata, the very city that is responsible for all her miseries. But this show was pretty important for her as being a rock star. Yes, rock star this was the only thing she bought frm Kolkata her talent and her guitar.
She smiled with tears in her eyes remembering how ragini n she hd done efforts to get their parents closer and all those things. But today she knew they both can't stand in front of each other.
She simply huffed and went inside to pack her bags. As she entered her room it had photo of her maa and baba with another photo of her dida and dadi. Below it was photo of her and ragini from durga pooja ( the last one thy celebrated together). She smiled and turned back to see her favorite photo of sanskar and swara ( she remembered this was taken on last karwachauth she had with him) she went upto that photo and kissed sanskar and hugged the photo. Tears rolled down her cheek and she wiped thm to b strong. But it looked she can't manage to do so. In these 4 years she had died everyday without her family and most without her soul RAGINI.

KOLKATA
MAHESHWARI house
RAGINI:"palak get up beta , u r supposed to go school" young hands hugged her with still eyes closed.
PALAK:"not today mumma please" the 4 years young girl said in her unacceptable mood.
Ragini smiled to her made her free .RAGINI:"jana to padega vrna papa gussa honge" palak opened her eyes and agreed with innocence.
LAKSH:"my doll ready to go" listening him palak jumped and hugged her.
RAGINI:"wat is this laksh h too are not ready yet" laksh twisted his tongue.
PALAK:mumma Chachu will get ready u don't wry." Thy smiled..


I'll soon update part 1
After proper responses
Eggs n tomatoes accepted.
Love Niyati
Edited by Niyatiswaragini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg..
palak is not raglak's daughter? then wo kiski beti hai?
i actually am shocked niyati..

is she ragsan daughter?
what is this?

i loved swara's part .. she love her sister immensely..
plzz btao mujhy yeh kia hai..

by the way cool..
forget about tomatoes because it is very interesting
carry on even if few people dislike it..


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: yusu1993

omg..

palak is not raglak's daughter? then wo kiski beti hai?
i actually am shocked niyati..

is she ragsan daughter?
what is this?

i loved swara's part .. she love her sister immensely..
plzz btao mujhy yeh kia hai..

by the way cool..
forget about tomatoes because it is very interesting
carry on even if few people dislike it..

Thanksss a lot yusu
Means a lot
Stick to it its gna be quite interesting ... I hope so 😉

LOVE NIYATI
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is interesting 😆
I have some doubts though which i think will get cleared with your updates 😊
Update soon 😳

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